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    24 december

    aslam-o-allkium kesay aap tamam dost ....?

    insan ki zindagi mai kuch din bht khas hotay hain jinhai khas rkhnay mai faida nahi hota nqsan hi hota hai mager wo din khas hotay hain or khas hi rehtay hain
    aisay hi meri zindagi ka khas tareeen din 24 decembr hai is hi din k hisab say pehlay bi nigarshiat paish ki is bar bhi ...........
    mai nazm go nahi ....................


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    جشن منائے
    اور اب ہم ، تم
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    سوگ منا رہے ہیں




    نجیح الدین راز

    walaikum us salam

    Najeeh uddin raz



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    Re: 24 december

    Hmm Buhat khoob

    Acha likha hai...

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    Re: 24 december

    گزرے برسوں۔۔۔۔۔
    ہم نے مل کر
    شان سے کتنے
    جشن منائے
    اور اب ہم ، تم
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    bohat khoub.........
    jari rakhain

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    Re: 24 december

    assalaam-o-alekom
    bhooot khooooob raz g..


    اور اب ہم ، تم
    آج کے دن ہی
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    bhooot he ghamgeen fiqra he ...


    likhte rahen ..

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    Re: 24 december

    aakhri ittilaat tak aap ne


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    nahi the.......ye tabdeeli kab runuma hui?

    saadgi se magar dil ke khayaal ko acha bayaan kia hai aap ne...
    shukria shair karne ke liye...

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    Re: 24 december

    Quote Originally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy View Post
    aakhri ittilaat tak aap ne


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    nahi the.......ye tabdeeli kab runuma hui?

    saadgi se magar dil ke khayaal ko acha bayaan kia hai aap ne...
    shukria shair karne ke liye...
    akhri itla bht pehlay ki ietla hai
    aab hum najeeh uddin raz hogaye hain.......................

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    Re: 24 december

    Quote Originally Posted by sweet eyes View Post
    assalaam-o-alekom
    bhooot khooooob raz g..


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    bhooot he ghamgeen fiqra he ...


    likhte rahen ..
    shukirya .......................

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    Re: 24 december

    hmm nice khush raho hamesha,,,,

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    Re: 24 december

    bohat khoob umda takhleeq ha
    khush rahoo

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    Re: 24 december

    Wah bhayy wah........

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    Re: 24 december

    memories ke huwale se aik bohat hi pyari poem.....though it is full of sadness but same time nicely expressed!!!! thank u so much for sharing ....blessings

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    Re: 24 december

    tamam dosto ka behad shukriya

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    Re: 24 december

    achi naz'm Najeh,
    isko hum "Was'l Anniversary dedication" bhi keh saktay hain...
    likhtay raho..khush raho...ameen

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    Re: 24 december

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    achi naz'm Najeh,
    isko hum "Was'l Anniversary dedication" bhi keh saktay hain...
    likhtay raho..khush raho...ameen
    Farukh bahi.........
    Khwaish-e-wasl dil mai thi pahem
    Hijr mai raz mar gaya akhir

    kash mai isay wasl dedication keh pata

    nazm passand karnay ka shukriya........................ buht buht

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    Re: 24 december

    Bohat achi nzam hai Raaz ....december tu sara hi sb k liye sad hota hai Waisy ...or aap k liye 24 dec ... Bohat achy alfaz mai apny emotions ko byaan kia .. Really nice ...

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    Re: 24 december

    mashallah najeeh khubsurat nazak kasheed farmaai subhanallah daad qabool ho...............

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    Dil Ke Bayaan Khoob Kiya Aap Ne

    Khush Rahein

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    Re: 24 december

    Quote Originally Posted by diya Imaan View Post
    Bohat achi nzam hai Raaz ....december tu sara hi sb k liye sad hota hai Waisy ...or aap k liye 24 dec ... Bohat achy alfaz mai apny emotions ko byaan kia .. Really nice ...
    shukirya .....................hamesha khush rahay

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