Competition Poet Korner Competition July 2008

[aasmaan]

Asalam-o-Alikum

Poet Ka is Maah Ka Lafz Hai ASHK



Yahaan Sirf Apna Likha Share Kar Sakhtey hain

Nazm , Ghazal , Shair Ya Qitta Aap likh Sakhtey Hain

Last Date 20 JULY Hai

Tamam Sha'ir Hazrat Participate Kijye Ga

Khush Rahiye

Wa.Salaam

[Inn0c3nt_Eyes]

Ashko'n se giri woh shabnam
Teri Nazron mein ja bahh'i
Dard-e-Lehaar aisi uthi is dil mein
Keh Humare Dil mein utar gay'e.

[Shab-e-Firaaq]

Buhat Khoooob Inno

[neelam]

mere ashq kehetye hain har baar aik nayi kahani
mujh mein nahi taa;qat ke zaban sey izhaar karty
meri rooh ki bikhry kurchiyaan kyun koi chunta bhla
yeh saza mere naseeb ki hai nahi kisi ki mehrbaani

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-oA-likuM WRW B

wah bhot umda dono nay kawish paish ki ... Mashalah ab dono hi shiraa ho rahy ho

asy hi share karaty rahay

FeamnAllah

[kamranaslam]

maray zahen say ab naqoosh-e-yar mitanay do
kuch din ki khushian thi,ab ashk giranay do
ab ashk bahanay do

hum jal rahay hay aatish-e-baywafai may
ab tho hum ko tum aab-e wafa pilanay do
ab ashk bahanay do

zindagi say ho gayee nafrat itni kay bus
ab mot say hay hi apna pyar nibhanay do
ab ashk bahanay do

ashkoo ki is larhi may hay chupa howa jo
ab loogo ko woh haal-e-dil sunanay do
ab ashk bahanay do

jin ashkoo say mila tha Khuda, buzargoo ko
ab yar ko un ashkoo may mujhay bhi paanay do
ab ashk bahanay do

[raz-e-dil]

bht umdah sab ki kawsaihay bht hi amzaing thi kia baat hai meri to hi nahi horahi hian kuch likh nay ki

[aasmaan]

Originally Posted by raz-e-dil

bht umdah sab ki kawsaihay bht hi amzaing thi kia baat hai meri to hi nahi horahi hian kuch likh nay ki

raz e dil aap ne bhi zaroor likhna hai..

[Gul]

Ashk k Topic per ...
aik light se Koshish.
By Me@Gul

Wo teri aankhouN mein ruki barf
meri aankhouN se beh rahi hai ...
Mein lamha lmaha khud ko sametay ...
MotiyuN se qeemti ashk ...
palkoN mein paro rahi hooN
Phooloun se mehkatay aansoo..
hathailiyuN se chunn rahi hooN ....
Dard ko dard kehnay se dar rahi hooN
Jo teri aankhouN mein sard dhuwaN hai
oss k pighalnay se dar rahi hooN
Magar phir bhi yeh chahti hooN ..
K lamhouN k iss Sard dard ko mein marnay se pehlay jii tu jaaOn
Teray liyay Khushi k saagar ki tamnaah mein yeh ask pii tu jaaOn
Gar tu mehrbaani kar dey ....
Mera yeh dard kum tu kar dey
Thora sa Ro de .....!
Thora sa Ro de..!!!!!!!!

[raz-e-dil]

salam bht umdah kia baat hian gul ji

[Gul]

Originally Posted by raz-e-dil

salam bht umdah kia baat hian gul ji

Buhat shukriya ...!
Khush rahiyay !

[Wasi Anjum]

Bahot khoob Gul
Best of luck

[Wasi Anjum]

My Entry
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ashk behkar jo gire saare sitaare ban gaye
har taraf yaadoN ke tere woh nazaare ban gaye

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kaisa ye sailaab le aayii hai tanhaaii miree?
aansuoN ke is qadar aankhoN meiN dhaare ban gaye!

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usse milnaa to muqaddar meiN nahi hai kya kareiN!
aaj hum daryaa ke jaise do kinaare ban gaye

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cheen kar mujhse zubaaN meri use hai kya mila?!
lafz aakhir uske bhi to bas ishaare ban gaye

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jaane kab kaise hue un se yuN ANJUM aashnaa
jaane kab kaise woh hum ko sab se pyaare ban gaye

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