Competition Competition Oct'08 (poet korner)

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EID MUBARAK


piyaray doston poet comp. mein is bar lafz dia jarha ha
' chand '


Aap Ghazal ,Nazm ,Shair Ya Qita Likh Sakhtey hain

OR...........

Aap Sirf Apna Likha Hi Share Kar Sakhtey hain

Last Date 20 October Hai

Tamaam Sha'ir Hazrat o khwateen Participate Kijye Ga

Khush Rahiye

wasalam

[aasmaan]

Originally Posted by neena789

kaho wo chand kaisa tha,
jider sab kuch lutta aey,
jider ankhain gannwa aey,
kaha silaab jaisa tha, bohat chaha ka bach niklain, mager sab kuch baha aey.
kaho wo hijer kaisa tha,
kabi choo kar daikha osay,
tu tum na kia paya,
kaha bass aag jaisa, osay choo ker tu apni rooh, ya tann mann jalla aey.
kaho wo wassel kaisa tha,
tumay jab choo lia oss na,
tu kia ehsaas jaga tha,
kaha ik rastay jaisa, jider say bas guzerna tha, makaan lakin benna aey.
kaho wo chand kaisa tha,
falak say jo uter aya,
tumari ankhon main basnay,
kaha wo khawab jaisa tha, nahi tabeer thi oss ki,osay ik shaab sulla aey.
kaho wo ishq kaisa tha,
benna sochay samjay,
binna parkhay kia tum na,
kaha tettli kay rang jaisa,bohat kacha bohat anokha saa,jabi oss ko bulla aey.
kaho wo naam kaisa tha,
jissay sehraaon or chenchal
hawaon pay likha tum na,
kaha bas mosamon jaisa, najanay kis ghari, kis pal,kissi roo main mitta aey.
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sorry ye poetry aap ki apni likhi hoii nhi ha is waja se comp mein shamil nhi kee jarhi ha.