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  1. 12-29-2012 #1
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    koi ja k soorj ko ye na bata day.....


    تو ہوتا تو تجھ کو بہت کچھ بتاتے
    کہاں ہے دسمبر کچھ اپنا پتہ دے
    بنایا ہے میں نے برف کا گھروندہ
    کوئ جا کے سورج کو یہ نہ بتا دے

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    Re: koi ja k soorj ko ye na bata day.....

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    Re: koi ja k soorj ko ye na bata day.....

    hmm Acha hai ...

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    Re: koi ja k soorj ko ye na bata day.....

    beautiful lines!!!!! thanks for sharing honey!!!! God blesss you

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