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  1. 01-28-2012 #1
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    کافی عرصے کے بعد ایک روز جب اُس کا گزر افضل خان کی مسجد کی طرف سے ہوا تو لوگوں کا ایک غیر معمولی گروہ دیکھ کر اُس نے اپنی کار روک دی۔
    لوگوں میں بچوں کی تعداد زیادہ تھی۔ کچھ لڑکے / بالے تھے، چند ایک عمر رسیدہ بڈھے بھی تھے اور کچھ نوجوان قریب دوکانوں کے ملازمین یا مالکان تھے۔ ہجوم کے یہ لوگ کسی کے گرد جمگھٹا بنا کر کھڑے تھے۔
    طاہر جب ہجوم میں پہنچا تو دیکھا کہ ایک شخص گردن جھکائے، شرمندہ شرمندہ سا گدھے پہ بٹھا یا گیا تھا۔ لوگوں نے اُس کے منہ پہ کالک پونتھ رکھی تھی۔

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    very nice sharing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    BoHat UmmDA TeHreEr KHooooB

    sHare kArte RaHA kArein ... !

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    ہم لوگ بھی مرید اُسی سلسلے کے ہیں


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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    salaaaam ......
    ma sha'a ALLAh .. bhooot he khoob likha aap ne
    parh kar acha laga ....

    keep writing & sharing us ...

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    اچھی تحریر ہے، شئیر کرنے کے لیے بہت شکریہ۔

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    kabhi kabhi tehreerien kitni jaandaar hoti hain.............thori dair ko laga main bhi kisi mazar ke sehn main baithi hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bohat kamal ki tehreer!!!!!!heartly thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss keep creating magic in writingssssssssssssss

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    Mashallah Bohut Acha Likha hai.........
    Humary Sath Share kerny Klye Bohut Bohut Shukria.......
    Likhty rahiye ..........Khush rahiye .....

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    رک جائیں جو کچھ دیر تو ہم بیٹھ کے دم لیں
    بدلے ہی چلے جاتے ہیں حالات مسلسل

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    bohat khob ....... tehreer ki sab se bari khubi ye hoti he k wo parnay walay k zehan par aik aksi project on kar de or parnay wala istarah mehsus karay k wo sab kuch us k samnay ho raha he,,,,,,aap ki tehreer pehlay bhi pari thi
    maza aya tha ,,,is martaba bhi aap ne khooooooob likhi ,,sharing k shukria

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    Quote Originally Posted by seerat123 View Post
    very nice sharing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
    Bohat bohat shukriya aap ka.....

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    Shukriya, g mari pori koshish hoti hai k jaisay hi kuch likhon ussay share kr doon.

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    Shukriya, g mari pori koshish hoti hai k jaisay hi kuch likhon ussay share kr doon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sweet eyes View Post
    salaaaam ......
    ma sha'a ALLAh .. bhooot he khoob likha aap ne
    parh kar acha laga ....

    keep writing & sharing us ...
    Bohat bohat shukriya aap ka.

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    اچھی تحریر ہے، شئیر کرنے کے لیے بہت شکریہ۔
    bari karam nawai aap ki. Shukriya

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    Quote Originally Posted by Savi Abbas View Post
    kabhi kabhi tehreerien kitni jaandaar hoti hain.............thori dair ko laga main bhi kisi mazar ke sehn main baithi hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bohat kamal ki tehreer!!!!!!heartly thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss keep creating magic in writingssssssssssssss
    Savi, main aap ka bohat mashkoor hoon k aap ko mari yeh kawish pasand aaye aur mujhe pasand aya k aap nay issay iss trha pasand kiya . Insha Allah main aeinda bhi likhta rhoon ga. Aap k waqat ka bohat bohat shukriya.

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    Mashallah Bohut Acha Likha hai.........
    Humary Sath Share kerny Klye Bohut Bohut Shukria.......
    Likhty rahiye ..........Khush rahiye .....
    Bari nawazish bohat karam aap ka.....Khoonsla afzai aur daad o tehseen ka shukriya....Khush rhain...

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    Quote Originally Posted by *AFAQ ALI* View Post
    bohat khob ....... tehreer ki sab se bari khubi ye hoti he k wo parnay walay k zehan par aik aksi project on kar de or parnay wala istarah mehsus karay k wo sab kuch us k samnay ho raha he,,,,,,aap ki tehreer pehlay bhi pari thi
    maza aya tha ,,,is martaba bhi aap ne khooooooob likhi ,,sharing k shukria
    Afaq, likhnay walay k liye bhi izat aur khushi ka muqam yehi hai k parhnay walay ko uss ki tehreer uss k rang main millay. Jaisa parhnay wala chahy, waisa hi woh ussay apnay zehn k parday pay mehsoos bhi kry...pehlay bhi aur ab bhi pasandeedgee ka shukriya.
    Umeed hai aeinda bhi Qaraein k zooq k mayar pay pora utroon ga.
    Aap ka aur baqi sab kabi bhat shukriya...

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    ek aur achi tehreer bro aaapka andaz bht sadaaaa aur achaa hai..

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    hamesha ki tarha....is baar bhi...umda andaaz liye....kahaani likhne ki mahaarat ke sath..aap ne aik aur achi tehreer paish ki............bohot khoob..!!!

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    Waqai aap nay kamaal likha hai. Bohat zabardast hai. Aap ka style bhi aur theme bhi.......

    Thanks for sharing.........!!

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    nice share..............................

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    zabardast tarhreer..............
    parh k buhat acha laga.........................

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    Re: Rab-ul-Alamein: Intezaar

    Very nice sharing and exact title Intezar, wo intezar jo hatam hi nai ho paye ga.
    Thanx for sharing, keep it up....

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    You seriously have talent...Mashallah!

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    You seriously have talent...Mashallah!
    Sir behud shukriya....Umeed hai aeinda bhi aap ki raye jannany ka moqa millay ga.

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    Zaroor..kiun nahi...these works are pulling me here..don't u worry son;)

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