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  1. 10-02-2009 #1
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    ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Asalam-o-Alekum dosto.....
    hope ap sab achay hongy...

    Apki khidmat me pesh he mera ik mini novil.....umeed kerti houn ap sab ko pasand aay ga.........

























    Baki aainda hafty InshaAllah...........

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  3. 10-03-2009 #2
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    wowwwwwwwwww very awesome story jaani

    aap bohut achha likhti hain

    bohut hi mokamal tehreerein hoti hain aapki

    isi trha likhti rahein

    waisey aik baat tou btaaein aapko shah'meer name bohut pasand hai na?

    isi liye aapki har story mein hota hai..........

    mujhey bhi yeh name pasand hai bohut,pyaara name hai

    next episode kab tak likhein gi

    intazaar rahey ga jaani

    khush raho hmesha..............!!

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    "Woh Zeher De Ke Marta Tou Duniya Ki Nazron Mein Aa Jata
    So Us Ne Yun Kiya,Mohabbat Ki Aur Mujhey Chhor Diya....."
    !!!~~~~Zindagi Humse Bichher Ke Pachhtai Bohut~~~~!!!
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Quote Originally Posted by DASHT-E-TANHAI View Post
    wowwwwwwwwww very awesome story jaani

    aap bohut achha likhti hain

    bohut hi mokamal tehreerein hoti hain aapki

    isi trha likhti rahein

    waisey aik baat tou btaaein aapko shah'meer name bohut pasand hai na?

    isi liye aapki har story mein hota hai..........

    mujhey bhi yeh name pasand hai bohut,pyaara name hai

    next episode kab tak likhein gi

    intazaar rahey ga jaani

    khush raho hmesha..............!!

    Shukria ji bohat boaht pasand kerny k leye....

    ji han mujhy ye naam bohat pasand he....agli qist inshaAllah next week tak post ker doungi.....

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    bohut khoob Sada ji, kia kehnay aap kay.
    jub aap itny achi writer haiN hi tu phir shayry kyooN, kuch hamaray jaisoN kai liea bhi chor dijea.
    and again, I am very pleased to read it, agli qist kub aye gi.
    bohut sara khoosh rahyea ga, ok
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    bohut khoob Sada ji, kia kehnay aap kay.
    jub aap itny achi writer haiN hi tu phir shayry kyooN, kuch hamaray jaisoN kai liea bhi chor dijea.
    and again, I am very pleased to read it, agli qist kub aye gi.
    bohut sara khoosh rahyea ga, ok
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    dear sada really its a very touchy story u started......
    waiting 4 next episode...

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Ohhh Wowww Sada app ka new Novel Bohat zbrdst hay. Perh k bohat accha lga Lakin ab baghair wait kerwayee juldi juldi next episode b share ker dein . Or haan end aisa kijiay ga k maza a jayee.
    Bohat khush rhin or sada likhti rhin. amin

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Asalam-o-Alekom....

    Tehreer pasand kerny k leye sabhi dostoun ki by had mamnoon houn...
    agli qist hazir-e-khidmat he....



























    Maaf kejeye ga dostoun masroofiat k baais itna hi likh paai houn....derasal do novil or bhi chal rahy hei.....

    agli qist pesh kerny mein shaid takheer ho jaay isi leye abhi sy maafi mangti houn....


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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Achcha rabt Qayaam Rakha Hai
    Mazeed Ka Intezaar rahega

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Bohat acchi lgi ya wali eposide b . Wasy app ko Digest k liay b likhna chahiay. I hope k app zrur kamyab rhin gi INSHALLAH. Late na kerin plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
    Bohat khush rhin.........

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    sada really nice .. story is going well uptill now .. will be waiting for next part ..

    ps: jab bhi likhai araam sai likhai.. kuch lafz app jaldi mein likh rahi hain jo parhnai mein thori dikkat hui..

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Ji ap sab ka bohat shukria....
    Or sahar ji apka b behad shukria...aainda ehtyaat karoungi...........

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    bht khoob sada ji
    dil ko kench lia ap ne to

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Bohat khoob Sada,

    Bohat achi tehreer hai aap ki aur hamesha ki tarha dil ko cho janay wali.....

    bechaini se intezar rahay ga Ma'al ka.....

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Asalam-o-Alekum dosto....

    Novil ki akhri qist hazr-e-khimat he......
    is bar kafi kami reh gai he....is leye shaid apko perhny mein ziada lutf na aay......is k leye mazrat........





















































































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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Wowwwww interesting. bohat accha end tha. Bohat mazy ka afsana likha app nay. Bohat khush rhin or mazeed likhti rhin.

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    aah,
    wow,
    kia kahoN.
    aap mujhay kub likhna sikha rahi haiN SADA,
    mashallah, AWESOME
    Kush Rahyea ga SADA
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Woww maza aaya padh k

    achcha end tha
    khush rahein aur yoon hi likhti rahiye

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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Quote Originally Posted by Dia_Komal View Post
    Wowwwww interesting. bohat accha end tha. Bohat mazy ka afsana likha app nay. Bohat khush rhin or mazeed likhti rhin.

    Bari nawazish dia ji.....

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    aah,
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    kia kahoN.
    aap mujhay kub likhna sikha rahi haiN SADA,
    mashallah, AWESOME
    Kush Rahyea ga SADA
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    Ji Farukhji tehreer pasand kerny ka behad shukria....
    Farukhji jesy bakol apky shayri nahi sikhai jati wesa hi mamala yahan bhi he...
    dheroun koshishien kerni perti hein hazaroun ki tadaad sy ouraak siah kerny perty hein.....or in sab sy pehly acha likhny k leye zaroori he ap acha perhny waly bhi hon.....

    ik baar phir sy shukria...
    Khush raheye sada....

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    Woww maza aaya padh k

    achcha end tha
    khush rahein aur yoon hi likhti rahiye

    Thank you so much Jia ji.........
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    Re: ***Daman me hein Mohabbatien***

    Mashallah buht umda likhti han aap sada ji
    aap ak mini novel pasand aya
    khsuh raheye
    likhti raheye

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