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  1. 12-30-2012 #1
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    bicchaR ke tujh se


    bicchaR ke tujh se terii yaad ke nagar aaye
    ke ek safar se ko’ii jaise apne ghar aaye



    hamaare saath rukegii hamaarii tanhaa’ii
    tumhaare saath gaye jo bhii dar-ba-dar aaye

    gumaaN bhaTakne lage the pas-e-nigaah magar
    chiraaGh duur se jalte hu’e nazar aaye

    chhaTaa Ghubaar to raahoN meN kitne phuul khile
    bajii jo Daff to fasiiloN pe kitne sar aaye

    bahaar raas na aayii qafas-nashiinoN ko
    uRaan bhuul gaye juuNhii baal-o-par aaye

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    Mulaqaatein musalsal hon to dil-chaspi nahi rehti,

    Bare dil-chasp hote hain ye be-tarteeb yaarane.......!!!
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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    Ji bahut khub!....Aap ka apna kalaam hay?

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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    thanx ..nahi mera nahi hai

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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    Quote Originally Posted by Fari Pari View Post
    thanx ..nahi mera nahi hai
    Jin ka bhi hay, bahut umda!.....agar aapko shauq hay to likha karein na?
    Bichhar kay tujh se udaas rahta hoon
    Sadion yunhi mehw e yaas rahta hoon!

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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    Khoob...........

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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    Mulaqaatein musalsal hon to dil-chaspi nahi rehti,

    Bare dil-chasp hote hain ye be-tarteeb yaarane.......!!

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    Re: bicchaR ke tujh se

    Bahut achhi ghazal kaabile gaur.
    Shukriya.

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    bht khoob...............

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    bht zabardast sharing..........

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