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  1. 10-13-2011 #1
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    humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    ہمیں نیند سے جب جگانے وہ آے
    لگا خواب کوئی چرانے وہ آے

    پہن کر لباس-ے-فقیری شہر مے
    نہ جانے کسے آزمانے وہ آے

    لگا روگ ہے جو محبّت کا تجھ کو
    حقیقت اسی کی بتانے وہ آے

    پڑھی جا سکی نہ جو تحریر اب تک
    اسی کو دلوں سے مٹانے وہ آے

    امیدوں کی کشتی لگی ڈولنے تھی
    اسی کو کنارے لگانے وہ آے


    humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye
    laga khuwab koii churaney wo aaye

    pehan kar libaas-e-faqeeri shehar may
    na janey kisay aazmaney wo aaye

    laga roog hai jo muhabbat ka tujh ko
    haqiqat usi ki bataney wo aaye

    parhi ja saki na jo tehreer ab tak
    usi ko diloN se mitaney wo aaye

    umeedoN ki kashti lagi doolney thi
    usi ko kinarey laganey wo aaye




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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    khoooob........

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    bht khooob mashallah

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    na janey kisay aazmaney wo aaye

    bohot khoob..Qais ji...
    aaj bhi log....der bder phirtay hain....
    ksi azmaesh mn..ya ksi ko aazmanay k liye...
    acha klam hai janab....
    shadab rahain...

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    boht zyada khoob........................

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    بہت خوب قیس جی......اچھی کوشش رہی، داد قبول کیجئے...

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    tamam doston ki aamad ka teh-e-dil sey mashkoor hon jazakallah

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    Bohat khoob.. achy ashaar kahay.. Nawazish

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    ​buhat shukriyya withlove ji jazakallah

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    bohut khoob aziz sahib
    daad qubool kijeye
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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

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    bohut khoob aziz sahib
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    buhat nawazish roshnee ji jazakallah keep visiting..........

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    khoob janab,
    aabad rahyea..ameen

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

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    khoob janab,
    aabad rahyea..ameen
    ​buhat shukriyya farukh ji keep visiting

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    پڑھی جا سکی نہ جو تحریر اب تک
    اسی کو دلوں سے مٹانے وہ آے

    bohot khoob....................

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    Quote Originally Posted by SaamK View Post
    پڑھی جا سکی نہ جو تحریر اب تک
    اسی کو دلوں سے مٹانے وہ آے

    bohot khoob....................
    ​buhat nawazish janab keep visiting jazakallah

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    Very nice Qais brother. Keep it up

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    Very nice Qais brother. Keep it up

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    ​zulfiqar bhai buhat nawazish jazakallah keep visiting

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    veryyyyy nice sharing

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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

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    veryyyyy nice sharing
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    Re: humaiN neend se jab jaganey wo aaye

    Qais sahab very lovely ghazal ....superb effort!!! heartly thanks and heartly blessingssssssssss ...keep it up!!!

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