Friends Korner. . .Yariyaaan (Hissa Soyum. .. part 3l)

[Amer Aiyaar]

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part -1 link: http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...-awwal-267697/

part - 2 link: http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...rt-2-a-268006/

[*AFAQ ALI*]

Biluk pasand ai,,,,,,Keep it up.....bhateejay

[Savi Abbas]

Amer itni choti qist...parhne main itna maza araha tha.....chu pagal larkay next kab likhogay wari bataoo jadi se!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tabsra end main!!!!!!!!!okay !!!!!!!!!!

[BaZiNgA]

Thanks for the tag again
Itna jaldi mein parhti nai hoon...jitna jaldi ap likhte ho:p
Will read all three parts very soon...n giv u my opinion...bt so far...keep it up dude

[Nabbas]

Zaberdust !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bhai bohat umdah likha hai kahani bari rawani key sath agey barh rahi hai lekin ab mazeed intizar nahin hota !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yar Aik bar main hi sari kahani post ker do km az kum dil ko itminan tu ho jaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kahani bohat umdah aur haqeeqat sey qareeb hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Qari ko yehi maloom hota hai jesey yeh sub manazer us ney appni aankhoon sey dekhey hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bohat khobsoorat likhney per dhairoon daad qabool kijyee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Agley part ka intizar rahey ga aur umeed kerta hoon app juld az juld agla part post ker dain gey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dua hai key Allah Pak app ki salahiyatoon main aur izafa fermaye!!!!!!! Ameen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Amer Aiyaar]

Biluk pasand ai,,,,,,Keep it up.....bhateejay

Chahooo. . bas tum tareef ker dety ho tu samjhta hon mahnat qubool ho gai. . . keep saady kol hay hi naih. . . wern aup hi up rakhta. . . hahahaha

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Amer itni choti qist...parhne main itna maza araha tha.....chu pagal larkay next kab likhogay wari bataoo jadi se!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tabsra end main!!!!!!!!!okay !!!!!!!!!!

Savi the Honey. . . thora thora aur thanda ker ke khany me hi tu maza aata he. . .
ab dekho 13 pages upload kiye hian at a time, aur tum kehti ho ke choti qist. . . chalo me aaj hi 4th part likhna shoroo ker deta hon. . .ok waja.

han ji end me ker dena. . . aap ko chhoot deta hon. . .

thanx for liking. . . baba achi khasi mahnat ho ti he. . . aur jab tareeef ho jay saameney se tu kuch aur nahi faqt Dil bara ho jata he. thanx to u dear.

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Thanks for the tag again
Itna jaldi mein parhti nai hoon...jitna jaldi ap likhte ho:p
Will read all three parts very soon...n giv u my opinion...bt so far...keep it up dude

dudette. . .ab tu tum bas dekhti jao. . kinna tag kerta hon tum ko. . .zakhmi ker doonga kohni maar maar ke. . .hahahhaa

chalo araam araam se parh lo. . .nahi ye forum kahian ja rahi he. . na hi hamari train chhoot rahi he .. araam se parho. . pata kia juldi juldi me maza nahi aata.

yep ofcourse. . . i need ur valuable pinion. . . my pleasure. . i m waiting for ur comments.

thanx to come here. .. really thankful to u.

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Zaberdust !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bhai bohat umdah likha hai kahani bari rawani key sath agey barh rahi hai lekin ab mazeed intizar nahin hota !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yar Aik bar main hi sari kahani post ker do km az kum dil ko itminan tu ho jaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kahani bohat umdah aur haqeeqat sey qareeb hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Qari ko yehi maloom hota hai jesey yeh sub manazer us ney appni aankhoon sey dekhey hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bohat khobsoorat likhney per dhairoon daad qabool kijyee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Agley part ka intizar rahey ga aur umeed kerta hoon app juld az juld agla part post ker dain gey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dua hai key Allah Pak app ki salahiyatoon main aur izafa fermaye!!!!!!! Ameen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yaar . . . tum bhi na. . sharmindah ho jaty ho gey . .. meri itni tareef ker key. . hahahha
mery na dimagh me tumhara ek Nick aaya he. . i m sure tum ko suit kary ga. . and that is. . Nabbo Dabbo. . . ahahhaha
dear mind mat kerna. . piyaar se kaha he. . . aur ager ghussa aajy tu bhabi ke paas chaly jana. . 2, 3 jhaar pilaain gi tum ko to aap hi thandey ho jao gey. . . ahahahhahah

Thanx for liking dear. baqi sab ko tu bat alug he. . . per tumhara pata he kia he. . . mujhey lagta he ke bohat ghor se aur mazy ley ley ker reading kerty ho. . . jabhi bhapoor comment receive hoty hian hamesha tumhari side se.

phir tum khud ek achy writer aur poet ho. . .no doubt. . . es liye like Savi. . . alfaz aur jumloon ki ghraai aur onka tanaazur tasawwurati tor per mahsoos kerty ho. . . ye ek bohat aala quality he tum me. . .

me aaj hi start ker deta hon typing. . . kion ke me writing kerta nhia. . bas jo kuch he . . hamay bhaijey me mujood hian . . at once type kerta hon. . . aur ek hi baar proofing . . 3rd time kabhi apni tahreer per nazar naih daalta. . .kion ke os ke baad aap logoon ke comments dekh ker examin ker leta hon ke tahreer kesi rahi. . .

yaar bohat bohat shukria. . . dil khush ker diy meera itni tareef ker key. . . ager tum au rtum jesy pahney waaly log na ho forum per, tu kabhi na likhon. . . aur likh bhi loon tu share na kar sakoon.

meri taraf se bhabi ke haath ki garma garam tea pi leena. . . best wishes for u and bhabi. . . keep smiling.
thanx from the depth of my heart.

[Nabbas]

yaar . . . tum bhi na. . sharmindah ho jaty ho gey . .. meri itni tareef ker key. . hahahha
mery na dimagh me tumhara ek Nick aaya he. . i m sure tum ko suit kary ga. . and that is. . Nabbo Dabbo. . . ahahhaha
dear mind mat kerna. . piyaar se kaha he. . . aur ager ghussa aajy tu bhabi ke paas chaly jana. . 2, 3 jhaar pilaain gi tum ko to aap hi thandey ho jao gey. . . ahahahhahah

Thanx for liking dear. baqi sab ko tu bat alug he. . . per tumhara pata he kia he. . . mujhey lagta he ke bohat ghor se aur mazy ley ley ker reading kerty ho. . . jabhi bhapoor comment receive hoty hian hamesha tumhari side se.

phir tum khud ek achy writer aur poet ho. . .no doubt. . . es liye like Savi. . . alfaz aur jumloon ki ghraai aur onka tanaazur tasawwurati tor per mahsoos kerty ho. . . ye ek bohat aala quality he tum me. . .

me aaj hi start ker deta hon typing. . . kion ke me writing kerta nhia. . bas jo kuch he . . hamay bhaijey me mujood hian . . at once type kerta hon. . . aur ek hi baar proofing . . 3rd time kabhi apni tahreer per nazar naih daalta. . .kion ke os ke baad aap logoon ke comments dekh ker examin ker leta hon ke tahreer kesi rahi. . .

yaar bohat bohat shukria. . . dil khush ker diy meera itni tareef ker key. . . ager tum au rtum jesy pahney waaly log na ho forum per, tu kabhi na likhon. . . aur likh bhi loon tu share na kar sakoon.

meri taraf se bhabi ke haath ki garma garam tea pi leena. . . best wishes for u and bhabi. . . keep smiling.
thanx from the depth of my heart.

Yar jo marzi kehna hai keh loo I never mind it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rahi Bat gussey ki tu woh bohat kum hi ata hai mjhey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ab mujh per lazim hai key app key dimagh ki bhi tareef karoon esey log bohat kum hotey hain jo sirf aur sirf dimagh key saharey itni achi nigarishat muratib kertyey hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Baqi janab main aur mujh main aik aadut mushtariq hai key main bhi koi tehree sirf type kerta hoon likhta nahin hoon aur proof reading key baad usey share ker deta hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lekin poetry key mamley main qisa mukhtalif hai us main likhney sey ley ker islah tuk key tamam pehloo shamil hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhai bat yeh hey key app ney munzer kashi be-hud haseen andaz main ki hai , han thori bohat shair-o-shaeiry sey unsiyut honey ki wajha sey meri his-e- takheyul kafi behter hai main koshih kerta hoon jo kuch bhi parhoon tu takheyul main usey mehsoos karoon tehreer parhney ka maza tu tub hi aata hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Baqi baz tehrerain esi hoti hain jo insan ko apney seher main jaker leti hain aur "Yariyan" bila shuba un tehreroon main sey aik tehreer hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me waiting for Part -4....

Allah pak app ko hamesha khush o khurum aur aasoda hal rakhey Aameen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Amer Aiyaar]

Yar jo marzi kehna hai keh loo I never mind it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rahi Bat gussey ki tu woh bohat kum hi ata hai mjhey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ab mujh per lazim hai key app key dimagh ki bhi tareef karoon esey log bohat kum hotey hain jo sirf aur sirf dimagh key saharey itni achi nigarishat muratib kertyey hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Baqi janab main aur mujh main aik aadut mushtariq hai key main bhi koi tehree sirf type kerta hoon likhta nahin hoon aur proof reading key baad usey share ker deta hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lekin poetry key mamley main qisa mukhtalif hai us main likhney sey ley ker islah tuk key tamam pehloo shamil hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhai bat yeh hey key app ney munzer kashi be-hud haseen andaz main ki hai , han thori bohat shair-o-shaeiry sey unsiyut honey ki wajha sey meri his-e- takheyul kafi behter hai main koshih kerta hoon jo kuch bhi parhoon tu takheyul main usey mehsoos karoon tehreer parhney ka maza tu tub hi aata hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Baqi baz tehrerain esi hoti hain jo insan ko apney seher main jaker leti hain aur "Yariyan" bila shuba un tehreroon main sey aik tehreer hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me waiting for Part -4....

Allah pak app ko hamesha khush o khurum aur aasoda hal rakhey Aameen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

arey nahi nahi. . .aap ne meeri tareef ker ke dar-asal apni khush ikhlaqi ko wazh kia he .. . werna tu. . . hahhaha

maloom nahi ji ke dimagh ye bhi yanahi. . . apna tu dabba kasr gol hi rehta he. . . hahaha

aap ki takhayul ki tareef hum pehly hi kar chukey hina. . . aap kahain t osey hi muqarar ke tor per copy paste ker dety hain. . .

sir ji. . .bari maharbani. . ek honor he ke meri tahreer ka sahar aap ne mahsoos kia. . . bari nawazish. . .
next part bas abhi aay ake jabhi aaya. . .
ab koshish karoon ga ke juldi juldi part share karoon.

duaaon ke liye baoht shukria.

[Daniel-7]

Climax per hai ab kahani. Intezar hai ab agey kis taraf mod lega yeh janne ka.

[CaLmInG MeLoDy]

بہت خوب. اس قسط میں آپ نے جان ڈال دی..بڑی مہارت سے آپ نے تحریر اس طرح ترتیب دی ہے کہ پڑھتے میں لگ رہا ہے جیسے رانیہ حسن اور باقی کے لوگوں کے ساتھ ہم بھی اس کالج میں تعلیم حاصل کر رہے ہیں. بہت عمدہ...