Competition Competition Oct'08 (poet korner)

Competition Oct'08 (poet korner) · 10-01-2008

Asalam-o-Alikum

EID MUBARAK

piyaray doston poet comp. mein is bar lafz dia jarha ha
' chand '

Aap Ghazal ,Nazm ,Shair Ya Qita Likh Sakhtey hain

OR...........

Aap Sirf Apna Likha Hi Share Kar Sakhtey hain

Last Date 20 October Hai

Tamaam Sha'ir Hazrat o khwateen Participate Kijye Ga

Khush Rahiye

wasalam

**Mr Meer** · #2 10-01-2008

Nahi Dikh Raha Tha Chand Pakistan mein !!!
main Chatt per Giya Aur Eid ka ilaan ho giya

hahahhaha sorry plz dont Mind
topic dekhtay he jo mere mind mein Aya maine lkh dia

**Bheegi-Palkain** · #3 10-01-2008

Assalam-o-AlikukM WR WB

Nice Topic is baar mai bhi kosish karta hoon Nice Meer aynda chat per na jana wrna chand Ghrin bhi ho jay ga

FeamnAllah

**Frnds4ever** · #4 10-01-2008

LOl Meer Tauba Hai

Achi Amad Hui Hai Though

**aasmaan** · #5 10-02-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain

Assalam-o-AlikukM WR WB

Nice Topic is baar mai bhi kosish karta hoon Nice Meer aynda chat per na jana wrna chand Ghrin bhi ho jay ga

FeamnAllah

w salam..
thanx bheegi-Palkain.....zaroor kosis kijeay ga..

intizar raheay ga

Meer bht achay...

**Bheegi-Palkain** · #6 10-04-2008

Assalam-o-Alikukm Wr Wb

Aap ka Bazam mai kafi arsay k baad apna taza qalam paish kar rha hoon umeed hay pasnd ay ga

FeamnAllah

**aasmaan** · #7 10-04-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain

Assalam-o-Alikukm Wr Wb

Aap ka Bazam mai kafi arsay k baad apna taza qalam paish kar rha hoon umeed hay pasnd ay ga

FeamnAllah

w salam...wah janab...zabrdast..bht achi sharing hai..

bheegi-Palkain...kush raheay.

**Hasham** · #8 10-04-2008

wah ji wah BP bohat zabardast likha hai ............

**Bheegi-Palkain** · #9 10-04-2008

Adab !

bhot nawaizsh aap sab ki

FeamnAllah

**raz-e-dil** · #10 10-04-2008

salam

raz-e-dil added 1 Minutes and 27 Seconds later...

salam BP bht umdah sharing hain aap ki

aik adna si koshish hai umed hai passand aai gi

**aasmaan** · #11 10-06-2008

wah wah.............

pocha jo chand ne k koan ha teray sath
dheray se mein ne kaha mein or meri tanhaii

raaz e dil....... AAP NE BHT ACHI GHZAL LIKHI HA ..BHT SARI DAAD APA KE LEYE

**Hasham** · #12 10-06-2008

razedil kia baat hai jii bohat zabardast likha ap ney main or meri tanhaii ....

**raz-e-dil** · #13 10-06-2008

thanx bth of u .....................

**Gul** · #14 10-07-2008

ChaaNd

Yaad k GulistaaN mein ...Dhoop Jo sunehri hai
oss ko kesay roakoN mein
Saaz ka wo ek lamha jo
ChaaNd ban k otra tha,
Meray dil k aaNgan mein ..soaz ban k chaaya hai ..
har Aks sayaa hai
Khiyaabaan-e Oljhan mein , DhuNdh hein sabhi sapnay
Sapnay hein adhoora punn
Saarey Sapnay Tum le Loa
Raakh hoti Olfat ko janooN ki manzalein de do
mehak tu nahi baaqi ....Rang baqi rehnay do !
Aarzoo tu rehnay do..
Hasrat-e Gul ko mein kesay kesay giNwaaOun
Aasmaan-e Hasti pe jo chaaNd ka thikana thaa
wo hee bass apna thaa ..
Aaj wapic Loataa Do..............
ChaaNd Taarey Sab ley Loa
Khawab saray ley Loa
Phool saray tum ley loa
Khaar Mujh Ko Loataa Do
ChaaNd tha deewana pan..,,
Deewan-gii mujhey de do ...ChaaNd chahay tum rakh loa
Jheel mein larzta Aks-e Meh...Mujhay dey do .....
ChaaNd ki judaai mein be-bassi ki jo taRpan hai ..
Meray pass rehnay do
Be-bassi ko apni....Ruswaa-ii nahi DooN gee
labb apnay C looN gee
Yaad k GulistaaN ki Dhoop Jo Sonheri hai
Jalti AankhouN k Dukh...... oss mein saray jee looN gee !

Judaii ka dard ab rooH ko nahiN dooN gee
Saray Dard jee LooN gee .....
Dard saaray sehnay ki ..Hiss mujh ko Loataaa Do..
EHsaass Mujh Ko Loataa Do..................!!

**Hasham** · #15 10-07-2008

^^very nice bohat accha likha ap nay

10-01-2008	#1
Competition Oct'08 (poet korner) aasmaan $@b@ Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 2,026 Thanks: 608 Thanked 679 Times in 329 Posts aasmaan 10-01-2008 Rating: (0 votes - average) *Asalam-o-Alikum* *EID MUBARAK* *piyaray doston poet comp. mein is bar lafz dia jarha ha* *' chand '* *Aap Ghazal ,Nazm ,Shair Ya Qita Likh Sakhtey hain* *OR...........* *Aap Sirf Apna Likha Hi Share Kar Sakhtey hain* *Last Date 20 October Hai* *Tamaam Sha'ir Hazrat o khwateen Participate Kijye Ga* *Khush Rahiye* *wasalam*
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