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    zindgi or kitna stao gi tum ....................

    Aslamoaliekum sb frnds ko .............

    kaafi arsy se sooch rahi hon apni likhi koi shairi share krny ka bt u know khbi intny saary great poets k drmiyan share krny ka hosla hi nahi hoa ...bt aaj himmat kr hi li main nai .....

    well aap sb se request hai k aap ko jahan b islah ki gunjaish nazar aati hai zroor point out krain .... i would be very grateful to u ....



    Zindgi aur kitna staao gi tum
    hmian kitna aur azmao gi tum

    nhi mujh main ab or jaan bakhsh do
    ke yun hi jalati hi jao gi tum

    hmain chain se ab tu su leny do
    kitni raatain abhi or jagao gi tum

    aik jurm e mohabbt ki padaash main
    kitni muddat saza'en sunao gi tum

    sadah dilon pe ye zulm o sitam
    ahsaas ho ga tu pachtao gi tum

    suna hai sabar ka brra ajar hai
    ye mo'jza khbi tu dikhao gi tum

    gr apno main pass e murawat nahi
    tu ghairon ko kia azmao gi tum


    Na mayoos hona abhi se Diya
    ye raz e sukhan jaan jao gi tum


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    walikum asalam
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    nyceeeeee sharing............
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    ahaan bilkul ,, yeh raaz -e- sukhan jaan jaaogi tum .....dont worry ...
    ache kawish rahe hy diya , achy khayalaat hian tumhary , parte rahoo achy shairoon ko , or likhte raho , nikhaar aata jaay ga , or jahaan tak baat kamiyoon ko point out karny ka , to abhi is qabil kahaan , bary shuaraa hi kuch bata paengy ...
    mujhy to pasand aai tumhare yeh ghazal ...
    khush raho ameen ...
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    Re: zindgi or kitna stao gi tum ....................

    Bohat khoob... welcome .. aap ko is bazm mein dekh ker khushi huee.. ghazal achi rahi .. daad qabool kijiye.. aur himmat ker ke share kernay per bhi daad qabool kijiye.. ghazal mein behtri ki gunjyesh to mojood hai .. magar waqt ke saath sab aa jaye ga.. bus likhti aur share kerti rahiye.. maqtaa bohat pasand aya.. aisa hi azm hona chahiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    W SaLaam

    YeH kOun Aa GiA Bazm Mein WAH Himat AcHi RaHi Aap Ki Aur GHazaL BHi

    LiKHte Aur sHare kArte RaHEin BeHter sE BeHtAr Hotti Jaye Gi ... !
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    Re: zindgi or kitna stao gi tum ....................

    ​خوبصورت کاوش داد قبول کیجئے گا

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    walikum asalam
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    Thank you soooooooooooo much

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    nyceeeeee sharing............
    <br><br>Thank you .........................

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    ahaan bilkul ,, yeh raaz -e- sukhan jaan jaaogi tum .....dont worry ...
    ache kawish rahe hy diya , achy khayalaat hian tumhary , parte rahoo achy shairoon ko , or likhte raho , nikhaar aata jaay ga , or jahaan tak baat kamiyoon ko point out karny ka , to abhi is qabil kahaan , bary shuaraa hi kuch bata paengy ...
    mujhy to pasand aai tumhare yeh ghazal ...
    khush raho ameen ...
    .............. Thank you sooo much Gohar for ur precious comments and advice ....so nice of you ... nd thaks alot for ur wishes ... .......... buht shukria appreciate krny ka ...

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    Beautiful............I really liked it!
    Thanks for sharing...

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    Bohat khoob... welcome .. aap ko is bazm mein dekh ker khushi huee.. ghazal achi rahi .. daad qabool kijiye.. aur himmat ker ke share kernay per bhi daad qabool kijiye.. ghazal mein behtri ki gunjyesh to mojood hai .. magar waqt ke saath sab aa jaye ga.. bus likhti aur share kerti rahiye.. maqtaa bohat pasand aya.. aisa hi azm hona chahiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    ............. buht buht shukria welcum krny ka ...... thats so nice of you ... lolxxx ghazal ka tu confirm nahi bt dosri daad tu waqai deserve krti thi main ...thank you so much for that ....
    or kmaal hai aap nai koi ghalti hi nahi nikali... waisy aap kisi mistake ko point out na krain tu mujhy lgta hai k yaa tu aap nai ghazl ko sahi se daikha hi nahi ya aap nai soocha k kis kis cheez ki islah kron lolxx....

    Thank you sooooooooooo much for Appreciating ..... so grateful to you .........buht buht shukri hosla afzai k liye ...

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    دیا ایمان، بہت اچھی کوشش ہے پر یہ اس قدر اداسی کچھ پسند نہیں آئ، ارے ابھی تو آپ کے کھیلنے کھانے کے دن ہیں، ابھی سے کہاں آپ زندگی کو سونے کا مشوره دے رہی ہیں.....یہ غم و یاسیت ہمارے لئے چھوڑ دیجئے، آپ تو اچھے خوبصورت زندگی سے بھر پور اشعار کہئے

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    Quote Originally Posted by R oC k iN View Post
    W SaLaam

    YeH kOun Aa GiA Bazm Mein WAH Himat AcHi RaHi Aap Ki Aur GHazaL BHi

    LiKHte Aur sHare kArte RaHEin BeHter sE BeHtAr Hotti Jaye Gi ... !
    ....................... lolxxx ji ji main hi hon mujhy khud b yaqeen nahi aa raha ........... lolz... bss aap sb logon nai itnay achy andaaz main appreciate kia hai k ab main relax ho gai hon lolz

    buht shukria pasnd krny ka .... i m so thankful to you ......

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    ​خوبصورت کاوش داد قبول کیجئے گا
    OHhhh Thank you soooooooooooo much

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    Beautiful............I really liked it!
    Thanks for sharing...

    Thank you soooo much Zephyr ..thats so sweet of you ... God bless you ....


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    Quote Originally Posted by Tifl e Maktab View Post
    دیا ایمان، بہت اچھی کوشش ہے پر یہ اس قدر اداسی کچھ پسند نہیں آئ، ارے ابھی تو آپ کے کھیلنے کھانے کے دن ہیں، ابھی سے کہاں آپ زندگی کو سونے کا مشوره دے رہی ہیں.....یہ غم و یاسیت ہمارے لئے چھوڑ دیجئے، آپ تو اچھے خوبصورت زندگی سے بھر پور اشعار کہئے
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    lol Thank you sooo mcuh Asad bahi for ur precious comments .... mujhy buht khushi hoi k aap nai meri ghazl daikhi ....
    lol haan ye tu hai ... bss main nai apny aaas paas k halat ko daikh kr kuch likh dia .... achy situation daikhon gi tu shyed kuch acha b likh don ..or waisy b abhi aap se sirf itna hi seekha tha lolz... acha theek hia main next time try kron gi koi zindgi se bhrpoor ghzl likhny ki ....

    and Thanks Alot again.........................

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    wah wah buaht khoob.............

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    wah wah buaht khoob.............
    Thank you missy ..................... so nice of you ..........

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    ............. buht buht shukria welcum krny ka ...... thats so nice of you ... lolxxx ghazal ka tu confirm nahi bt dosri daad tu waqai deserve krti thi main ...thank you so much for that ....
    or kmaal hai aap nai koi ghalti hi nahi nikali... waisy aap kisi mistake ko point out na krain tu mujhy lgta hai k yaa tu aap nai ghazl ko sahi se daikha hi nahi ya aap nai soocha k kis kis cheez ki islah kron lolxx....

    Thank you sooooooooooo much for Appreciating ..... so grateful to you .........buht buht shukri hosla afzai k liye ...

    ji aisi baat nahi.. meri zati raye hai ke abhi aap ko sirf likhna chahiye khud ko pabandiyoN mein nahi dalna chahiye.. so munasib waqt ka intezar ker raha hon is liye abhi kisi islaah ki janib ishara nahi kiya..

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    bht khooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob
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    Socha tha k batin gay Tum ko dukh dard Apna..
    Tum ne to itna bhi na pucha kay Udass Q ho..?

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    ji aisi baat nahi.. meri zati raye hai ke abhi aap ko sirf likhna chahiye khud ko pabandiyoN mein nahi dalna chahiye.. so munasib waqt ka intezar ker raha hon is liye abhi kisi islaah ki janib ishara nahi kiya..
    ........... Agreed........ ok theek hai ..... thanks again for ur precious time and suggestions .............

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    lol haan kh skty hain .............thank you soooo much pinky for appreciating

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    diya koshish achi rahi sis...pasand ayee ghazal...

    wid luv ji se muttafiq huN..aap likhte raheN aur likhlene k baad padheN ..agar kahin padhne me diqqat mehsoos ho toh samjheN gadbad hai..

    bas ye asaan sa tareeqa apna leN...inshallah behtri ati jayegi !

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~sahiba~ View Post
    diya koshish achi rahi sis...pasand ayee ghazal...

    wid luv ji se muttafiq huN..aap likhte raheN aur likhlene k baad padheN ..agar kahin padhne me diqqat mehsoos ho toh samjheN gadbad hai..

    bas ye asaan sa tareeqa apna leN...inshallah behtri ati jayegi !

    gud luck !
    .......... Ahaan thanks alot Sahiba .... thank you so much for ur comments and suggestions ...... haan ye tu asaan treeqa hai ... ok main amal kr k daikhon gi ... thank you so much for appreciating

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    Bohat Piyari Ghazal Diya ....
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