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    فرمائشی تحاریر

    السلام و علیکم


    آپ تمام حاضرین محفل کو یہ خواہش کبھی نہ کبھی ضرور رہی ہوگی، کے آپ ، آپ کے من پسند مصنف سے آپ کے کسی بھی من پسند عنوان پر کچھ لکھوانا چاہتے ہوں ، یا آپ کے ذہن میں کوئی ایسا عنوان ہو کہ جس کو ہر ماہ ہونے والے مقابلے میں شامل کیا جا سکے، تو آپ یہاں فرمائش کر سکتے ہیں، اور یہ بھی بتا سکتے ہیں کہ آپ یہ تحریر کن سے لکھوانا چاہتے ہیں،
    میرا ماننا یہ ہے کہ، ضروری نہیں کے مصنف آپ کی سوچ کو اپنے الفاظ میں کاغذ پر اتار دے، کیوں کے ہر مصنف کا اپنا نظریہ ہوتا ہے، اپنی سوچ ہوتی ہے، اور اپنا انداز ہوتا ہے دنیا ، دنیا والوں اور دنیا داری کو دیکھنے کا، فرمائش آپ کی ہوگی، مگر ایک نئی سوچ، جو آپ کی سوچ سے یکسر مختلف بھی ہو سکتی ہے، وہ آپ کو پڑھنے کو ملے گی. مگر اگر آپ چاہتے ہیں کہ آپ کی فرمائش پر کوئی خاص بات ہو کہ جس پر مصنف اپنی سوچ کا رخ تبدیل کر لے، تو اسکو یہاں آپ کی فرمائش کے ساتھ ضرور ذکر کیجیے .


    ہمیں آپ کی فرمائش کا شدت سے انتظار رہے گا. شکریہ .



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    اے اہل نظر ذوق نظر خوب ہے لیکن
    جو شے کی حقیقت کو نہ دیکھے وہ نظر کیا


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    Re: فرمائشی تحاریر

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    Aslamu Alaikum !

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    Khowab Adhury Hi Sehi, Khowaab Sahara Tou Hain....


    Hasday Wasdy Reho !
    ...main ne aap ki post just abhi daikhi hai..warna reply karne main itni dair nahi karti...sab se pehle toh dair se reply karne ke liye maazrat khuaah hoon..unwaan toh aap ne bohot acha muntakhib kia hai..........par aik anaari ko as a khilaari invite kar gaye hain...............lakin kion ke aap ne kaha hai toh aap ki baat radd toh nahi ki ja sakti...........INSHAALLAH...pehli fursat main zaroor likhoongi..

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    ...main ne aap ki post just abhi daikhi hai..warna reply karne main itni dair nahi karti...sab se pehle toh dair se reply karne ke liye maazrat khuaah hoon..unwaan toh aap ne bohot acha muntakhib kia hai..........par aik anaari ko as a khilaari invite kar gaye hain...............lakin kion ke aap ne kaha hai toh aap ki baat radd toh nahi ki ja sakti...........INSHAALLAH...pehli fursat main zaroor likhoongi..
    Aslamu Alaikum !

    Dair sy reply ki khair hy ji.... wo option tou pehly hi ap ko di ky Eid ky ba'd likh dain.....

    Hain ji Anaarri koun hy ji? Tussi? Wah ji.... FK Admin anaari logon ko Tag daiti hy bhala writers ka? Na anarri na khilarri bas Likhaari ban likh dio...

    Ok ji... waiting for your good writing....


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    اے رسولِ امیں، خاتم المرسلیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں
    ہے عقیدہ اپنا بصدق و یقیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں

    دستِ قدرت نے ایسا بنایا تجھے، جملہ اوصاف سے خود سجایا تجھے
    اے ازل کے حسیں، اے ابد کے حسیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں

    اے سراپا نفیس انفسِ دوجہاں، سرورِ دلبراں، دلبرِ عاشقاں
    ڈھونڈتی ہے تجھے میری جانِ حزیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں، تجھ سا کوئی نہیں


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    Re: فرمائشی تحاریر

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Silent~ View Post
    Aslamu Alaikum !

    Dair sy reply ki khair hy ji.... wo option tou pehly hi ap ko di ky Eid ky ba'd likh dain.....

    Hain ji Anaarri koun hy ji? Tussi? Wah ji.... FK Admin anaari logon ko Tag daiti hy bhala writers ka? Na anarri na khilarri bas Likhaari ban likh dio...

    Ok ji... waiting for your good writing....


    Thanks for attention.... Hasday Wasday Reho !
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    Re: The lost passanger

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    Assalamualaikum
    ye thread THE LOST PASSANGER musalmanon ki pasti k tanazir me diya gaya he.

    aj ka musalman ek bichrha hua musafir he.

    ap is topic per apne khayalaat ka izhaar kr sakte hn.is pasti k reasons or is k sadd e baab k lie kia kia iqdamaat uthai ja sakte hn is per bhi izhaar e khayal kr sakte hn
    .
    "The Lost Passanger" Unwan pasand aaya, promise nahi'n kerta keh kab laikin inshallah buhat jeld is per tumhai'n mairi tehreer perhney ko mil jaye gi,
    hamaisha khush aur salamet raho
    Ameen

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    Wadey key mutabiq tehreer hazir hey

    http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...%D8%B1-291100/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lost Passenger View Post
    "The Lost Passanger" Unwan pasand aaya, promise nahi'n kerta keh kab laikin inshallah buhat jeld is per tumhai'n mairi tehreer perhney ko mil jaye gi,
    hamaisha khush aur salamet raho
    Ameen
    wow...zaberdest...mai ne aj dekhi ap ki post..ap ne apna nick yahi rekh lia...or tehreer bi likh dali is per bhuuuut bhuuut shukria...mai is topic per her kisi se tehreer likhwana chahti t her kisi k khayalat maaloom krna chahti t....thank uu sooo much..

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    Quote Originally Posted by precious angel View Post
    wow...zaberdest...mai ne aj dekhi ap ki post..ap ne apna nick yahi rekh lia...or tehreer bi likh dali is per bhuuuut bhuuut shukria...mai is topic per her kisi se tehreer likhwana chahti t her kisi k khayalat maaloom krna chahti t....thank uu sooo much..
    agar aap sab ke khayalaat jaanna chahti hain...toh phir is unwaan par jald zaroor aap ko tamaam writers ki tehreerain parhne ko milaingi...

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    ye page kahan move ho gaya?

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    Re: فرمائشی تحاریر

    السلام و علیکم


    جناب میری یہ فرمائش خاص طور پر اور بہت سوچنے سمجھنے کے بعد ایک نئے ممبر سے ہے
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    کیسے ہیں..پوری کر رہے ہیں نا یہ فرمائش ؟


    آپ کے خیال میں دینی اور دنیاوی کامیابی میں کیا فرق ہے، اور ان دونوں کامیابیوں کو مد نظر رکھتے ہوئے آپ کو کیا لگتا ہے کہ کامیاب انسان کون ہے ؟اور عملی زندگی میں زیادہ اثر انداز کون ہے ، دینی یا دنیاوی کامیابی ؟



    آپ اس فرمائش کو آپ کا من پسند عنوان دینگے . جس کے لئے میں آپ کے علیحدہ سے ممنون ہونگی .
    تحریر کا شدت سے انتظار ....

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    Aslamu Alaikum !

    Adaab arz hain......


    @*~Princess Pari~*

    Please is topic per 3 ya 4 paragraph likh dain, 1,2 sy bi kaam chal jaey ga. Aap ki aasani per hay......

    " Toofaan ker rehaa tha mery azzam kaa tawaaf
    Dunya samjh rehi thi Kashti Bhanwer mein hay"



    Thank you in advance.

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    Re: فرمائشی تحاریر

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    Aslamu Alaikum !

    Adaab arz hain......


    @*~Princess Pari~*

    Please is topic per 3 ya 4 paragraph likh dain, 1,2 sy bi kaam chal jaey ga. Aap ki aasani per hay......

    " Toofaan ker rehaa tha mery azzam kaa tawaaf
    Dunya samjh rehi thi Kashti Bhanwer mein hay"



    Thank you in advance.

    Walikumsalam...................Janab...........!!!!!

    Jeetey Raho Bachey................
    3, 4 lines bhi nhi likhooon giAb aap apney soey hoey qalam ko jagaiye..........jo khwaab e khargosh key mazey le raha hey.................or Ab me nhi aap likhain gey..................Samjh aaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii .......SILENT..............Bol k Lab azaad hain terey..............

    Apna Thank u apney pass hi rakhain...................me nhi le rahi......

    Han to qalam sabhaliye...........

    UNWAAN hey..........

    Sardiyaan ,Barish,Shaam, Chaey Ka Cup...............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Shabaash ............jaldi se meri Farmaish poori karo...Teacher

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    کچّا سونا ہی
    !!...بنتا ہے کُندن

    اِک دِنِ نکھرے گا
    !!...سچّا ہے گر، فن

    کیسے روک سکے
    !!..خُوشبو کو گلشن

    امجد میرے ساتھ
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    Walikumsalam...................Janab...........!!!!!

    Jeetey Raho Bachey................
    3, 4 lines bhi nhi likhooon giAb aap apney soey hoey qalam ko jagaiye..........jo khwaab e khargosh key mazey le raha hey.................or Ab me nhi aap likhain gey..................Samjh aaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii .......SILENT..............Bol k Lab azaad hain terey..............

    Apna Thank u apney pass hi rakhain...................me nhi le rahi......

    Han to qalam sabhaliye...........

    UNWAAN hey..........

    Sardiyaan ,Barish,Shaam, Chaey Ka Cup...............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Shabaash ............jaldi se meri Farmaish poori karo...Teacher
    ab aaye silent pahaar ke neeche

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    Han to ROOMI sahab............Meri Farmaish...........!!!!!Unwaan hey...........

    Yaqeen-e-muhkam, Amal-e-Payham, Muhbat Fatah e Aalam
    Jihad-e-Zindagani main yeh hain Mardoon ki shamsheerain...............!!!!!


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    ab aaye silent pahaar ke neeche

    Ye tou leny kay dayny parr gaee..... Ruby je aap ki nagree mein koee sawaal yan'ee fermaesh bi menhgee parr gaee......

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    Quote Originally Posted by *~Princess Pari~* View Post
    Walikumsalam...................Janab...........!!!!!

    Jeetey Raho Bachey................
    3, 4 lines bhi nhi likhooon giAb aap apney soey hoey qalam ko jagaiye..........jo khwaab e khargosh key mazey le raha hey.................or Ab me nhi aap likhain gey..................Samjh aaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii .......SILENT..............Bol k Lab azaad hain terey..............

    Apna Thank u apney pass hi rakhain...................me nhi le rahi......

    Han to qalam sabhaliye...........

    UNWAAN hey..........

    Sardiyaan ,Barish,Shaam, Chaey Ka Cup...............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Shabaash ............jaldi se meri Farmaish poori karo...Teacher

    Lo jee mera koee Nadee Kanaary Tea Stall thoree hy...... is topic py likhon.....

    Yee tou ap ny apni sigi ka unwaan mujh per dal dyeaa.....

    Naa jee qalam sy likha tou computer ka disply kharab ho sakta hy haan type kerny kee koshish keron ga...... Cup Tea Chaa paanee.... shaam subho, sardee garmee barish dhoop..... Ye kia mehkmaa mosmiyaaat ky topic day deyaa....

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    Lo jee mera koee Nadee Kanaary Tea Stall thoree hy...... is topic py likhon.....

    Yee tou ap ny apni sigi ka unwaan mujh per dal dyeaa.....

    Naa jee qalam sy likha tou computer ka disply kharab ho sakta hy haan type kerny kee koshish keron ga...... Cup Tea Chaa paanee.... shaam subho, sardee garmee barish dhoop..... Ye kia mehkmaa mosmiyaaat ky topic day deyaa....
    .....................................................

    Aap ney bhi to meri Kashti ...........Toofan o Bhanwar me phansai thi.........

    Ab Bahaney mat Banaiye.....................Hamey to Tehreer chahiye aapki......................

    Bas aap ney Shru to kr di hey....................aagey aagey barhtey jaiye.....Barish Dhoop....Garaj
    Chamak......Badal...Hawa.......hahaha

    ............Na ro Bachey............Mahakam e mosmiyat k mutabiq ayenda chand ghantoo me Silent key Toofani Tears sey Sonami aany ka khadsha hey..................sab loag Hifazati band bandh lain..........

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    Aap ney bhi to meri Kashti ...........Toofan o Bhanwar me phansai thi.........

    Ab Bahaney mat Banaiye.....................Hamey to Tehreer chahiye aapki......................

    Bas aap ney Shru to kr di hey....................aagey aagey barhtey jaiye.....Barish Dhoop....Garaj
    Chamak......Badal...Hawa.......hahaha

    ............Na ro Bachey............Mahakam e mosmiyat k mutabiq ayenda chand ghantoo me Silent key Toofani Tears sey Sonami aany ka khadsha hey..................sab loag Hifazati band bandh lain..........
    Very good ye hoee na ustaniyon waali baat..... thory sy alfaaaz aur likh dain... kahani tou bany...... isy kehty hain baton baton mein ta'leem......


    Hass lo tusee menu Chaaa tay laaa kay......

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    Quote Originally Posted by *~Princess Pari~* View Post
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    Aap ney bhi to meri Kashti ...........Toofan o Bhanwar me phansai thi.........

    Ab Bahaney mat Banaiye.....................Hamey to Tehreer chahiye aapki......................

    Bas aap ney Shru to kr di hey....................aagey aagey barhtey jaiye.....Barish Dhoop....Garaj
    Chamak......Badal...Hawa.......hahaha

    ............Na ro Bachey............Mahakam e mosmiyat k mutabiq ayenda chand ghantoo me Silent key Toofani Tears sey Sonami aany ka khadsha hey..................sab loag Hifazati band bandh lain..........



    Aslamu Alaikum !


    Ye lain jee ap ki fermaesh per urgent tehreer..... ab jesi bi hy qabool ho haan islaah zerur ho .... Story likhna mujhy itna acha ni lagta jitna direct baat.... aur abi kuch dair pehly parha aap ka Hukam Naama tou ta'meel shuru ker dee....


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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Silent~ View Post
    Very good ye hoee na ustaniyon waali baat..... thory sy alfaaaz aur likh dain... kahani tou bany...... isy kehty hain baton baton mein ta'leem......


    Hass lo tusee menu Chaaa tay laaa kay......
    Kahani aisey nhi banti Teacher.................Sardiyaan..........Shaam.........Chaey.........Barish.........Dhoop..........Garaj ....Chamak.....Badal..........Hawa.................

    In me jo BLANKS hain unko fill karain................Poora jumla banain is sey...............aai samjh

    or Punjabi merey sar k ooper se guzar jati hey...............urdu me batain kiya likha hey.....

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    Re: فرمائشی تحاریر

    Quote Originally Posted by *~Princess Pari~* View Post
    Kahani aisey nhi banti Teacher.................Sardiyaan..........Shaam.........Chaey.........Barish.........Dhoop..........Garaj ....Chamak.....Badal..........Hawa.................

    In me jo BLANKS hain unko fill karain................Poora jumla banain is sey...............aai samjh

    or Punjabi merey sar k ooper se guzar jati hey...............urdu me batain kiya likha hey.....
    Haan je jee aa gaee samjh, fermaesh ker ky khud likhny kee...... jo boly derwaza kholy....

    Khalee jaga pur ker ky likh diya hy jee.......

    Matlab Aap hans lain mujhy chaey yan'ee Tea py laga ky.....

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