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  1. 09-21-2011 #1
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    I Wish She Was Here..

    The following prose kinda poetry i wrote two days back.. Feel free to comment!

    I wish she was here,
    yes the one whom i am meant to be with,
    Because at the end of the day,
    When in my bed i lay,
    I take time to sleep,
    After thinking things deep,
    I just dont wanna tell,
    How my days are like hell,
    Without her by my side,
    Its the thing i cant ignore,
    Because i want someone for sure,
    The one who can understand the words i dont speak,
    The one who can read my eyes silently,
    The one whose whole world would be just me,
    The one who can show me what love really is,
    At the end of the day,
    I dont want someone to care for me,
    But all i want is that,
    Someone with a heart full of love,
    Telling me that i am her life!




    In My Own Words,
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  3. 10-20-2011 #41
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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by pari girl View Post
    ufff

    itny na umeed hogaye ho zindagi sy
    phr biryani kb khany aye ........
    zindagi se na umeed nai huwa
    biryani mein tym hai abhi wait krein


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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by Reasons.. View Post
    zindagi se na umeed nai huwa
    biryani mein tym hai abhi wait krein
    arye yr pura md bana liya tha biryani ka may ny
    ..................

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reasons.. View Post
    zindagi se na umeed nai huwa
    biryani mein tym hai abhi wait krein
    arye yr pura md bana liya tha biryani ka may ny
    ..................

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    ye u ne mjhe kun n btaya thread?

    Brillient words n superb poem

    keep it up!

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    تمھاری آنکھ سے دل تک سفر کرنا ہے بس ہم کو
    یہ کتنی خوبصورت منزلوں کا راستہ ہوگا



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    اک رابطہ مسلسل ہے ، اک فاصلہ مسلسل ہے

    ہم خود کو بیچ دیں پھر بھی ہم تجھ کو پا نہیں سکتے
    میں عام سا ہمیشہ ہوں ، تو خاص سا مسلسل ہے!



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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Ahem ahem can I Replace SHE by HE? Plzz???

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Awesome Bro!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by (Arzu-e-Jana'n) View Post
    Ahem ahem can I Replace SHE by HE? Plzz???
    sure.. but onli if u use it from ur side

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    ye u ne mjhe kun n btaya thread?

    Brillient words n superb poem

    keep it up!
    mjhy frnds mein add krlein
    me all friends ko tag krta hun na..

    Quote Originally Posted by pari girl View Post
    arye yr pura md bana liya tha biryani ka may ny
    ...................
    chalein apki khuwaish jald hi puri krne ki koshish ki jayegi

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    hahahha ok

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reasons.. View Post
    sure.. but onli if u use it from ur side

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by Shattered View Post
    sure.. but onli if u use it from ur side



    mjhy frnds mein add krlein
    me all friends ko tag krta hun na..



    chalein apki khuwaish jald hi puri krne ki koshish ki jayegi
    ufff kysy bndy ho tauba hy..................

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by pari girl View Post
    ufff kysy bndy ho tauba hy..................
    meri baton se parishan na hoyen..

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    unki nund ka kya bana????
    really nice...without care,love chaly ga????

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    یہ جو خواہشوں کا پرند ہے، اسے موسموں سے غرض نہیں
    یہ اڑے گا اپنی ہی موج میں، اسے آب دے کہ سراب دے!
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    Superb......!!!!!!!

    Bohat zabardast likha aap nay
    Aur parhai pe dheyan dena chahiye.....

    Thanks for sharing

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    hahahaha poetry se jayada sabke comments parh kr maza aya

    sabne to biryaani khane ka proggram bana rakha hai
    beautifull words
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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    just came to know ur poet:O
    woaw!
    good one!

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    very nice effort.
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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by s0uL sUrvIvOr View Post
    just came to know ur poet:O
    woaw!
    good one!
    u're late

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    Quote Originally Posted by Talha I View Post
    u're late
    kitna late?

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    Re: I Wish She Was Here..

    Quote Originally Posted by s0uL sUrvIvOr View Post
    kitna late?
    puray 2 saal late log shuru se jante hain i do poetry..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Talha I View Post
    puray 2 saal late log shuru se jante hain i do poetry..
    owhh...ab me ne tu ab ana shuru kara tu ghour farmaya keh bacha kitna talented hai

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    Quote Originally Posted by s0uL sUrvIvOr View Post
    owhh...ab me ne tu ab ana shuru kara tu ghour farmaya keh bacha kitna talented hai
    bachay ki age shayed apke jitni hi hai aur aap shuru me bi ati thi i remember.. phr ek lamba gap aya hai uske bad ayi hain ap

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    Quote Originally Posted by Talha I View Post
    bachay ki age shayed apke jitni hi hai aur aap shuru me bi ati thi i remember.. phr ek lamba gap aya hai uske bad ayi hain ap

    heyy yeahh,,,tum ko yaad hai
    hahah aur bachay ki age hum se chhoti bhi ho sakti hai

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