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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    ab na dena koii duaa logo
    zindagi hai mujhe saza logo

    kya milay ga usay khafaa kar ke
    koii itna to sochta logo

    rang bikhraiiN ge kis ke hathooN per
    kon mehkay ga ja baja logo

    kis ko hoga bharosa yaari pr
    kon mangay ga ab wafa logo

    kis ki khatir jalaiiN ge dipak
    kis ka dekhaiiN ge rastaa logo

    kon samjhay ga dukh mhbt ka
    kis ko doN ga maiN ab sada logo

    tum ne khud se usay juda rakha
    tum ne samjha usay khuda logo

    wo to khushbu tha, hosla rakhtay
    le hi jati usay hawaa logo

    us k janay pe ab jo shashdr ho
    us ko janay hi kyuN diya logo

    rok lete usay bahanoN se
    tum se itna bhi na huwa logo

    tum maiN ehsas e zindagi jaga
    jab maiN pathr ka ho gaya logo

    dil ki dunya ujaaR di meri
    tum ne kitna buraa kiya logo

    aik wo hi maseha tha ghum ka
    aik wo hi nahiN raha logo

    kaise mumkin hai ashk tham jaiiN
    aankh kehti hai br-mala logo

    gr yehi hai tareeq shehrooN ka
    sehra mujh ko bura na tha logo

    her ik misray pe jaaN nikalti hai, kya ghazab ki ghazal hai, her shaEr per dil khincha jaata hai aur be-sakhta nikalta hai "WAH!" kya khoob takhleeq hai jawaab nahiN..........

    beshumaar daad qabool kijiye...............Ho zor e qalam aur ziyadaa.................

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    MASHAllah..bohat khoobsurat ghazal kahi ha
    jitn tareef ki jaeye km ha
    bohat sari daad qabool karo
    mazeed urooj hasil ho Ameen
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    wah WL |Sahib kiya kehnay apkay kalam kay bai bohut sehar hay apkay kalam maiN
    har shyer apnay ap maiN mukamil aur khubsoorta hay
    bohut see daad qubool kijAYa

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    WAH BoHat UmmDA GHazaL

    LiKHte AUr sHare Karte RaHEin ...... !
    کہتے ہیں عشق نام کےگذرے ہیں اک بزرگ
    ہم لوگ بھی مرید اُسی سلسلے کے ہیں



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    Wah Kia khoob

    Buhat Achay Withluv

    Khush Rahiye




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    nice....achi ghazal kahi aap nay....laikin aap nay takhallus ko maanwiyat mein bhi istamaal kia hai
    jis say takhallus gum ho raha hai....

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    mashaAllah itni achiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ghazal likhi aap nain maray pass elfaz hi nahin hain is ki tareef k lia bes itna kehna chahun gi k is ghazal k her misray say her her lafz say derd niklta mehsoos hota hay itna derd khan say a gaya aap k paas kion k derd ho to hi nikelta hai seedha dilll pay aser kia hay..................Allah is say bhi acha likhnay ki tofeeq or himet day.

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    aik wo hi maseha tha ghum ka
    aik wo hi nahiN raha logo


    wah...janab...bohot khoobsuret ghazal kahi aap ne...
    achay mzameen hain...saray ashaar...khoob hain...
    mobarkbad qabool kren...
    slamet rhain...

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    kis ko hoga bharosa yaari pr
    kon mangay ga ab wafa logo

    kon samjhay ga dukh mhbt ka
    kis ko doN ga maiN ab sada logo

    gr yehi hai tareeq shehrooN ka
    sehra mujh ko bura na tha logo

    bht khoob..

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    boht aala janaab

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    very nice ghazal!! superbly written!! weldone!! heartly thanks and heartly blessings!! keep it up!!

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    woh to khushbo tha hosla rakhty
    lay hi jaati usy hawa logoon
    wah bhae wah buhut he shaandaar or jaandaar ghazal ata ki aap ny ..
    parh kar buhut ache lagi , is by insaaf dunya sy buhut khoobsoorat shikwy shikayaat kar deen aap ny wo bhi itny dil ko choo jaany waly andaaz main
    dhairoon dhair daad hazir hy qobool kejey ga ..
    likhty or share karty rahey
    khush rahey ameen
    mujh sy ab shairy nahen hote
    mujhy lafzoo'n nay maar dala hay







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    Nihayut Salees urdu main likhi gai mukhtasir beher ki be-misal ghazal!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Merey pas alfaz nahin hai key is ghazal ki tareef main kuch kahoon!!!!!!!!!!! I am really speachless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    beeeeeeeeeeeautiful realy beautiful ghzal kya bat hy....


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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    Great...... buht alaa.....
    kia baat hai, buht acha likha hai aap nai...mujhy logon wali ghazl buht psnd hain jis ke end mian logo aata ho...
    waisy " logo" ke baghair b zabrdst hai... keep writing.....


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    bhut kooob...............

    Urnay lagay wajood ke rezay hawa main

    Main is qadar khaloos se bikhra kabhi na tha

    doob gaya suraj ke saath mera dil bhi aaj

    Itna udaas shaam ka manzar kabhi na tha

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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifl e Maktab View Post
    ab na dena koii duaa logo
    zindagi hai mujhe saza logo

    kya milay ga usay khafaa kar ke
    koii itna to sochta logo

    rang bikhraiiN ge kis ke hathooN per
    kon mehkay ga ja baja logo

    kis ko hoga bharosa yaari pr
    kon mangay ga ab wafa logo

    kis ki khatir jalaiiN ge dipak
    kis ka dekhaiiN ge rastaa logo

    kon samjhay ga dukh mhbt ka
    kis ko doN ga maiN ab sada logo

    tum ne khud se usay juda rakha
    tum ne samjha usay khuda logo

    wo to khushbu tha, hosla rakhtay
    le hi jati usay hawaa logo

    us k janay pe ab jo shashdr ho
    us ko janay hi kyuN diya logo

    rok lete usay bahanoN se
    tum se itna bhi na huwa logo

    tum maiN ehsas e zindagi jaga
    jab maiN pathr ka ho gaya logo

    dil ki dunya ujaaR di meri
    tum ne kitna buraa kiya logo

    aik wo hi maseha tha ghum ka
    aik wo hi nahiN raha logo

    kaise mumkin hai ashk tham jaiiN
    aankh kehti hai br-mala logo

    gr yehi hai tareeq shehrooN ka
    sehra mujh ko bura na tha logo

    her ik misray pe jaaN nikalti hai, kya ghazab ki ghazal hai, her shaEr per dil khincha jaata hai aur be-sakhta nikalta hai "WAH!" kya khoob takhleeq hai jawaab nahiN..........

    beshumaar daad qabool kijiye...............Ho zor e qalam aur ziyadaa.................
    Bohat Nawazish ke aap ne is qadar izzat bakhshi .. aur mazeed shukria ke aap ne issay roman mein bhi darj ker diya .. aabaad rahiye..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove


    ---------- Post added at 04:10 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:09 PM ----------

    Quote Originally Posted by Saba View Post
    MASHAllah..bohat khoobsurat ghazal kahi ha
    jitn tareef ki jaeye km ha
    bohat sari daad qabool karo
    mazeed urooj hasil ho Ameen
    khush raho
    hosla afzai ka Behad Shukria..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove


    ---------- Post added at 04:10 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:10 PM ----------

    Quote Originally Posted by roshnee View Post
    wah WL |Sahib kiya kehnay apkay kalam kay bai bohut sehar hay apkay kalam maiN
    har shyer apnay ap maiN mukamil aur khubsoorta hay
    bohut see daad qubool kijAYa

    roshnee
    Bohat Shukria ke aap ne waqt nikala aur hosla barhaya..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    Re: **Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    Bohut Khoob

    Bht Acheyy

    Chand Ashhaar Bht Pasnd Aye


    ab na dena koii duaa logo
    zindagi hai mujhe saza logo


    us k janay pe ab jo shashdr ho
    us ko janay hi kyuN diya logo

    tum maiN ehsas e zindagi jaga
    jab maiN pathr ka ho gaya logo

    dil ki dunya ujaaR di meri
    tum ne kitna buraa kiya logo

    aik wo hi maseha tha ghum ka
    aik wo hi nahiN raha logo

    gr yehi hai tareeq shehrooN ka
    sehra mujh ko bura na tha logo


    ساری دنیا میں مرے جی کو لگا ایک ہی شخص
    ایک ہی شخص تھا ایسا بخدا ایک ہی شخص
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    Re: Ab na Dena koi Dua logo

    huzoorr, der say haazri main mazrat qubool kijyeah..
    aapki ghazal ko offline kaii kaiii baar perha aur iss prism say nikaltay rungoon ko khoob khoob mehsoos kiya..
    aap say shayr kay kallam kay baray main kiya kaha jaye..bahar haal mashallah
    sukhi rahyea, aabad rahyea..ameen

    kaise mumkin hai ashk tham jaiiN
    aankh kehti hai br-mala logo
    Khayal-ger



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