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    Assalam-o-Alaikum


    Aaj buhat dinoo'n baad udasi ka dorah para yaha'n aana huwa aur bila wajha bus aisey hi hi kuch lines likh dali'n aap bhi perhye


    Bus aisey hi








    Mujhey is sey buhat muhabbet hey mai’n jub kabhi bhi dukhi hota hoo’n iskey pas chala aata hoo’n ye mujhey buhat achi terha samjhta hey mairey mizaj ko samajhta hey kisi achey dost ki terha, halki halki sergoshiyoo’n mai’n mujh sey batai’n kerta hey aur maira dukh apney ander samo laita hey mairey aanso apney ander samait laita hey kisi ghumgusar ki terha, ye maira sub sey acha dost hey be gherz aur is matlabi dunia sey bilkul mukhtalif kisi sachey sathi ki terha, mai’n jub jub is key pas aaya mairey ander ek sakoon sa uter jata hey aur mai’n ghantoo’n dunya-o-mafiha sey be khaber sirf isey takta rehta hoo’n aur aaj phir mai’n buhat udas hoo’n aur na janey kyoo'n Ibn e Insha key ye ashaar mairey laboo'n per hai'n


    Ye Saraaye hai, yahaaN kiss kaa Thikana poocho
    YaaN tau aatay haiN Musafir, so chalay jaatay haiN


    HaaN yehi naam thaa, Kuch aisa hee chehra mohra
    Yaad paRta hai kay ayaa thaa musafir koii

    Soon-e-aaNgun maiN phira karta thaa tanha tanha
    Kitni gehri thee nigahouN kee udaasi uss kee

    Loug kehtay thay kay hoga koii aaseb zadah
    Hum nay aisii bhee koii baat na uss maiN dekhi


    Ye bhee himmat naa hui, pass biTha kar poochaiN
    Dil ye kehta thaa koii dard ka maraa hoga

    LouT ayaa hai jo awaaz na uss ki paii
    Jaanay kiss dar pay kissay jaa kay pukara hoga

    yaaN tau har roz ki baataiN haiN ye jeetaiN maataiN
    ye bhi chahat kay kissi khail maiN haraa hoga


    Aik tasveer thi kuch aap say milti julti
    Aik tehreer thi, par uss ka tau qissa choRo

    Chund ghazlaiN theeN kay likheeN, kabhi likh kar kaaTeeN
    Sher achay thay, jo sunn lo tau kaleja thaamo

    Buss yehi haal musafir ka thaa hum nay dekha
    Jaanay kiss rah maiN kiss shakhs nay looTa uss ko


    Guzra kartay haiN sulagtay huvay baaqi aiyaam
    Loug jub aag lagatay haiN, bujhatay bhi naheeN

    Ajnabi peet kay maarouN say kissi ko kiya kaam
    BastiyouN walay kabhi naaz uThatay bhee naheeN

    Cheen laitay haiN kissi shakhs say jee kaa araam
    phir bulatay bhee naheeN, pass biThatay bhee naheeN


    Aik din subah jo dekha tau saraye maiN na tha
    Janay kiss Des gaya hai woh deewana, dhoondho



    Hum say poocho tau, na aye ga woh jaanay wala
    Tum tau nahuq ko bhaTaknay ka bahana dhoondho

    yaaN tau ayaa jo musafir youN hee shub bhar Thehra
    yeh saraaye hai ... yahaN kiss ka Thikana dhoondho?



    shayed in ashaar key peechey mujhey apna ya ksi apney ka aks dikhai daita ho aur aisey mai'n serd mousam ki thandi hawa mairey zakhmoo'n key khurend ukhar daiti hey aur un sey rista mairi yadoo'n ka khoon qatra qatra mairey dil per tapakta jata hey,mai'n aaj phir apney kirchi kirchi wajoud ko samaitney is key pas aaya hoo'n,
    aap ager jana chahtey hai’n tu chaley jai’n keh mai’n aaj kafi dair baithoo’n ga iskey pas buhat dinoo’n baad aaya hoo’n aur buhat kuch hey aaj is sey kehney key liye keh ye Samander hi tu maira sub sey acha dost hey
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    Re: Bus aisey hi

    KHoob....keep up!

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    Re: Bus aisey hi

    Bohot Bohot Umdaa Tehreer .................!!!

    Udaas ahsaasaat o jazbaat ney goya dil ko bhi Anjaney Dard k hisar me le liya............!!!!!

    Waqai samnder ko dekh kr har shakhs key apney ahsasaat hotey hain.............

    Allah tala apko khush rakhey................!!!ameen

    aap sey request hey k aap apni tahareer google urdu translitration pr likha kigye....!!!is sey prhney me kafi asaani ho jati hey...

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    کچّا سونا ہی
    !!...بنتا ہے کُندن

    اِک دِنِ نکھرے گا
    !!...سچّا ہے گر، فن

    کیسے روک سکے
    !!..خُوشبو کو گلشن

    امجد میرے ساتھ
    !!..اَب تک ہے بچپن




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    Re: Bus aisey hi

    Bohot Khoobsoorat khayal sohail bhai..............aap MashaAllah apne khayaal ko bhi bohot ache alfaaz dena jante hain...aur phir aaj toh aap ne apni tehreer ko ibn-e-inshaa ke alfaaz se saja dia..bohot shukria shair karne ke liye...

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    Re: Bus aisey hi

    boht achi sharing hai......................

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    Re: Bus aisey hi



    Chawww gaye ho bhai jeee <3

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    Re: Bus aisey hi

    mashllah!!!! Adda saien dair se aane ki mazarat magar aap ko jab bhi parha hai lafzon ne dil ko chuwa hai .....mehsoos karien tou udasi aur samndar main kafi cheezien mushtarik hain samndar bhi udas mood ki tarahn bekinar aur baikaran hota hai magar mizajan qadre mukhtalik aik doosre se..... udasi sukoon cheen lena chahti hai jabke samndar rooh main sukoon bhar deta hai.
    superbly exressed i really liked the basic concept of this writing!!!! May mola bless you..thanks alottt

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