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    Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

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    Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    ek lamhe ko thahar mai.n tujhe patthar laa duu.n
    mai.n tere saamane ambaar lagaa duu.n lekin
    kaun se rang kaa patthar tere kaam aayegaa
    surkh patthar jise dil kahatii hai bedil duniyaa
    yaa vo pattharaa_ii hu_ii aa.nkh kaa niilaa patthar
    jis me.n sadiyo.n ke tahayyur ke pa.de ho.n dore

    kyaa tujhe ruuh ke patthar kii zaruurat hogii
    jis pe haq baat bhii patthar kii tarah giratii hai
    ik vo patthar hai jise kahate hai.n tahaziib-e-safed
    us ke mar_mar me.n siyah khuun jhalak jaataa hai
    ik insaaf kaa patthar bhii to hotaa hai magar
    haath me.n teshaa-e-zar ho to vo haath aataa hai



    jitane mayaar hai.n is daur ke sab patthar hai.n
    sher bhii raqs bhii tasviir-o-ginaa bhii patthar
    mere ilhaam teraa zahan-e-rasaa bhii patthar
    is zamaane me.n har fan kaa nishaa.n patthar hai
    haath patthar hai.n tere merii zubaa.n patthar hai
    ret se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

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    میرے دل میں اُتر سکو تو شاید یہ جان لو
    کتنی خاموش محبت تم سے کرتا ہے کوئی۔

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    Assalam-o_AlikuM WR WB

    Nice

    FeamnAllah

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    Bahot khoob..................

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    buhat khoob...

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    bohut khub*****

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    Bohat Khoob..............

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    خدا کرے کہ مری ارض پاک پر اترے
    وہ فصلِ گل جسے اندیشۂ زوال نہ ہو

    یہاں جو پھول کھلے وہ کِھلا رہے برسوں
    یہاں خزاں کو گزرنے کی بھی مجال نہ ہو

    یہاں جو سبزہ اُگے وہ ہمیشہ سبز رہے
    اور ایسا سبز کہ جس کی کوئی مثال نہ ہو
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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    bahot khoob ...............

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    bahut khoob................

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    very nice............

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    wah....................

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    bohat khoob.................:

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    bht khoob............

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    Re: Reit se but na banaa ai mere achchhe fan_kaar

    its a poetry in a modren style which is understand able
    for modren genration,

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