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    ehl.e.bazm...adaab arz hai..
    umeed hai bakhairiyat hoNgay..inshallah.
    fk per kuch nazmaiN aur kuch ashaar ek ek karke post ki thi..lekin kabhi ghazal k saath haazri ki himmat na hosaki..
    so aaj kuch naya karne ko dil chaha toh 'himmat' karli
    maine ik shair me nafasat ka plural nafasatoN likha hai..aur janti nahi huN k aisa likhsakte hain ya nahi..
    aur ik shair me lafz ashya (material) istimaal ki huN..wahan kuch ravaani toot'ti mehsoos hoti hai ya phir talafuz ka masla hai?
    ehl.e.ilm se umeed rakhti huN k rehnumayee farmayeNge..inshallah.


    ik aarzoo hai dil me, dil me hai muddatoN se
    wo shakhs mujhko chahay,chahay b shiddatoN se

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se

    uske mizaaj me ho narmi gulaab ki si
    bolay toh dil karay khush,dekhe sharartoN se

    naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte
    mutlaq mohabbatiN hoN,khali adatavatoN se

    quddaar GUL ki fitrat ka paas ho hamesha
    toola karay na jazbe ashya ki qeematoN se

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    har baat kaghazoN per likhna nahi zarori
    kuch waqaye paray haiN apni zahanatoN se

    vehshat kahaN ghatay gi kaise sukoN milega
    bhago ge jo agar tum USKI ibadatoN se

    dekhay tumhe joh koi ALLAH yaad aye
    kirdaar ko sawaaro aisi nafasatoN se


    ****



    Let me hide in You, from everything that distracts me from You, from everything that comes in my way when I want to run to You.

















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    Quote Originally Posted by Meesam Haider View Post
    bahot khoob....khush rahain
    shukran...aap bhi

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    Quote Originally Posted by aziz-qais View Post
    buhat khubsurat kalam hai subhanallah dhair sari daad qabool ho
    buhot shukriya janaab

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    Quote Originally Posted by R oC k iN View Post
    BoHat ALLA KHoooBsurat

    LiKHte Aur sHare kArte RaHEin ...... !
    behad shukriya...

    inshallah zaror

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    Quote Originally Posted by aroojbaig View Post
    MASHA ALLAH..........keep writing.......
    shukran ...inshallah

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    Quote Originally Posted by roshnee View Post
    bohut khoob
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    shukriya...inshallah

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    Quote Originally Posted by Disturbing behaviour View Post
    Buhat Khoob, Ghazal bhi buhat khoob likhi hai aap ne. Khayalat khoob hain aur rawani bhi zabardast.

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se



    Darja bala shair main lafz mubra mere elm k mutabiq theek nahi hai, Asal lafz shayad Mub'barra hai aur yun is shair ka wazan theek nahi rehta. Aap dekh lijiye ga pls.

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    zay sir...aap ne apna qeemti waqt is ghazal k nazr kiya..apka behad shukriya ..

    is taseeh k liye mamnoon huN..

    shukran

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    Quote Originally Posted by *HIJR*NASEEB* View Post
    buhut khoobsoorat likha tum ny sahiba ...
    dhair sare daad tumhare is khobsoorat ghazal par , qubool karoo ...
    ese tarhaan likhte rahoo ...or share karte rahoo ...
    khush rahoo ....ameen
    hmmm

    buhot shukriya hijr in khoobsurat jumloN k liye

    inshallah likhti rahoNgi..jab talak likhate rahaiNge

    aap bhi ameen !

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    Quote Originally Posted by zahid_is_here View Post
    very nice i like it................
    thanks 4 sharing
    thank u so much...

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    Quote Originally Posted by diya imaan View Post
    wah bohat khoob ....really very nice ,,bohat acha likha aap nai ...
    buhot buhot shukriya diya

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    Re: ~naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte~


    ik aarzoo hai dil me, dil me hai muddatoN se
    wo shakhs mujhko chahay,chahay b shiddatoN se

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    dear sahiba!! if it is your first attempt to write ghazal then it is reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wonderful effort!! will be waiting for more thoughtful things from you in coming future..........May Allah Bless you!!

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    کیا خبر ، لوٹ کے آجاے رفو کا موسم







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    Re: ~naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte~

    mashALALH bhut acha likha hai aapne...
    koshish kerney se sab asaan lagta hai es main himmat ki kaya baat pagli...
    ayesey hi likhtey raha karo etna acha tu likha hai so plz keep sharing....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Savi Abbas View Post
    dear sahiba!! if it is your first attempt to write ghazal then it is reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wonderful effort!! will be waiting for more thoughtful things from you in coming future..........May Allah Bless you!!
    sis..dis isnt my first ghazal..hv written many of dem..but i feel basically m a nazm poetess ..so ..yeah..

    may HE bless u as well ameen..

    thank u so much 4 these beautiful wurdz

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    mashALALH bhut acha likha hai aapne...
    koshish kerney se sab asaan lagta hai es main himmat ki kaya baat pagli...
    ayesey hi likhtey raha karo etna acha tu likha hai so plz keep sharing....
    sahi farmaya...koshish se asaniyaN paida hojati haiN..
    baat darasl ye hai k mujhe lagta hai maiN nazmaiN behtar andaaz me likhsakti huN..toh meri liye toh himmat ka kaam hi tha
    behad shukriya sarahne ka..
    inshallah will definetly keep sharin...

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    Re: ~naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte~

    behtreeen ghazal paish ki aap nay sahiba ji khayalat ki rawani bhi khooob rahi

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    Zabardast!!

    --BOHT HI UMDAH LIKHA HAI AP NAY
    KHUDA APKAY KLAAM MEIN MAZEED NIKHAR PAIDA KRY

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