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  1. 04-02-2012 #1
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    paa kay tujh ko







    Assalam o alaikum friends

    aik dost kay naam ye ghazal
    umeed hay apko pasand ay gi
    kuch kami ho zaroor agah kejiye ga












    جس زندگی کی تلاش تھی سب کو
    ,مل گئی ہے مجھے پا کے صرف تجھ کو

    ,یہ خوشی یہ گیت انجان سے تھے کبھی
    بننے لگی ہے ان سے میری زندگی پا کے صرف     تجھ کو

    ,جو رہتے تھے مجھ سے خفا کبھی
    اب ہوں انکی خوشی پا     کے تجھ کو

    !نہ جانا مجھے چھوڑ کے کبھیاے دوست
    میں ہوں مکمل لیکن پا کےصرف تجھ کو









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  3. 04-02-2012 #2
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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

    Buhat Khooob Likha

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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

    wah kya baat hai Adiva....................thanks

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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

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    Assalam o alaikum friends

    aik dost kay naam ye ghazal
    umeed hay apko pasand ay gi
    kuch kami ho zaroor agah kejiye ga












    جس زندگی کی تلاش تھی سب کو
    ,مل گئی ہے مجھے پا کے صرف تجھ کو

    ,یہ خوشی یہ گیت انجان سے تھے کبھی
    بننے لگی ہے ان سے میری زندگی پا کے صرف     تجھ کو

    ,جو رہتے تھے مجھ سے خفا کبھی
    اب ہوں انکی خوشی پا ک تجھ کو

    !نہ جانا مجھے چھوڑ کے کبھیاے دوست
    میں ہوں مکمل لیکن پا کےصرف تجھ کو







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    lush ... sajni..................

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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

    WOW!!! Amazing!! A nice presentation dear friend. Each and every word keep lots of love. Simply great!!!

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    WOW!!! Amazing!! A nice presentation dear friend. Each and every word keep lots of love. Simply great!!!
    thanx gee..........

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    wah kya baat hai Adiva....................thanks
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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

    aham to u poet bhi ho chaa gae ho janab apto

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    aham to u poet bhi ho chaa gae ho janab apto
    the tau nai ab ho gae hoon...

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    l3uhat khool3 Adiva ....

    Keep writing...

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    Zabardast,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    the tau nai ab ho gae hoon...

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    aiilaaaaaaaaaa ye emotion mera fav hai :-p well best ov luck madam

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    aiilaaaaaaaaaa ye emotion mera fav hai :-p well best ov luck madam
    hahahaha...acha ye lijye phir..........

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    hahahaha...acha ye lijye phir..........

    arey thankoo itne ziada k liye u knw mein khud bhi ese kr rha hun abhi hehehe :-p

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    Re: paa kay tujh ko

    ,مل گئی ہے مجھے پا کے صرف تجھ کو

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    thanks........
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    woww thats really lovely poetry!!!!lucky person for whom you did this great job!!!!!!!!!heartly thanks ...blessing my dear!!!!

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