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    Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    Apni zindagi k azab likhon k haseen khawab likhon
    Ya phir jin k peechay bhagta raha wo sarab likhon

    Guzartay howay waqt ki wo talkhiyan apni jaga
    Magar sochta hon ab apnay kal k baab likhon



    Chootay he jinhein zakhmi kara tha badan apna
    Unn kanton ko kesay mein aakhir gulaab likhon ?

    Wo to kabhi humsafar he na banay thay humaray
    To phir kyun unhein bhi mein apnay aehbab likhon

    Dhoonday say bhi milna mushkil hogai hay aab to
    Sochta hon iss mohabat ko aab nayab likhon


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    Mujay bas wo ,or usay sara zamana chiay tha

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    wah wah bohaat khoobsorat ghazal likhee hay ap nay Humair.....bara he lutf aya perh kay

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    Buhat hi khubsoorati se likha hai ..

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    Zindagi hai keh Katti nahin




    aur tum ho keh Lambhi umar ki Dua dete ho!!




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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    kiya bat hai g...
    keep going

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    hmmm
    suni suni si lagti hai
    zehan mein nahe aa raha kahan suni hai

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    aslamoaleakum...aap sab ka thanks

    & NoToRi0uS zaroor batiay gaa k kaha sunii......yeh ghazal mein nay aik sindhi poet ki kisee ghzal ki 1st line say impress hokay likhi hay...un poet ki 1st line mein same he hay jesi k meri iss ghzal ki hay
    thanks

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    nice 1 yar ..............

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    it is excellent..........................

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    Re: Apni zindagi k azab likhon

    Boht Umdaaa

    maza aya perh ker

    Likhte rahiee

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    khobsorat.............

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