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    ik nai ghazal by musafir

    Salamz ji,

    Adab shanas ahbaab ki khidmat mein ik baar phir ik nai kaavish k saath haazir hua hoon, umeed hay apni raaey, tanqeed aur islaah say fayazana nawazein gey.


    Bismal nahi huey hein tamasha nahi kiya
    Gham she gaey hein dard ka charcha nahi kiya

    Aisa nahi k mujh ko shikayat nahi koi
    Yeh aur baat piyaar ko ruswaa nahi kiya

    Maloom hay k zindagi anmol hay magar
    Sar day diya, zameer ka soda nahi kiya

    Jis mein fanaa huey hein usi ko khuda kiya
    Har aastaan� pe ham ney bhi sajdaa nahi kiya

    Maqtal ki baat aur wahan par ghaneem thay
    Ham nay to doston� say taqaza nahi kiya

    Dil bujh giya to aatish-e-hasrat bharak uthi
    Palkon� pe koi hasher jo barpaa nahi kiya

    Kal raat aankheion ko who manzar ajab laga
    Woh baam par bhi aaey to parda nahi kiya

    Zanjeer-e-paa-e-lab kiye sab harf-e-naa tamam
    Dil rasm-e-naaz-e-wasl shakeba nahi kiya

    Ab umr-e-raftagaan� k fasaanon� pay hay guzar
    Jeevan mein koi kaam bhi acha nahi kiya

    (musafir)

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    Re: ik nai ghazal by musafir

    I can just say 2 words for that...

    The best:

    With Regards:
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    Re: ik nai ghazal by musafir

    boht he niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    My Heart is just for u with full of Flowers

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    Re: ik nai ghazal by musafir

    Salamz ji,

    Minnat-e-kash-e-izhaar hoon k kis andaaz mein izhaar-e-mamnooniyat ko waja-e-mawaslat karoon, kher jawaban duaaon ka nazrana he paish kar sakta hoon.

    Jeetay rhaiye, bohat khush rahiye, hansty muskraty rahiye.

    musafir


    Quote Originally Posted by majidshah View Post
    I can just say 2 words for that...

    The best:

    With Regards:
    Majid Shah

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    Bohata Hi Khooob Wesaay Bhi Mujhay To Lagtaa Hay Ap Ko Words Ki Nahi Balqaay Words Ko Ap Ki Zarroraat Rehti Hay Words Ki Ye Khuwaishh hoti hay Kay Ap Kay Qalaam Ya KeyBoard Se Likhay / Type Kiye Jain Realy Nice ... Bohat Hi Khoubsorat
    May ALLAH Keep u His Care Forever....

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    Quote Originally Posted by noreen View Post
    boht he niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    Salamz ji,

    Sharf-e-qabooliyat par arsh-e-takhayul say mehv-e-guftagoo nau khez dharkanon' k komal labon say niklay mamnooniyat k alfaaz ka nazrana qabool farmaaiye.

    Jeeti rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, sada hansti muskrati rahiye.


    musafir

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    very nice .......

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    well musafir wut can i say abt ur poetry...........its always ravishing nd out class.....
    "afraid of myself "

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    Salamz ji,

    M4Musafir ji, janab ap k bohat bohat shukriya ap nay jin khoobsoorat alfaaz mein meray kalam ko saraha woh meri tawaqoaat aur basaat say barh kr hay, yeh tareef to ustadaan-e-adab ko zeba hay mein to ik haqeer-o-naa cheez abhi adab ki galion ka shanawar he nahin ho paya. baharhal ap k alfaaz nay mujhay yeh sujhaya hay k mein apnay kalam mein mazeed behtry ki gunjaaish paida karoon taakey ap jesay adab shanas doston ki tawaquaat par poora utarnay k qaabil ho sakoon.

    kiya mein ap k baarey mein jaan sakta hoon ?


    Jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye sada hansty muskratay rahiye.


    musafir

    Quote Originally Posted by M4Musafir View Post
    Bohata Hi Khooob Wesaay Bhi Mujhay To Lagtaa Hay Ap Ko Words Ki Nahi Balqaay Words Ko Ap Ki Zarroraat Rehti Hay Words Ki Ye Khuwaishh hoti hay Kay Ap Kay Qalaam Ya KeyBoard Se Likhay / Type Kiye Jain Realy Nice ... Bohat Hi Khoubsorat
    May ALLAH Keep u His Care Forever....
    Salamz ji,

    Is qadar iktesaar mein haroof-o-ma'aani k khazeenay kesay posheeda reh saktay hein jab k ap ka khaloos kahin waqeeh-o-daqeeq ho. Kher ap ka yeh andaaz-e-pazeerai bhi khoob hay.

    Jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, sada hansty muskraty rahiye.


    musafir

    Quote Originally Posted by shahryark View Post
    very nice .......
    Last edited by Musafir; 02-07-2007 at 05:42 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: ik nai ghazal by musafir

    Zanjeer-e-paa-e-lab kiye sab harf-e-naa tamam
    Dil rasm-e-naaz-e-wasl shakeba nahi kiya


    Ab umr-e-raftagaan’ k fasaanon’ pay hay guzar
    Jeevan mein koi kaam bhi acha nahi kiya

    humesha ki tarah bohot hi khoob

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    Quote Originally Posted by illusion View Post
    well musafir wut can i say abt ur poetry...........its always ravishing nd out class.....
    Salamz ji,

    Dekhein sarab ji, yeh to bay niyaazi ka andaz hay na k banda yeh keh k guzar jaaey k mein kiya keh sakta ya sakti hoon, kehnay ko to har waqt bohat kuch hota hay bas kehnay ka hosla hona chaahiye, ap bhi keh diya karein jo bhi kehna ho, meri tehreeron k baarey mein negative ya positive no problem, wesay ap khud bhi to bohat acha likh leti hein aur jo likh sakta ho woh keh bhi sakta hay, hain na ? kher yeh sab kuch to wesay he likh dala, mujhy pata hay k ap na sirf acha likhti hein balkey acha parh k us par achy alfaaz mein tehseen ki ranga rang dastaar bhi saja sakti hein.

    Jeeti rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, sada hansti muskrati rahiye.


    musafir

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    okkkkkkkkkk
    well musafir i mean to say tht ur poetry or anythng u write is always out of the world.....truely saying if i start writing there then it wud definitely take a lot of space..........but i like thngs in precise form.........so just want to say tht u know all depths tht r necessary for a wonderful poetry....just want to wish u a gud luck...
    nd by the way how many times u put any comments for my poetry..............?
    atleast insan thori se burai he ker day......

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    Quote Originally Posted by queenofheart View Post
    Zanjeer-e-paa-e-lab kiye sab harf-e-naa tamam
    Dil rasm-e-naaz-e-wasl shakeba nahi kiya

    Ab umr-e-raftagaan k fasaanon pay hay guzar
    Jeevan mein koi kaam bhi acha nahi kiya

    humesha ki tarah bohot hi khoob
    Salamz ji,

    Dilon ki malka lagta hay ap ko andaz-e-pazeerai mein bhi maleka haasil hay, iktesaar mein he yeh khoobi hay k baat bhi ho jaaey aur haroof bhi sharminda-e-taazeer naa hon. Bohat khoob.

    Jeeti rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, sada hansti muskrati rahiye.


    musafir

    Quote Originally Posted by illusion View Post
    okkkkkkkkkk
    well musafir i mean to say tht ur poetry or anythng u write is always out of the world.....truely saying if i start writing there then it wud definitely take a lot of space..........but i like thngs in precise form.........so just want to say tht u know all depths tht r necessary for a wonderful poetry....just want to wish u a gud luck...
    nd by the way how many times u put any comments for my poetry..............?
    atleast insan thori se burai he ker day......
    Salamz ji,

    Sarab ji pata nahi q ap ki baaton mein kuch aisa hota hay jo kahin bohat gehrai mein nihaan ehsaas k rukhsaaron par kisi taqadus ma'aab bosay ki tarha sabt ho jaata hay, kher choriye yeh to zimnan keh dala, janab ap ki poetry par is liye tabsray say gurez kartay hein k kahin koi gustakhi na ho jaaey, koi aisi baat na ungliyon ki pooron say key board ki figures mein sarayat kar jaaey jo ap ki basaaraton ko nagawar guzray, bas qeemti logon k baarey mein kuch mohtaat hona parta hay na.

    Janab ap ki tehreeron mein bohat saadgi, bohat bay niyaazi, bohat bay saakhtagi hoti hay jo aksar auqaat dheeray say attract kar jaati hay.

    Jeeti rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, sada hansti muskrati rahiye.

    musafir
    Last edited by Musafir; 02-09-2007 at 10:20 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: ik nai ghazal by musafir

    Salam,

    Aj bilaa waja he kuch waqt dastyaab hua to maazi k dareechon mein jhaankny ko dil kiya, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, kiya he achy, khoobsoorat, rooshanaas, ,,,, dilfreb aur pur waqaar log hua karty thy friendskorner pe. Allah sab ko apnay hisaar-e-rehmat-o-ataa aur markaz-e-aman-o-baqaa mein maamoon-o-mas'oon rakhein. Dil se be saakhta duaaon k nazraany adaa huey.

    Salamat rahein, ,,,,,,,, khush rahein, ,,,,,,,,,,, shaad-o-abaad rahein, ,,,,,,,,,,, kamyab rahein, ,,,,,,,, baa muraad rahein.

    (musafir)

    Quote Originally Posted by illusion View Post
    okkkkkkkkkk
    well musafir i mean to say tht ur poetry or anythng u write is always out of the world.....truely saying if i start writing there then it wud definitely take a lot of space..........but i like thngs in precise form.........so just want to say tht u know all depths tht r necessary for a wonderful poetry....just want to wish u a gud luck...
    nd by the way how many times u put any comments for my poetry..............?
    atleast insan thori se burai he ker day......

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