App Beeti ~ October WK Competition

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~App Beeti

Mera naam Dilawar Shah hai. 1983 mein Rawalpindi kay aik mutawasat gharanay mein paida howa. Meray 2 bhai aur 2 behnaein hain. Mein choothay number ka hoon, 2 behanein aur aik bhai baray, jabkay aik chota bhai hai. Meri paidaeish per khandan bohat khush tha, tab hee Baba Jaan ki promotion bhi hoi gharz ye kay mali halaat behter honay ki waja say mujhay achay school aur college main pharnay ka moqa mila.

Pharhai mai mein darmeyanay darjay ka student raha. Walida bohat mazhabi thi hamesha deen ki baat kartien. Mein School kay zamanay tak tu bohat bhola bhala masoom sa raha magar college mai doosti kuch kharab larko say ho gai, jawani kay josh aur nit naye fashion ka shouq, pharhai say tawajha bilkul hat gai. Har waqt ganay sunana , filmein deykhna aur hero kay style marna mashghala ban gaya. Walidein say dantt aur maar bhi bohat phari magar on dinoo mujhe kahan hosh tha, bamoushkil tamam Inter pass kiya, per ab kissi achi university mai dakhla milna mushkil tha ... meray kuch doost bahar ja rahay thay mei nay bhi zid laga di kay iss mulk mein kuch nahi rakha… bahar jaoon ga. Waldein nay lakh samjhaya kay yahan tu kuch pharhtay nahi bahar kiya pharho gay? … baba nay paisay deynay say saaf inkar kar diya.



Mein nay ghar chorh nay ka faisla kar liya aur raat ki tareeki main train station phooncha, khabi train ka safar nahi kiya tha, thoray say paisay thay Lahore ki ticket katwai. Lahore poohancha tu sahi magar dil toota howa tha. Station say lari aaday aa gaya. Gham ghalat karanay ko Minar-e-Pakistan aur Badshahi Masjid deykhi. Sham tak Maa Gi ki yaad bohat aa rahi thi, ye hee soocha kay wo mera gham bardaast nahi kar sakein gi ghar phone kar diya… phir kiya tha … Lahore mein aik dour kay rishtadar rahtay thay, thori daer mein ghar waloon nay on ko bheej diya. Khair ghar wapis aaya tu Baba nay kuch nahi kaha. Maa Gi nay apna zewaar la kar baba ko diya kay ab ye jawan oulaad hai, abhi tu wapis a gaya kal ko kuch aur bhi ho sakta hai app iss ko bahar hee bheejwa dein, ye apna yee shouq bhi pura kar ley. Mein nay wada kiya khoob dil laga kar pharhoon ga. Baba Gi nay ijaazat dey di aur iss tarhaan mein Management ki studies kay liey England rawana ho gaya.

England poohanchna meray khawaboon ki tabeer tha. Hansi khushi bag pack kiya, Maa gi galay laga kar bohat roi… yahaan tak kay meri ankhoon mein bhi ansoo aa geay aur mujhe kahna para kay Maa agar tu nay scene change na kiya tu mein film yahan hee cut kar doun ga … Baba nay bhi galay lagaya aur aik bar phir 999 nasihatoon ko repeat kiya… youn mai rawana howa.

Khair University ki classes shuru hoi tu kuch din tak tu mujhe ghar waloon ki baatain yaad aati rahi, phir ird gird deykha tu dunya hee nirali thi, jiss tarhaan kay logoon ko sirf film mai deykha tha wo ird gird thay. Shararti tu mein tha hee aik khoobsorat Miss Gi nay poocha kay, ‘dilawar tumhain yahaan kaisa lag raha hai aur kiya karna chahtay hu” tu mai nay jawab diya, “ Miss khawab lag raha hai aur Miss if you don’t mind mein app kay sar kay baaloon ka thora qareeb say mouena karna chahta hoon, mujhe blonde baal bohat pasand hain” … lecturer muskara di aur kaha kay lagta hai tum waqai kafi filmein dekh kar yahan aey ho, university ka aik decorum hai, hansi Mazak apni jaga magar class mein act professionally. Meri achi khasi beyzti hoi.

Khair studies zada mushkil nahi lagi, mein nay german zuban mein bhi enroll karwa liya kyoon kay Germany say Masters Free ho sakta tha. Kharchay pooray karnay kay liey mein nay 'Pizza delivery boy' ki job bhi shuru kar di, iss job mai bara faida tha aksar achi tip bhi milti, doostiyaan bhi ho jati aur kuch auntiyaan tu services say khush hu ker achay khassay paisey dey deti thein. Ahesta ahesta mai wahan kay life style mein dhal gaya.

Studies kay du semesters achaay guzray, ghar walay meray result say khush thay. ‘German language’ class ki aik student helper Germany ki hee thi , naam tha ‘Alexa Moon’ , wo meri management ki class mei bhi pharti thi, tu oss say kafi aachi doosti ho gai… bohat acchi larki thi, sub say mukhtalif; sadha aur seedhi os nay khabi mujh say mahangay hoteloon ya gifts ki farmaish nahi ki, jabkay hamehsa meray liey koi na koi qeemti gift ley aati , mein heyraan hota kay is ma’ada parasat mashray mein aeisi larki bhi ho sakti hai.

Ramzan ka Mubarak maheena aaya tu mujh per Muslamai sawar hoi, mei kafi Mazhaabi ho gaya aur maghraabi dunya mai Rozay rakhnay aur Taraweeh pharnay ka apna hee maza tha. Alexa Moon heyraan thi kay ghantoon baatein karnay walay ko kiya howa… Mein nay oosay Islam ki taleemaat say roshnash karwaya… osay bohat khushi hoi… per oss kay aik sawal ka mai jawab na dey saka. Os nay kaha, “tu tum ye Muslman sirf aik mahenay kay liey hee hotay hu?” … mein nay bus itna kaha ‘Mai kamzoor Muslman hoon, baharhaal please kam az kam aik maheena tu Muslmaan rahnay du” … Moon per bohat asar howa … os nay Islam ko study karna shuru kiya aur kuch arsay mein Muslamaan ho gai. Tamaam Muslim students of bohat khushi hoi.

Mera University ka doosra saal khatam honay wala tha. Mera ab Moon say kam hee milna hota, os nay mustaqil ‘Hijaab’ karna shuru kar diya tha, ju mujhe bohat pasand tha. Per wo meray rawaeey say uddass thi. Aik din os nay pooch hee liya kay ‘Shah tum itnay kheechay kheechay say kyoon rahtay ho?’. Mein nay kaha, ‘Alexa Moon asal mein ye bohat bara imtehaan hai, agar tum deen mai sachi hu aur Meri waja say Islam qabool nahi kiya, tu tum meray baghair bhi Islam per qaim raho gi, Magar Agar meri waja say Islam apnaya hai tu os ki koi value nahi.

Ye sun kar wo rou pari aur kaha kay, “Shah tum nay mujhe samajhnay mai bohat bari ghalti ki, mein nay Islam apni merzi say aur puri khushi say qabool kiya… aur agar ye imtehaan hai tu tumharay jaisay 1,000 mai apnay deen per qurban kar sakti hoon” … ye kah kar ankhoon mein ansoo liey wo chali gai…

Mujhe aiesa laga kay mera sub kuch cheen gaya ho. Baharhaal os waqt wohi behtar samjha, kuch arsay baad Molvi sahib ko waqiya bataya tu kahanay lagay “Dilawar Shah Sahib! Tu os azeem larki nay shart tu pori kar di thi na! tum ko chahyee tha os ko shadi ka peygham deytay… iss tarhaan agar tum ko khabi agay zindagi mei apni app beeti likhni parh jati tu kafi saray naujawan ju bahar jatay hain kam az kam Ramazan mein tu Musalman Bantay, issi umeed per hee kay koi un ki waja say musalman ho jaey” … mei nay Kaha ,” Molvi sahib agar mai peygham dey bhi deyta tab bhi koi guarantee nahi … aik tu yee kay meri app beeti bahar waloon mein say pharay ga kon aur doosra ye kay Moon agar maan bhi jati, aur happy ending hu bhi jati tu tab bhi meri App beeti khabi kissi writer’s korner ka competition win nahi kar sakti thi kyoon kay ‘Happy ending’ Ustaad bilkul out of fashion hai, ye judge log happy ending ko chai mei makhi ki tarhaan, bilkul bahar nikal key deywar per dey maarta, Kiya! Samjha app.
Judge log sirf Sad rondhu Ending Mahanta, iss liey hum happy ending say touba karta, aur aik dum khoon kay ansoo rotay howay App beeti end karta. Ab Molvi Saheb tum hum ko dekhna Mangta kay, sirf Hamara entry hee jeetna mangta, baqi subbbb OUT!!!”

Molvi Saheb nay meri taeed mai sar hilla diya aur youn mai apnay watan studies Mukamaal kar kay wapas aa gaya.

Shuriyaa!!!

[baba _ki_pari]

Lolzzz... bohat maza aaya parh ker...especially last paragraph bohat mazay ka tha....Best of luck !!!

[happygolucky]

Bohat umda kahani likhi hai aapne. Mazaa aagaya. A+
Happy endings shahid judges ko pasand na ho, humain to pasand hai. Kash k Dilawar Sahab ki Shaadi Alexa se hojaati and they lived happilly ever after.
Sad ending always make me cry

[Rujail]

assalam o alaikum

naam tumhara dilawaer, urfiyat shah ji. . .itney parhey likhye. . sun ker khushi hoi.
class me act professionally kesy hota he . .ye baat samjh nahi aai. . study koi profession nahi he. tu ye hoi touadi writing mis-take.

last para samjh nahi aaya. . .

aur tu to bara hi lousy likla. . . lekry New muslim ko support kerna aur unki dkeh bhaal ker bhi aap ki zimahdari hoti he. . and females ke saath niakh kerna bhi mustahab amal he. . per tu ne tu try hi nahi ki. . .. khair.

aap beti kisi beyjaan shaey ki likhni thi. . . tu beta tu tu gaya comp. se. . . tu jaa apni hasratoon pe. .. dash dash dash soja. . . hahhahahhahah

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assalam o alaikum

naam tumhara dilawaer, urfiyat shah ji. . .itney parhey likhye. . sun ker khushi hoi.
class me act professionally kesy hota he . .ye baat samjh nahi aai. . study koi profession nahi he. tu ye hoi touadi writing mis-take.

last para samjh nahi aaya. . .

aur tu to bara hi lousy likla. . . lekry New muslim ko support kerna aur unki dkeh bhaal ker bhi aap ki zimahdari hoti he. . and females ke saath niakh kerna bhi mustahab amal he. . per tu ne tu try hi nahi ki. . .. khair.

aap beti kisi beyjaan shaey ki likhni thi. . . tu beta tu tu gaya comp. se. . . tu jaa apni hasratoon pe. .. dash dash dash soja. . . hahhahahhahah

Wa aleykum Salam

Aray wah Ustaz ... tabiyaat tu theek hai na... Kafi Hoola Hath rakha ...

Ustaz gi wo kiya hai na ... bahir Professional Studies mein students ko professional training sath kay sath hee karai jati hai ... tu sawaal rah gaya kay phir unprofessional kia hota hai ... oss kay liey 'Top Gun' kafi mashoor hoi thi... baqi zaroorat ho tu pm kar kay pooch lo lu na bhai..

aur last para samaj nahi aaya... naa kar yaar ... qasam say wahid member tha jiss say umeed thi last para samjhnay ki... ye app kah rahay tu .. matlab baqi sub tu ab samajhnay mei mazoor tehray.

waisey bohat shukriya pharnay ka, last para phir aram say review karo, ... & theek hai mai dashnay ja raha hoon ....

[Rujail]

Wa aleykum Salam

Aray wah Ustaz ... tabiyaat tu theek hai na... Kafi Hoola Hath rakha ...

Ustaz gi wo kiya hai na ... bahir Professional Studies mein students ko professional training sath kay sath hee karai jati hai ... tu sawaal rah gaya kay phir unprofessional kia hota hai ... oss kay liey 'Top Gun' kafi mashoor hoi thi... baqi zaroorat ho tu pm kar kay pooch lo lu na bhai..

aur last para samaj nahi aaya... naa kar yaar ... qasam say wahid member tha jiss say umeed thi last para samjhnay ki... ye app kah rahay tu .. matlab baqi sub tu ab samajhnay mei mazoor tehray.

waisey bohat shukriya pharnay ka, last para phir aram say review karo, ... & theek hai mai dashnay ja raha hoon ....

hahahaha

han ji hon gul muki na. me tey hola hi haath rakhta hon . .logoon ko aap hi bhaari lag jata he. . hahahhaha
chalo aamn li tumhair baat. . . professional wali. . . kion ke hum ne professional studies nahi ki. total unprofessional hon.

samjh se matlab ye ke . . jiger. . . judgement ager MOD ker rahy hian tu . . samjh ley teri gul theek he. . han ager koi 3rd person singular he tu alug baat h. . per tu ne aap beti ka the end hi ker diya.
chalo acha hey. . kuch abtai hazaf ker dena hi bahter hota he.
baqi laly. . did still think u r still in the comp???

[*AFAQ ALI*]

wah ji wah aap inay purane ho 1938 paidaiesh yar mere dada ki umar k huwe phir to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
likhte rahye best of luck fo comp,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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hahahaha

han ji hon gul muki na. me tey hola hi haath rakhta hon . .logoon ko aap hi bhaari lag jata he. . hahahhaha
chalo aamn li tumhair baat. . . professional wali. . . kion ke hum ne professional studies nahi ki. total unprofessional hon.

samjh se matlab ye ke . . jiger. . . judgement ager MOD ker rahy hian tu . . samjh ley teri gul theek he. . han ager koi 3rd person singular he tu alug baat h. . per tu ne aap beti ka the end hi ker diya.
chalo acha hey. . kuch abtai hazaf ker dena hi bahter hota he.
baqi laly. . did still think u r still in the comp???

yaar judge agar... :
'Aabhi gi' hoi tu unhoo nay ye yee kahna hai "Bohat hee 'Ajab kiya' hai app nay, ju bhi kiya hai ... mai duaa deyti hoon ... 10 points "

agar Roona gi howi , " App Nay app beeti ko aik naiye andaaz say paish kiya, Mujhe achaa laga... iss liey 10 points aur aik flying "

aur phir Asha Gi , " Pahlay aaghaaz achaa tha per aakhir mei ju app nay app beeti main jeedaat paida karnay ki koshish ki tu ... SUR GAYA ... aur mein Sur ko deykhti hoon iss liey ZERO points "

phir Mujhe yee hee kahna paray ga... Aasha Gi... Baqi bhi tu Sur say utray hain... aik ki tu App Beeti seray say thi hee nahi aur doosri time-up kay baad entry thi... "

ye App beeti ki Jang hai!!! ... Aaman ki Asha ... Kon lahraey ga iss sarzameen mein Fateh ka Parcham... ... Flashpro kay liey abhi dial 0307- XXXXXXX aur jetain Final ka return Ticket

[Muhaddisa]

Aala .. !!
bht mzay ki tehrir rhi.!...... aur pegham bhi

mzeed b likhte rahiye..

[Baba ki guriya]

Aslam o ALaikum

Bohat achay andaaz mai likha ap ne MAsha ALLAH pegham b bohat umda tareeqay se diya

n last peragraph jo k mujy umeed thi aap beeti prhty huay k esa kuch zaroor likha hoga bht maza aya parh k

Best of luck !

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Aala .. !!
bht mzay ki tehrir rhi.!...... aur pegham bhi

mzeed b likhte rahiye..

Shukriya Bohat Bohat gi ...

[R. M. Dixit]

You have done a very adventurous
memoriable task you have done and
also created a history for the Watan. Congrats

[Rujail]

yaar judge agar... :
'Aabhi gi' hoi tu unhoo nay ye yee kahna hai "Bohat hee 'Ajab kiya' hai app nay, ju bhi kiya hai ... mai duaa deyti hoon ... 10 points "

agar Roona gi howi , " App Nay app beeti ko aik naiye andaaz say paish kiya, Mujhe achaa laga... iss liey 10 points aur aik flying "

aur phir Asha Gi , " Pahlay aaghaaz achaa tha per aakhir mei ju app nay app beeti main jeedaat paida karnay ki koshish ki tu ... SUR GAYA ... aur mein Sur ko deykhti hoon iss liey ZERO points "

phir Mujhe yee hee kahna paray ga... Aasha Gi... Baqi bhi tu Sur say utray hain... aik ki tu App Beeti seray say thi hee nahi aur doosri time-up kay baad entry thi... "

ye App beeti ki Jang hai!!! ... Aaman ki Asha ... Kon lahraey ga iss sarzameen mein Fateh ka Parcham... ... Flashpro kay liey abhi dial 0307- XXXXXXX aur jetain Final ka return Ticket

pale me ab nahi kuch bacha. . .
haddi bhi kutta kha gaya he. . .
khurchan jo reh gai he pateeli . . .
ab woh chaatney Annu malik aagya he. .

now its India Got Toilet. . .hahhahhaha
tum ko pata he kia. . . tum ne jo likha he. . woh tum ko pata hi nahi tum ne kia likha he. gadha jab ek baar rasta dekh ley. . to akbhi nahi bhoolta. . itni perfaction . . es poorey WK me tery jesa writer hi koi nahi he.
me tu kehta hon:
jab samosey me chilkey samait aalo rehy
Wk ka her comp Falshpro jeet ta rahy ga

. . . hahahaha. . .

[Roomi719]

best of luck........................!!

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pale me ab nahi kuch bacha. . .
haddi bhi kutta kha gaya he. . .
khurchan jo reh gai he pateeli . . .
ab woh chaatney Annu malik aagya he. .

now its India Got Toilet. . .hahhahhaha
tum ko pata he kia. . . tum ne jo likha he. . woh tum ko pata hi nahi tum ne kia likha he. gadha jab ek baar rasta dekh ley. . to akbhi nahi bhoolta. . itni perfaction . . es poorey WK me tery jesa writer hi koi nahi he.
me tu kehta hon:
jab samosey me chilkey samait aalo rehy
Wk ka her comp Falshpro jeet ta rahy ga

. . . hahahaha. . .

Very Close Dear
Judges are from Recent Sur Kshetra
Sur ka Cricket Pak Vs. Ind ... Jiss nay deykha hai hai tu agree karay ga , judges kay opinion exactly jaisey oper mein nay likhay hain

Judges are:
Abida Parveen Gi ~ Our Famous Folk Legend
Roona Laila Gi ~ ooey hoey hoey - Dil Dharkhay mein tum say yee kaisay kahoon
& Asha Bhons Gi ... aham, aham... but of course a legend Singer

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sur_Kshetra

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Lolzzz... bohat maza aaya parh ker...especially last paragraph bohat mazay ka tha....Best of luck !!!

Bohat Shukriya app ka pharhnay aur sarahnay ka. tq!

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wah ji wah aap inay purane ho 1938 paidaiesh yar mere dada ki umar k huwe phir to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
likhte rahye best of luck fo comp,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

1938 ...
chalein gi jaisey app ki merzi ... mein Khutba -e- Illabaad ka natija hee sahi
thanks for wishing luck, waisey bhi subah say luck mei kafi dard hu raha hai

[khalid jamil malik]

boht khoob-------------------------------------

[minal malik]

hmmmmmmmmmm nice

[khoobsooratdil]

اچھی تحریر ہے جناب مزہ آ گیا