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  1. 01-09-2012 #1
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    compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    Asalam-o-Alikum;

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    Rsm-e-Duniya ko nibhana ho ga
    tlkh yadoon ko bhulana ho ga
    رسم دنیا کو نبھانا ہو گا
    تلخ یادوں کو بھلانا ہو گا

    Is ana key but ko dekho ab tu
    war-e-ulfat se girana ho ga
    اس انا کے بت کو دیکھو اب تو
    وار الفت سے گرانا ہو گا
    aa giya hai sal-e-no rub janey
    kis tarah ab ke zamana hoga
    آ گیا ہے سال نورب جانے
    کس طرح اب کے زمانہ ہو گا



    Asr-e-hazir aendhun ki jaghe
    haN laho apna jalanaa hoga
    عصر حاضر ایندھن کی جگھ
    ہاں لہو اپنا جلانا ہو گا

    jane waley tu zara sun le ke
    lot kr tujh ko phr aana hoga
    جانے والے تو ذرا سن لے کے
    تجھ کو لوٹ کر پھر آنا ہو گا
    In khayaloon ko tujhey abid sun
    apne lafzo maiN sajana hoga
    ان خیالوں کو تجھےعابد سن
    اپنے لفظوں میں سجانا ہو گا



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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    walaikum Assalam
    bohat khoob

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    W salam n Well come back

    اس انا کے بت کو دیکھو اب تو
    وار الفت سے گرانا ہو گا
    Alaaaaaaaaa

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    Waalikum Asslaam

    bohat acha likha ap ne

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    zabardast,,,,,,,,,,,best of luck for the compt.......!!!

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    zindgi boht masroof ho gaie hay---------------------

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    wah wah maar dala zalim

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    wasalam!buhat khoob................

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    Assalam-o-alykum naveed bhai

    welcome again after a long time

    bht achii ghazal kahi ab k bar bhiii

    her shair khoob lagaa

    جانے والے تو ذرا سن لے کے
    تجھ کو لوٹ کر پھر آنا ہو گا

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    تمھاری آنکھ سے دل تک سفر کرنا ہے بس ہم کو
    یہ کتنی خوبصورت منزلوں کا راستہ ہوگا



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    میں عام سا ہمیشہ ہوں ، تو خاص سا مسلسل ہے!



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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

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    wah wah maar dala zalim

    Bhai G Tareef main thora huth hola rakhoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Assalam-o-alykum naveed bhai

    welcome again after a long time

    bht achii ghazal kahi ab k bar bhiii

    her shair khoob lagaa

    جانے والے تو ذرا سن لے کے
    تجھ کو لوٹ کر پھر آنا ہو گا

    WaAlikum As Salaam!!!!!!!!!

    Thanks for the cmnts!!!!!!!!!!! Hamesha ki tarha app ka VM ab bhi bund hai????????????????????????????????

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    bht acha likha ..Best Of luck for compeitition

    رسم دنیا کو نبھانا ہو گا
    تلخ یادوں کو بھلانا ہو گا
    bht acha likhaa..

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    ڈوبا ہوا ہے دل میرا خوابوں کی جھیل میں

    آنکھوں میں خواہشوں کی تھکن کا خمار ہے






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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

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    walaikum assalam !!
    bohut khoob bro


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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    behtreen..umda..lajawab..as always..kia baat hai..!!!wish u a best of luck...

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    hahahhaha kyun tareef hazam nahi howi kiya

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    bohut khoob bro
    keep it up

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    Re: compitition of poet korner for non tag holderz january 2012 (Rsm-e-Duniya Ko Nibhana Ho ga)

    welcome back Nabbas sb.

    App ki ghazal perhi ... Best of luck or the competition...

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    bohat khoob
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