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    MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

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    Re: MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

    wahhh.... bohat umda ghazal kahi ha
    dhairoon daad qabol kijeye
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    Re: MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

    Buhat Khoob Likha Ahsan

    Acha hai ...

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    Re: MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

    wo merd e huq jisay idraak e hist o bood hua
    wo baakhabar tha, bazahir wo be-khabar bhatka

    khubsurat ghazal jiska haasil mundarja balla sher thera..
    haqeeqat hay keh jub idraak e hist o bood say aashnaii hojaye tu banda faqeer hi hojata hay, aur jinko idraak nahi woh Khudda Shanaas banay phirtay haiN..
    sooch kay zawyoon ko wusat dety huii yeah ghazal bohhut passand ayee.
    khubsurat ghazal, Ahsan, daad qubool karo..
    aabad raho..ameen

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    Re: MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

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    wo merd e huq jisay idraak e hist o bood hua
    wo baakhabar tha, bazahir wo be-khabar bhatka

    khubsurat ghazal jiska haasil mundarja balla sher thera..
    haqeeqat hay keh jub idraak e hist o bood say aashnaii hojaye tu banda faqeer hi hojata hay, aur jinko idraak nahi woh Khudda Shanaas banay phirtay haiN..
    sooch kay zawyoon ko wusat dety huii yeah ghazal bohhut passand ayee.
    khubsurat ghazal, Ahsan, daad qubool karo..
    aabad raho..ameen
    Himmat'afzaii Per Shukrguzar HooN Farrukh Bhaii..... Shaad Rahiye!

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    Re: MaiN Shehr'e Zaat Se Nikla Tu Dar Ba'dar BhaTka

    the beauty of thoughts is very unique!!!!greatly written!!!!wonderful poetry!!! thank u so much for sharing wid us...blessings

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