Aarfeen
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What???????? Really Aarfeen bhai , aap krain gay poetry ? Wow thts great ...very exciting
Main ne tu abhi se wait shuru kr dia he ... Aap ki poetry prrhny ka .... Waisy bohat Aala zooq he ab let c likhty kaisa he

Bt jnaab pehly taqtee krna tu seekhni prry gi hahahahaha .. By the way main sikhaon gi .. Aakhir mera b tu Ru'ab ho kisi par hahahahahahaha interesting

Kia Aarfeen bhai ... Jobless sis treat kaisy de ab ....
Aap itni Doulat ka aakhir kia krain gay lolxxx


By the way ..... Aap ki tabeat aadi ho gain he ab k nhi???

Hahahahahahahahahahaha .... Wo tu mujhy b abhi smjh nhi aaya ptaa nhi kia he lolxxxxx

Mujhy kua ptaa tha k ye sb itna khufnaak ho ga lolxxx
Itna shooq tha poetry krny ka hahaha ... Bt is sab ka pehly ptaa hota tu pnga hi na leti lolxxxxxx
Bt mujhy tu zraa andaza nhi tha k is k koi rules b hain uffffff

Main ne infact ghazal likhi b thi .. Ab daikh k hnsi aati he lolxx k us me kuch b theek nhi he
Ab mai ne soocha itni mehnat krni jo he tu kuch Alif Bay hi seekh lin

Lolxxxxx thanks .... Aap tareef nhi krain gay tu or kon kry ga hahahaha

Ary aik sher pr hi shairah ka title de dia ... Lolxxxx mera shooq pura ho gia he bai .... Koi shairah nhi bnna mujhy hahahaha
Ary treat kis khushi men lolxxx ... Aap ko mujhy koi prize daina chahiye na ....na k mujhy treat ......

Haye aap ko bhola nhi abhi ........Lolxxxx
Amm wo thread he na urdu shairi ka Taruf .... Us mai daikh liya krain

Itna mushkil kaam he ... Wazan brabar krny k ckron men mafhom kuch se khuch ho jata he lol
Acha sunai laikin hnsana nhi okzzzzzz

Furqat ke andhairon ka kuch haal na tum pocho
Ik deed ki khawhish hi jeeny ka bhaana he

Hahahahaha ghlti se ............
Acha tu su jain dobarah .lolxxxx

Wa alekum salam ....... Main theek hon Aarfeen bhau aap kaisy hen ab ?????

Kuch khas nhi .....

acha.......moula apko sehat yab kary ameen..........!!!
hmm main apni care kr loon ge lekin bro ap b apna khayal rakha kro..............

ohooo...........apne btaya kyun nae..................tablt khae k nae.....???
abi kasi tabiyat hai apki...........???

hahaha haan mjy yehi tha k ab ap nae ao ge...........haha haan ye toh hai..........r mosam change hony ki wajah se mera gala kharaab ho gaya hai r kuch b nae coment chek kr rae hoon lgta hai apne nae btana..............hana..........ahaam ahaam.............??