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    آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

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    آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم
    یاد کی ادھ جلی راکھ سے
    بہلتے ہیں


    وقت کی سنسان گلیوں میں
    لہجوں کے اداس سائے
    سمٹتے ہیں ، مٹتے ہیں
    اور
    کسی خواھش کو ڈھونڈھتے ہیں


    انہی وحشتوں کے سفر میں
    گھومتے ہوۓ اکثر
    کسی خلش نے جب بھی
    کوئی احساس بخشا ہے تو
    محسوس ہوا ہے
    کہ زیست کے رنگوں میں ڈھل کر بھی
    آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم
    !!...کس قدر اجلے ہیں

    ساوی عباس




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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    Savi Sahiba, really nice effort. Alfaaz ka chunao khayal ki gehrai aur wasee muthaliha ka nichor mehsoos hota hai. Bas zara si bareekiyan samajh len to aap buhat acha likhne lagen gi aur main ussi din k intizaar main hoon. Keep writing and sharing. Keeo it up.

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    zeest kay rungoon main dhalnay kay bawajood bhi kumbakht ansooN shafaf hi kyoon rehtay hain???
    bohut khoobsurat khayal janab, aur bohut kuch soochnay peh mojboor kerdiya aap kay anookhay istareh nay..
    likhty rahyea,
    khoosh rahyea, aabad rahyea..ameen
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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    nice...........................

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    MashaAllah Savi sis aap nain bohet hi khoob likha asay hi likhti or share krti rehain or khush or abad rehain hamaysha

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    Dear Zay Sahab!! dik ki gehrayon se shukar guzar hun itni khubsurat daad aur himat afzayee ke liyeh.....believe me your words are really encouraging for me i hope i would be able to get the strength you are talking about in coming future inshallah!!.............will try my best!!

    always be happy and be successful ameen!! May God bless you!!


    Quote Originally Posted by Disturbing behaviour View Post
    Savi Sahiba, really nice effort. Alfaaz ka chunao khayal ki gehrai aur wasee muthaliha ka nichor mehsoos hota hai. Bas zara si bareekiyan samajh len to aap buhat acha likhne lagen gi aur main ussi din k intizaar main hoon. Keep writing and sharing. Keeo it up.

    ZaY


    ---------- Post added at 09:11 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:59 PM ----------

    Dear Farrukhji!! feeling enough lucky and blessed that you liked my simple effort..........you gave me lots of prays which touched my heart...sending you same wishes for you!! i hope you will continue to encourage new people like me who are trying to get right directions in this field!! God bless!!


    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    zeest kay rungoon main dhalnay kay bawajood bhi kumbakht ansooN shafaf hi kyoon rehtay hain???
    bohut khoobsurat khayal janab, aur bohut kuch soochnay peh mojboor kerdiya aap kay anookhay istareh nay..
    likhty rahyea,
    khoosh rahyea, aabad rahyea..ameen


    ---------- Post added at 09:11 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:11 PM ----------

    thanks my lovely!!

    Quote Originally Posted by mi$ View Post
    nice...........................

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    کہ زیست کے رنگوں میں ڈھل کر بھی
    آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم
    !!...کس قدر اجلے ہیں

    boht achay.................

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    dear saima bohat shukria ke aap ko meri yeh aik choti si koshish achi lagi!! God bless you!!

    Quote Originally Posted by saima ramzan View Post
    MashaAllah Savi sis aap nain bohet hi khoob likha asay hi likhti or share krti rehain or khush or abad rehain hamaysha


    ---------- Post added at 09:14 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:13 PM ----------

    thanks alot for your lovely comment!!


    Quote Originally Posted by khalid jamil malik View Post
    کہ زیست کے رنگوں میں ڈھل کر بھی
    آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم
    !!...کس قدر اجلے ہیں

    boht achay.................

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    heart touching very nice.

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    Heartly thanks my dear!!




    Quote Originally Posted by rajagk2000 View Post
    heart touching very nice.

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    Re: آنسوؤں کے یہ شفّاف جسم

    roman urdu main post kerdey plz.

    sab etni tareef ker rahey hai tu achi hi hongi all the best

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    sallam do you live in London.

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    bohut khoob savi jee
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