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Old 10-02-2008
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!* Shair-o-Shairi CompetitioN [October'08] *!

Assalam o Alakium !

Is Month Ka SOS Ka Topic Hai..."Shakhs"


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1. Tumam Members Sirf 1 Sharing ker Saktey HaiN


2. Poet Ka Naam Must Share Kerna Hai. beghair Poet k Naam K SharinG Competition Main Count Nahi Ki Jai'e Gi !!

3. Sharing Kerne Se Pehle, Apne Se Pehle Walay Member Ki SharinG Perhain Ta'k Aik Poetry Dobara Share Na Ho..Wo Competition Main Shamil Nahi Ho Gi Is Surat Main !!

4. Competiton ki Last Date 20 October Hai


Boht Shurkia
Wa'Salam
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Aha Boht Khoobsurat SharinGz All Of You !!

From My Side A Beautiful ghazal By My Favorite Poet!!!


Gum-Sum Hua ' Awaz ka Derya Tha Jo Ik Shakhs
Pathar b Nahi Ab Wo ' Sitara Tha Jo Ik Shakhs


Shaid Wo Koi Harf-e-Wafa Dhoond Raha Tha
Chehron Ko Baray Goar se Perhta Jo Ik Shakhs

Sehra Ki Tareh Deir se Pyasa Tha Wo Shaid
Badal ki Tareh Toot K Bersa Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Ae' Taiz Hawa Koi Khabar Us k Junoon Ki !
Tanha Safar-e-Shoq Pe Nikla Tha Jo Ik Shakhs?

Ab Akhri Satr'oon Main Kehin Nam Hai Us Shakhs Ka
Ahbaab Ki Fehr'st Main Pehla Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Hathon Main Chupai'e Hue Phirta Hai Ke'i Zakhm
Sheshay K Khilonon Se Behlta Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Mur' Mur' k Usay Daikhna Chahi'en Meri Aankhein
Kuch Door Muje Chorney Aya Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Ab Us Ney b Apn'a Liye Dunya k Qareenay
Say'e ki Rafaqat Se b Darta Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Har Zehan Main Kuch Naqsh-e-Wafa Chor' Giya Hai
Kehne Ko Bharay Shehr Main Tanha Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Munkir Hai Wohi Ab Meri Pehchan Ka Mohsin
Akser Muje Khat Khoon Se Likhta Tha Jo Ik Shakhs

Poet: Mohsin Naqvi
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Ik Shakhs Paas Reh Ke Bhi Samjha Nahin Mujhay
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Ik Shakhs Paas Reh Ke Bhi Samjha Nahi Mujhay
Is Baat Ka Malal He Shikwa Nahi Mujhay

Mein Os Ko Bewafai Ka Ilzam Kaisy Doon
Os Ne Tho Ibtada Se Hi Chaha Nahi Mujhay

Kya Kya Umeedein Bandh ke Aya Tha Samnay
Os Ne Tho Ankh Bhar k Bhi Dekha Nahin Mujhay

Pathar Samajh K Paon Ki Thokar Liya
Afsoos Teri Ankh Ne Parkha Nahi Mujhay

Kab Teharna Tha Mujhko Hasan Aj Os K Pass
Acha Howa K Os Ne Bhi Roka Nahi Mujhay
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Barson ke baad dekha
By: Mohsin Gillani

Barson ke baad dekha, Aik shakhs Dilruba saa
Ab zehen mein naheen hai , per naam tha bhala saa

Ubroo khichey khichey sey, Aankhain jhuki jhuki see
Baatein ruki ruki see,Lehja thaka thaka saa

Alfaaz thay ke Jugnoo, awaaz ke safar mein
Bun jaaey jungalon mein jaisey ke Raasta saa

Khawabon mein khawab Uss ke,Yaadon mein yaad uss ki
Neendon mein ghul gaya ho jaisey ke rat-jaga saa

Pehley bhi zindagi mein, kitney hee log aaey
Woh her tarha sey lekin, auron sey tha juda saa

Agli muhabboton ne, woh na-muraadian deen
Taaza Rifaaqaton sey, Dil tha dara dara saa

Kuch yeh ke muddaton se, Hum bhi nahi thay roey
Kuch zeher mein bujha tha, ahbaab ka dilaasa

Ab such kahein tou yaaro, Hum ko khaber naheen thi
Bun jaaey ga qayamat, Aik waaqaya zara saa

Tewer thay berukhi key, andaaz dosti key
Woh ajnabi tha laikin, lagta tha Aashna saa
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Re: !* Shair-o-Shairi CompetitioN [October'08] *!

Hui hai shaam to aankhon mein bas gaya phir tuu

Hui hai shaam to aankhon mein bas gaya phir tuu
kahan gaya hai mere shahar ke musaafir tuu

bahut udaas hai ik shaks tere jaane se
Jo ho sake to chalaa aa usi ki Khaatir tuu

Meri misaal kay Ek nakhl-e-khushk-e-sahara hoon
Te
ra Khayaal ki shaakh-e-chaman kaa taair tuu

Main janta hoon ke duniya tujhe badal degi
Main manta hoon ke aisa nahin bazahir tuu

Hansi khushi se bichhard jaa agar bichhardna hai
Ye har maqaam pe kya sochata hai aakhir tu

'Faraz' tuune use mushkiloon mein daal diyaa
zamaanaa saahib-e-zar aur sirf shaayar tuu



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Barson ke baad dekha
By: Mohsin Gillani

Barson ke baad dekha, Aik shakhs Dilruba saa
Ab zehen mein naheen hai , per naam tha bhala saa

Ubroo khichey khichey sey, Aankhain jhuki jhuki see
Baatein ruki ruki see,Lehja thaka thaka saa

Alfaaz thay ke Jugnoo, awaaz ke safar mein
Bun jaaey jungalon mein jaisey ke Raasta saa

Khawabon mein khawab Uss ke,Yaadon mein yaad uss ki
Neendon mein ghul gaya ho jaisey ke rat-jaga saa

Pehley bhi zindagi mein, kitney hee log aaey
Woh her tarha sey lekin, auron sey tha juda saa

Agli muhabboton ne, woh na-muraadian deen
Taaza Rifaaqaton sey, Dil tha dara dara saa

Kuch yeh ke muddaton se, Hum bhi nahi thay roey
Kuch zeher mein bujha tha, ahbaab ka dilaasa

Ab such kahein tou yaaro, Hum ko khaber naheen thi
Bun jaaey ga qayamat, Aik waaqaya zara saa

Tewer thay berukhi key, andaaz dosti key
Woh ajnabi tha laikin, lagta tha Aashna saa

yeh Mohsan Gilaani Koan hein ?


Anyway ......Yeh Ghazal .....
Ahmad Faraz ki hai ..baby_princess33...
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Correct Kerne Ka Boht Shurkai GUL

And Guys, Poet ka Naam Daine Ka Kaha Hai To Iska Ye Matlab Nahi k Ap Kisi b Shairi k Sath Shayr ka Tag Laga Lain Apni Marzi Ka...

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