Competition Competition Oct'08 (poet korner) - Page 2

Competition Oct'08 (poet korner) · 10-01-2008

Asalam-o-Alikum

EID MUBARAK

piyaray doston poet comp. mein is bar lafz dia jarha ha
' chand '

Aap Ghazal ,Nazm ,Shair Ya Qita Likh Sakhtey hain

OR...........

Aap Sirf Apna Likha Hi Share Kar Sakhtey hain

Last Date 20 October Hai

Tamaam Sha'ir Hazrat o khwateen Participate Kijye Ga

Khush Rahiye

wasalam

**aasmaan** · #16 10-07-2008

bht umda ehsas mjhe lotadoo...

**raz-e-dil** · #17 10-07-2008

salam bht umdah eshas MASHALLAH

**Wasi Anjum** · #18 10-09-2008

**aasmaan** · #19 10-09-2008

aisa kuin krtay ho...
wah..bht khoob nazam kahi ha WASI....kush raheay

**neena789** · #20 10-10-2008

kaho wo chand kaisa tha,
jider sab kuch lutta aey,
jider ankhain gannwa aey,
kaha silaab jaisa tha, bohat chaha ka bach niklain, mager sab kuch baha aey.
kaho wo hijer kaisa tha,
kabi choo kar daikha osay,
tu tum na kia paya,
kaha bass aag jaisa, osay choo ker tu apni rooh, ya tann mann jalla aey.
kaho wo wassel kaisa tha,
tumay jab choo lia oss na,
tu kia ehsaas jaga tha,
kaha ik rastay jaisa, jider say bas guzerna tha, makaan lakin benna aey.
kaho wo chand kaisa tha,
falak say jo uter aya,
tumari ankhon main basnay,
kaha wo khawab jaisa tha, nahi tabeer thi oss ki,osay ik shaab sulla aey.
kaho wo ishq kaisa tha,
benna sochay samjay,
binna parkhay kia tum na,
kaha tettli kay rang jaisa,bohat kacha bohat anokha saa,jabi oss ko bulla aey.
kaho wo naam kaisa tha,
jissay sehraaon or chenchal
hawaon pay likha tum na,
kaha bas mosamon jaisa, najanay kis ghari, kis pal,kissi roo main mitta aey.
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**daishingb@y** · #21 10-11-2008

Assalam-o-Alikukm

door ufaq par wo adhorey chand ka manzar
wo aakhri raat main bhi udas tu bhi maghmom

janey kia soch k ham dono roey thy
janey kion ashk phoot behe thy

jahan par ham baitth kar roey thy
aaj wahan phool khiley hain

wo kal k aansoo aaj k phoooool
bas ye hi asasa hain jine ka dilasa hain

ALLAH HAFIZ

**emikhan** · #22 10-12-2008

Main 1st time ek be tuki si koshish kar rahi hon is compitition mein apni ek poem likhne ki,ye is qabil to nahi hai k compitition mein main isko send karti but maine socha k is tarah aap log ye to bataen ge k kya mujh main poetry likhne ki salahiat hai ya nahi....
Main aur Chand hain gehrey dost
Barson pehle ka qisa hai ye
ik chandni rat main dekha maine
Chand boht hai gumsum sa
laga mujhe tanha tanha sa
Maine jab uski udasi ka
sabab poocha to
Chand ye bola
charon taraf mere tanhai
koi nahi mera hamdam,mera dost
sab ko roz bulata hoon main
Chandni k hathon pegham deta hoon
k,"Aao!mujh se batain karo
koi meri baton ko suno
banto mujh se tanhai ko
Dukh sukh k koi qisse kaho"
Magar koi aata he nahi,
koi mujhe sunta he nahi
Taare b roz nahi milte
sab boht masroof hain shayad
kis se main tanhai banton
behter hai main chup he rahoon
kisi se b ab bat na karoon.
Maine chand k dukh ko
apne dil par mehsoos kiya
ik jaise the hum dono
tanha tanha aur udaas
tab maine kaha," Aye Chand suno!
aao ban jaen hum tum dost,
ik dooje se baat karain ge,
ik dooje ki baat sunain ge
apne sare dukh sukh bantain ge"
Us ne suna jab ye to wo
phir se muskura uttha
Tab se le kar aaj talak
hum aapas mein batain karte hain
haan main sach kehti hoon na
tab se le kar aaj talak
Main aur Chand hain gehrey dost...........
Meri is poem ko bardasht karne k boht shukriya

**raz-e-dil** · #23 10-12-2008

hmmmmmmmmmmm nice acha lagraha hain kay new poets bhi aab medan main agay hain well bht achi try hain aap sab ki

**aasmaan** · #24 10-12-2008

bht khoob sub naey shairoon ne bhi achi sharing ki ha..
kush raheay

shukriya

**Wasi Anjum** · #25 10-15-2008

Sab ki sharings zabrdast hai

**Frnds4ever** · #26 10-15-2008

Wahh Janab Sab Ney Boht Acha Likha Hai !!

Gul Apki T'weel Nazm Ka To Jawab Nahi

Khush Rehi'e Sab
Likhte Rehi'e

**kamranaslam** · #27 10-19-2008

**RisingStar** · #28 10-19-2008

Waha! Waha! Bohat Umda Kaha hay aap sub nay

**aasmaan** · #29 10-20-2008

**raz-e-dil** · #30 10-20-2008

Saba ji tussi agayho hai kay chah gay ho .. Mashaallah bht hi umda

10-01-2008
Competition Oct'08 (poet korner) aasmaan $@b@ Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 2,026 Thanks: 608 Thanked 679 Times in 329 Posts aasmaan 10-01-2008 Rating: (0 votes - average) *Asalam-o-Alikum* *EID MUBARAK* *piyaray doston poet comp. mein is bar lafz dia jarha ha* *' chand '* *Aap Ghazal ,Nazm ,Shair Ya Qita Likh Sakhtey hain* *OR...........* *Aap Sirf Apna Likha Hi Share Kar Sakhtey hain* *Last Date 20 October Hai* *Tamaam Sha'ir Hazrat o khwateen Participate Kijye Ga* *Khush Rahiye* *wasalam*
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