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    ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    assalam alekum dosto,
    khasay arsay say chooty behr main tabah azmaii nahi ki thi lihaza kuch likha hay, kyoon keh khasay arsay say iss behr peh mushkh e sukhan nahi ki tu indimaal hay keh yeah koshish bhi khamyoon say mubara nahi hogi, aapki tajaweez ka muntazir rahoon ga, aapki daad o tehseen tu waisay bhi meray mazeed likhnay ka fuel hay, so keep it up



    aabad o kamraan rahyea..ameen

    زندگی جیسے انتظار ؍ وفا
    لمحۂ لمحۂ ہی رہگزار ؍ وفا

    خواب منزل ہوں عشق کی جیسے

    اور منظر ہوں سب خمار ؍ وفا

    مر مٹے ہم تو یہ سمجھ آیا

    ہم نے جانا ہی کب وقار ؍ وفا

    خاک ؍ ہستی کو دیکھ کر دنیا

    بول اٹھی کے ہے غبار ؍ وفا

    پیار اتنا ملے کے مر جائیں

    کون جیتا ہے زیر ؍ بار ؍ وفا

    شب گزشتہ کی سحر ہونے تک

    ایک شمع ہوئی نثار ؍ وفا

    اسکا لہجہ لگا ہمیں ایسے

    جیسے رنگ ؍ رخ ؍ بہار ؍ وفا

    اس نے بخشا ہے پیار کا جذبہ

    میرا مالک ہے کردگار ؍ وفا

    سود
    بھی تھا ، زیاں بھی تھا فرخ
    کر سکا کون کاروبار ؍ وفا







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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    Waah wah Farrukh Bhai, Hamesha ki tarah nadir kalam atta kiya aap ne

    پیار اتنا ملے کے مر جائیں
    کون جیتا ہے زیر ؍ بار ؍ وفا

    kya kehne mere dost
    Maqta main aap ne lafz ZOOD likha jo shayad Sood hona chahiye. Dekh lijiye ga. Iske elawa aap ne aik lafz KARDGAR bhi istemal kiya hai. Barae Mehrabi is lafz ke meanings bata den kyun k ye lafz kabhi meri nazar se nahi guzra so mere elm main bhi aa jae.
    Nawazish

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    bohut,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,khoooooooooobbbb,,,,,,,,,,

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    thanks Zay, aap nay typo error ki taraf isharah kiya, mainay sahi kerdiya hay,
    Zay "Kirdigaar", Khudda ko kehtay hain, aur wo sher tasawuf kay juzbay main dhalla gaya hay, keh US hi ki zaat humain pyar ka jazba ata kerty hay keh Wohi tu Khudda e Wafa hay..
    Shab aapki pasandeedgi kay liyeah mumnoon hoon.
    aabad rahyea, ameen

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    Farrukh bhai,

    bht khoob............aap ki "Hard Skills" se to kisi ko inkaar hi nahiN aur "Soft skills" to hum ne khud aap se seekhii haiN to hamara to munh hi nahiN paRta k tanqeed kar sakaiiN......khair chooN k ye computer world hai is liye is maiN munh ki zaroorat nahiN hogi....


    زندگی جیسے انتظار_وفا
    لمحۂ لمحۂ ہی رہگزار_وفا

    Matlaa bht khobsorat hai, laikin aisay hi hai jaise "khali aquarium" agr hum dono misrooN ki nasr karaiiN to kuch yuN hogi "zindagi jaise wafa ka intezar hai her lamha wafa ki rahguzar hai" ab aap is maiN se maani akhaz kejiye!! kam az kam mujhse se kam aql k liye is shaEr ko samjhna kar-e-darad hai...... aur agr shaEr apna mafhoom bayaan na kar sakay to khobsorti kho jaati hai....


    مر مٹے ہم تو یہ سمجھ آیا

    ہم نے جانا ہی کب وقار وفا

    خاک ہستی کو دیکھ کر دنیا

    بول اٹھی کے ہے غبار وفا

    bht khoob bht umdah ashaar haiN bht si daad qabool kijiye.....Gustakhi ki muafi chahta hoN jo mehsoos kiya wo keh diya......

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    سود
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    Bohat khobsorat Ghazal Kahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    ​farukh ji khubsurat kalam share karney per daad qabool kijiye

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    WAH BoHat UmmmDA KaLam KHoooBsurat

    sHare kArte RaHA kArein ....... !

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    mashaAllah bohet achay khush rehain

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    خواب منزل ہوں عشق کی جیسے

    اور منظر ہوں سب خمار ؍ وفا

    مر مٹے ہم تو یہ سمجھ آیا

    ہم نے جانا ہی کب وقار ؍ وفا

    اسکا لہجہ لگا ہمیں ایسے

    جیسے رنگ ؍ رخ ؍ بہار ؍ وفا

    اس نے بخشا ہے پیار کا جذبہ

    میرا مالک ہے کردگار ؍ وفا

    سود
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    waaaaaaaaaaah boht hi umdah
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    khuda our klaam mein nikhar paida kry ameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen



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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    wah! bohat khobsorat kalam ....................!!!

    Thanks for sharing......!!

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    dear Farrukhji salam!!! i was reading your this lovely poetry and suddenly one couplet came in my mind which is written by one of famous poet and it is in other language (sindhi) but i will translate it for u!!


    marhoon subh na sohnra
    pakhi subh na hanj
    kenh kenh marhoon manjh
    ache boo bahar ji


    iss ka matlab hai ke sab log khubsurat naheen hote aur na hi sare parinday huns hote hain magar kabhi kabhi kuch logon main humien bahar ki khushboo mehsoos hoti hai!!!!

    so dear sir your poetry got unique individuality!!! plzz always give us chance to read your rythmic thoughts.......heartly thanksss..... God bless you!!!

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    mashallah Farukh bhai bohut khubsoorat ghazal kahi apnay
    bohut see daad qubool kijayae

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    Kon jeeta hai zer-e-baar-e-wafa ... bhae wahhhh .. SubhanAllah.. kya kehnay janab.. dhairoN dhair daad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    Mashallah Farrukh Bhai,

    Bohat Khoobsoorat Ghazal ataa ki aap ne ...
    Ye ashaar bohat pasand aaye mujhe .....

    مر مٹے ہم تو یہ سمجھ آیا
    ہم نے جانا ہی کب وقار وفا


    خاک ہستی کو دیکھ کر دنیا

    بول اٹھی کے ہے غبار وفا

    Shareek kernay ka shukria

    Regards
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    walaikum assalam !!
    bohut umda ........::

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    wahh bohat khoob farrukh ji
    bohat achi ghazal kahi ha

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    Waalikum Asslaam

    boohat acha likha ap ne ........

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    Re: ~~~;{@[zindagi jaisay intizaar e wafa]@};~~~

    سود بھی تھا ، زیاں بھی تھا فرخ
    کر سکا کون کاروبار ؍ وفا


    مر مٹے ہم تو یہ سمجھ آیا

    ہم نے جانا ہی کب وقار ؍ وفا


    walaikum assalam.. farukh bhai hum khaamiyan kahan nikaal skte hum apke shagird jo theray
    puri ghazal beshak nihayat hi umdah rahi.. ye 2 sher jo mene mention kiye behad wazni aur pur kashish thay..
    Dheron daad hazir hai!



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    سود
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    bohot umdaaa...Khoobsurat Ghazal Farrukh Bhai...

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