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Last Activity: 07-24-2008
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ji bilkul.. sahi samt mein hosla afzai tahreek paida kiye rakhti hai.. magar aap iski mohtaaj nahi.. MashaAllah umdah likhti hein.. aap ne jo new ghazal share ki.. khoob kahi.. bus raat ke qafiye ke saath koi eik shair hi rakhiye.. aur main jahan bhi rahon.. apni shanakht nahi badalta.. withlove hi rehta hon.. khush rahiye
Chahta to main bhi hon dard ki takmeel ho jaye
per itni jald zaabta kaisay tabdeel ho jaye
Farrukh
- Hmmmmm ye acha nahi hua...likhne waalon ko to keemti parhne waalon ki zaroorat rehti hai...I wait for ur reviews...a few good words keeps the writer going ...n i'm gonna miss u bohottt..
I don't know the reason for ur go9ing par khushi hogi gar aap ruk jaai to...humein to aapka naam bhi nahi pata...umeed hai kissi aur jazeeray par inshAllaah mulaqaat hogi...Shukriya mere kalaam par ek nazar daalne ke liye...Apna dher saara khayaal rakhiye..Jahaan bhi rahiye khush rahiye...Online shayri world is very small..maybe kissi aur jagah aapse mulaqaat zaroor hogi..
will miss u.. - Tasleemat
Yaad kernay ka Behad Shukria.. aur ji haan sab khairiat hai.. ji bohat acha socha aap ne .. khushi huee.. khaloos ka mamnoon hon.. bus yahan se dana pani uth chuka.. aap ki taza ghazliyaat parhi.. bohat achi hein.. raat bhar wali ke to kya kehnay.. maazrat ke wahan reply nahi de sakon ga.. likhti rahiye ke MashaAllah acha likhti hein.. aur dekhiye ab aap aur hum kis naye jazeeray per milty hein.. Nawazish
SehraNaward ki eik nazm yaad aa gayee.. moqay ki munasbit se.. aap ki nazr..
main yaheen kaheen hon para hua
main to eik gul hoon khila hua
tu ne sham-e-gham mein aey meherbaa'n
jo bhula dia to bikher gaya
jo bula liya to nikhar gaya
meri ham'nafas meri meherbaa'n
mujhe yaad kernay ka Shukria
mujhe yaad kernay ka Shukria !!
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove -
- Shukriya jawaab dene ke liye...InshAllaah jab tak sansein baaqi hai likhne ki koshish aur seekhne ki justujoo jaari rahegi...Apna khayaal rakhna...
- Adaab Janaab,
Would like to thank u for ur appreciation for my poems...Allaah bless u..
Umeed karungi aapka saath ainda bhi shayri ke safar main rahega... - ji Allah ka karam hai .. aur sab khairiat hai .. magar ye waslam.. matlab
main ne to aap ko koi salam nahi bhejha.. lagta hai aap ne sahi msg ghalat banday ko bhejh diya.. 
khush rahiye.. -
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About Me
- About withlove
- Biography
- main wo shaks jiske hath ki jila mey ek bi laker nai,Jazbon ki barat liye taqdiren dhondny nikla hon
- Location
- Charagh Tallay
- Interests
- Ussay kaho ke bohat na'murad shay hai junoo'n, Ussay kaho ke mujhe hai bohat junoo'n uss ka
- Occupation
- ik umr se zakhmon ka lahu chaat rahay hein, Hum log mohabbat ki saza kaat rahay hein
- Gender
- Male
- Country
- Pakistan
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- Black
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- Arial Black
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