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[Disturbing behaviour]

[Disturbing behaviour]

bhae wahhhh... kya kehnay.. MashaAllah.. Bohat jandaar ghazal kahi.. her shair qabil-e-tehseen raha.. dhairoN daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

Shukriya Ustad e Muhazzam

ZaY

[Disturbing behaviour]

bhae wahhhh... kya kehnay.. MashaAllah.. Bohat jandaar ghazal kahi.. her shair qabil-e-tehseen raha.. dhairoN daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

Shukriya Ustad e Muhazzam

ZaY

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Zaberdast buhat achay Khoob likha aap nay

kash hum bhi likhari hotay hain apni socho'n ko lafzo'n main dhaltey Ahha

Shukriya Amna Sahiba. Aap ko likhna chahiye, Mujhe umeed hai k aap yahan per buhat saray likhne waloN se acha hi likhen gee. Bus aik iltija hai k apni takhleeq ka sab se bara judge likhne wala khud hi hota hai so bay ja tareef ko hi apni kamyabi mat jan lijiye ga. Aap ki tehreer ka intezar rahay ga.

ZaY

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subhanallah buhat hi khubsurat kalam hai great dhair sari daad hazir hai qabool ho......

Buhat nawazish Qais Bhai.

ZaY

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waaahhh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
bohutttt bohutttt zaberdastttt,,,,,,,,,,,,,
as always,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Bari Mehrbani comments k liye Madam

ZaY

[Disturbing behaviour]

wah sir g kia khoob ghazal kahi
her shair khoobsorat , mehkti khushboo ki terha
Bht si DaaD

Thanks Beta

ZaY

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bohat khoob ghazal kahi ha
dhiroon daad aap ki ghazal ki nazar
khush raheye

Buhat buhat shukriya Saba Jee.

ZaY

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khobsurat kallam as always Zay, waah
aap itnay zabardust kallam keh rahay hain yukay baad deegray keh dill khush hogaya..mashallah

abad rahyea..ameen

Pazeerai k liye buhat mamnoon hoon Farukh Bhai Khush rahiye

ZaY

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Dear DB!! aap ne lafzon ka jadoo bohat khubsurati se paish kiya hai apni iss magical ghazal main!!!! i really like it!!!!!!wonderful attempt!!!!Khuda kare qalam pe girft aur ziyada ho aur lafz yunhi jadoo bikhairte rahien ameen!!!!!!! thanks alot for sharing...blessings!!!

this is amazing!!!

zehn o dil pe naqsh hone ke liyeh
ek hayat e jawidani shart hai

Aap k comments aur Duaon k liye behad shukarguzar hoon Savi.

ZaY

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Inqalab ayse nahi aata huzoor
soch par hukmrani shart hai...
bohot umdah ,liked it................

Thank U very much for your supportive comments Madam.

ZaY

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khubsoorta shartoun kay saath ek khubsoorat kalam kehnay par bohut see daad qubool kijaye

roshnee

Shukriya Roshnee jee

ZaY

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bohot khoob janab...
khubsuret ghazal....hmesha ki treh....
mobarukbad qabool krain...

Khayal Saab aap ka behad mamnoon hoon

ZaY

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hmaisha ki trha boht hi umdah god bless u

Pazeerai k liye shukriya Madam

ZaY

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wah! bohat khoob Zay sir ... bohat Aala .. saary asha'ar hi bohat khobsurat or kamal k hain ... beautiful ...!!!
Thanks for sharing .......

Buhat buhat shukriya Diya Sahiba

ZaY

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jiasey darya maiN rawani shart hai


wah! zay sir, kya khoob radeef chuna hai aap ne....bht hi alag aap k kalaam ki tarha............aur khobsorti se nibhaya bhi hai.........bht khoob.....dhair sari daad qabool kijiye...

Asad Bhai, Meri adna si kawish k response main aap ki itni pazeerai k liye aap ka Mamnoon hoon

ZaY

[sfaseehrabbani]

بہت عمدہ، بہت خوبصورت غزل عطا کی ہے آپ نے

اور یہ شعر تو بہت ہی دلکش ہے

انقلاب ایسے نہیں آتا حضور
سوچ پر بھی حکمرانی شرط ہے

بہت زیادہ داد قبول کیجیے۔

[Disturbing behaviour]

بہت عمدہ، بہت خوبصورت غزل عطا کی ہے آپ نے

اور یہ شعر تو بہت ہی دلکش ہے

انقلاب ایسے نہیں آتا حضور
سوچ پر بھی حکمرانی شرط ہے

بہت زیادہ داد قبول کیجیے۔

Janab e Faseeh, aap se achay likhne walay ki aisi pyari rae mere liye aik khushgawar ehsas hai. Khush Rahiye

ZaY