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Ji Rahay Hein Kamal Kertay Hein..
...JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN...
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Waahh Niha'et Umdaa Likha hai withluv
Likin last line....ufff
kapkpi si tari ho gai muje per perhte huee
MashAllah se Boht Umdaa likha hai, isi tareh likhte rahain...likin ache ends wale(rona aa jata hai aison per na)
Khush Rahain
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Never argue with an Idiot. They drag you down to their level & beat you with Experience !!
doobara parhnay ka Shukria..
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 2 Minutes and 47 Seconds later...
waqt nikalnay ka Behad Shukria..
bus ji zindagi to aisi si hi hai.. so jiske liye jitni talkh.. us ke liye waisa sa hi end..
meri deewangi pe iss qadar hairan hotay ho
mera nuqsaan to dekho, mohabbat gumsdhuda meri
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 2 Minutes and 55 Seconds later...
aap ki hosla afzai ka ehsaan mand hon.. aur jahan tak baat aisay end na kernay ki hai.. to ye mujhe nahi qudrat ko samjhayen..
jo dil pe guzarti hai raqm kertay rahen gey
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 1 Minutes and 11 Seconds later...
aap ki pasendeedgi ka Behad Shukria..
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 3 Minutes and 42 Seconds later...
array aap ne bhi pehlay parha hua hai .. hairani huee..
iss darja paseendgi ka Behad Shuker'guzar hon.. Nawazish
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 1 Minutes and 18 Seconds later...
iss achi tareef ka Bohat Shukria..
wafa aur dua ke saath
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Bohat Shukria janab-e-NoToRi0uS
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 2 Minutes and 33 Seconds later...
Barish ji.. bohat shukria ke aap se harf'shanas ne waqt nikala.. parha parkha.. aur mehsoos kia.. samjhiye mehnat wasool huee.. kya keren zindagi to aisi si hi hai.. Allah sab ke pyaron ko Abbad rakhay.. Aameen
jo hum pe hai guzri humi jantay hein
dunia to lutff ley gi mere waqiyat mein
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 1 Minutes and 50 Seconds later...
janab-e-wasi .. bohat mamnoon hon ke aap mere dukh mein shareek hue.. bus yehi bohat hai .. Nawazish..
wafa aur dua ke saath
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Last edited by withlove; 02-19-2008 at 04:47 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
app ki tahreer bayhud zabardust hai.................app kay alfaaz parhnay walay ko trap kar laytay hain k dehaan kahin aur bhatakta he nahi......
Bt Ending ws damn Sad..............![]()
~*~There are only four questions of value in life...What is sacred? Of what is the spirit made?What is worth living for? What is worth dying for? The answer to each is the same~*~~*~*~Only love....~*~*~
Uffff Rula Dia Itni Touchy Tehreer Itna Derd. Mujay pta nhe q aisa lugta tha k ajkal koi mohabbat ko bohat shidat say mehssos nhe kerta sub timepassing hay.lakin aap ki 2ono tehririen perh k mujay lga k app waqai Mohabbat k ahsas sy b waqif hein or us k khonay k dard say aashna bhi.
Bohat khubssorat tehreer . Lakin perh k dukh k ek ahsas nay apnay hisar mein lay lia hay . Kia likon or bohat kuch kehnay ko hy lakn yaqeen manin Alfaz khin gum ho gay hein . So Keep it up....
Bhlay Cheen lo muj sy meri jawani.Mager muj ko lota do Bajpan ka sawan.Wo kaghaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani.
aap ki harf'shanasi ka qayal hon aur pazeerai ka ShukerGuzar .. ji aap ne durust kaha ke ending...??/ per.. ye to RABB behter janta hia ..
Hum parwarish-e-loh-o-qalam karty rahen gy
jo dil pe guzarti hai raqam kertay rahen gy
Bohat Nawazish..
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove
withlove added 3 Minutes and 16 Seconds later...
ji aap ko durust lagta hai .. aaj kal wafadar logon ko dunia seedha saadha aur budho samjhti hai .. mere dard ko pehchanay aur tasleem kernay ka Behad Shukria..kya keren.. jo milta hia wohi baant detay hein..
Jo hum pe hai guzri humi jantay hen
Dunia to lutf ley gi mere waqiyat mein
Bohat Nawazish..
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove![]()
Last edited by withlove; 07-03-2009 at 05:00 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost