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[Gul-e-Nayaab]

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[Mamin Mirza]

hahaha itne himmat nahen hay abhi janaab ..lolzz
itne ache likhaia hay amna ki ..or mere hahahahah

chupnay ki koi jagah hai,
abhi tak main kuch kuch himmat kar rahi thi,sharing k liye but ye aamo ka khush khat dekh kar saray hoslay jawab day rahay hain,

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

janaab aap bhi nahen chup sakten ...ab to share karna he paryga ... koi bhi bahana nahen chalay ga samjheen aap ...
actually adab korner hay na is liye adab sy baat karna zaroori hay ...
samjh to gai hongi aap .///

chupnay ki koi jagah hai,
abhi tak main kuch kuch himmat kar rahi thi,sharing k liye but ye aamo ka khush khat dekh kar saray hoslay jawab day rahay hain,

[sfaseehrabbani]

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

wah kiya he kehnay janaab ... bayhud haseen sharing ...or aap ki khush khati ka to jawaab he nahen ...lajawaab ...
ab main or muhtaat ho gai hoon ...hahaha

[sfaseehrabbani]

wah kiya he kehnay janaab ... bayhud haseen sharing ...or aap ki khush khati ka to jawaab he nahen ...lajawaab ...
ab main or muhtaat ho gai hoon ...hahaha

آپ کا بہت شکریہ
محتاط بے شک ہوں آپ لیکن آپ کو پیش تو کرنا ہی پڑے گی اپنے ہاتھ کی لکھی تحریر۔
پتا نہیں میں نے صحیح سمجھا ہے یا ایسے لکھ گیا ہوں؟

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

hahaha aap nay bilkul sahih samjha hay ... main muhtaat ho gaoi hoon mashaALLAH aap ki hand writing buhut he khoobsorat hay khattati jaysi ... khoob
to hamain to darna he paryga na ...

آپ کا بہت شکریہ
محتاط بے شک ہوں آپ لیکن آپ کو پیش تو کرنا ہی پڑے گی اپنے ہاتھ کی لکھی تحریر۔
پتا نہیں میں نے صحیح سمجھا ہے یا ایسے لکھ گیا ہوں؟

[Mamin Mirza]

janaab aap bhi nahen chup sakten ...ab to share karna he paryga ... koi bhi bahana nahen chalay ga samjheen aap ...
actually adab korner hay na is liye adab sy baat karna zaroori hay ...
samjh to gai hongi aap .///

ji ji bilkul bilkul samjh gai hoon main,gosha e adab hain yahan sirf jaghray ho saktay hain,tafreeh nahi,
share tou kar dongi,lekin likh kar kaun day ge ye tay hona abhi baqi hai.........!!!

[sfaseehrabbani]

hahaha aap nay bilkul sahih samjha hay ... main muhtaat ho gaoi hoon mashaALLAH aap ki hand writing buhut he khoobsorat hay khattati jaysi ... khoob
to hamain to darna he paryga na ...

آپ کا بہت شکریہ کہ میرے خط کی تعریف کی۔ آپ نے ہمت بندھائی ہے تو ایک اور غزل پیش کر رہا ہوں۔

[diya Imaan]

ahaan ..great ...

bohat acha silsila shuru kia Gohar ...

but meri writing tu lol abhi tk yahi comments miltay hain " bachon wali writing "

or Faseeh sahib ki writing tu kmaal hia ... itna acha tu main inpage main b na likh sakon lol

[pari girl]

nice .......................

may to kuch share hi ni kr skti hn
bs phr k comment karo gi

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

shukriya janaab ...
acha koi bahana nahen chalay ga sub nay share karna ahy ..or agar kalaam share nahen ka sakten to comments likh kar share kar sakte hoo ..

ahaan ..great ...

bohat acha silsila shuru kia Gohar ...

but meri writing tu lol abhi tk yahi comments miltay hain " bachon wali writing "

or Faseeh sahib ki writing tu kmaal hia ... itna acha tu main inpage main b na likh sakon lol

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

jani kuch likh nahen sakten to tum comments likh kar sahre kar do ... yeh thread esi liye hay ..kalaam bhi apni writing ka or us kay comments bhi ..bas main nay is liye comments par zoor nahen diya kay kisi ko mushkil na ho ..

nice .......................

may to kuch share hi ni kr skti hn
bs phr k comment karo gi

[pari girl]

jani kuch likh nahen sakten to tum comments likh kar sahre kar do ... yeh thread esi liye hay ..kalaam bhi apni writing ka or us kay comments bhi ..bas main nay is liye comments par zoor nahen diya kay kisi ko mushkil na ho ..

awww thank u so much siso jani

wasy mujye shryi may interest to kfi hy
mood ho to lik b lyti hn but share nai hota yr muj se bht galtiya hoti hy

[BENAM]

Hahaa....... Kia idea mara hai! Ab sab lag jayen ge achha achha likhnay! Chalo isi bahanay likhayee behtar ho jaye gi.
Chalo shukr hai me sher nahin kehta! Hahahaha........

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Wah ji! Jab doosra safha shuru hua to mujhay ye dekhnay k liay k kis ne itni achhi nazm likhi hai mujhay khusoosi taur pe ooper ja k dekhan parra! Well done!
Barah-e mehrbani mujhay zaroor tag kia karen apni posts main.

Lijiye ham haazir hain apne homework k saath.........

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Kia kehnay Fasih sb! Bahot khoob! Aur ye jo aap k dil main deep sa jala hua hai na ye bahot he achha hai. Ye piyar, ye gham, ye yaden ye dard aur ye shama ki lagatar jalti hui low... Bahot he achhi hai ye. Is tarha ki jot jagaye zinda katay gi to kia he zindagi ho gi. Aap yaqeenan behtar jantay hn.

Ap k khoobsoorat khat ne mujay aik dost ki yad dila dee. Wo bhi katay markar se likhta tha aur kia he khat tha us ka! Aj us jahan main halchal macha dee ap ne. Shukrya!

Mazeed shairee ka intizar rahay ga.

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Barri mehrbani achhi achhi c Gohar sis! Aur please zyada zor dena bhi nahin comments pe!

jani kuch likh nahen sakten to tum comments likh kar sahre kar do ... yeh thread esi liye hay ..kalaam bhi apni writing ka or us kay comments bhi ..bas main nay is liye comments par zoor nahen diya kay kisi ko mushkil na ho ..

[sfaseehrabbani]

Kia kehnay Fasih sb! Bahot khoob! Aur ye jo aap k dil main deep sa jala hua hai na ye bahot he achha hai. Ye piyar, ye gham, ye yaden ye dard aur ye shama ki lagatar jalti hui low... Bahot he achhi hai ye. Is tarha ki jot jagaye zinda katay gi to kia he zindagi ho gi. Aap yaqeenan behtar jantay hn.

Ap k khoobsoorat khat ne mujay aik dost ki yad dila dee. Wo bhi katay markar se likhta tha aur kia he khat tha us ka! Aj us jahan main halchal macha dee ap ne. Shukrya!

Mazeed shairee ka intizar rahay ga.

جناب بے نام صاحب
آپ کے ان دل خوش کُن کلمات کے لیے بہت شکرگزار ہوں آپ کا۔

آنکھوں میں اپنی ایک ستارہ لیے ہوئے
چلتے ہیں روشنی کا سہارا لیے ہوئے

آپ کے دوست کو اللہ تعالیٰ خوش رکھے، وہ جہاں بھی ہے۔

ایک اور غزل آپ کے حکم پر پیش ہے۔

[*AFAQ ALI*]

hahaha itne himmat nahen hay abhi janaab ..lolzz
itne ache likhaia hay amna ki ..or mere hahahahah

Array bhi Himmat ham banein ge Pehlay ham KG k bachaon wali Hand writing me Aik nazam aap ko share karien ge
Befikar rahein hamri Hand writing dekh kar aap ki himmat khud hi ban jae ge

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

Array bhi Himmat ham banein ge Pehlay ham KG k bachaon wali Hand writing me Aik nazam aap ko share karien ge
Befikar rahein hamri Hand writing dekh kar aap ki himmat khud hi ban jae ge

hahahaha ...bilkul janaab ..baysabri sy intezaar rahy ga ap ki bhi hand writing ka ...
to kub share kar rahy hian aap ???

[*AFAQ ALI*]

hahahaha ...bilkul janaab ..baysabri sy intezaar rahy ga ap ki bhi hand writing ka ...
to kub share kar rahy hian aap ???

Bbaba Adam k zamane me aik nazam kahi thi Purani diarrion me pichlay 2 din se talash kar rhae hein aik do linein yaad hein jaise hi mili likh kar share kar dien ge
waise wo nazam zaroor islah talab ho gi acha he is bahne jo ghalti ho gi durast ho jae gi

[Gul-e-Nayaab]

Bbaba Adam k zamane me aik nazam kahi thi Purani diarrion me pichlay 2 din se talash kar rhae hein aik do linein yaad hein jaise hi mili likh kar share kar dien ge
waise wo nazam zaroor islah talab ho gi acha he is bahne jo ghalti ho gi durast ho jae gi

aahaan zabardast bilkul janab aap yahana share kejye .. or ghalti ki fikar na karen ... yahaan par esa kuch nahen ...

[amnarani]

[MENTION=53178]BENAM[/MENTION]
nazm pasand karne ka boht shukriya...........ab apko tag kar diya karun gi.......