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    ehl.e.bazm...adaab arz hai..
    umeed hai bakhairiyat hoNgay..inshallah.
    fk per kuch nazmaiN aur kuch ashaar ek ek karke post ki thi..lekin kabhi ghazal k saath haazri ki himmat na hosaki..
    so aaj kuch naya karne ko dil chaha toh 'himmat' karli
    maine ik shair me nafasat ka plural nafasatoN likha hai..aur janti nahi huN k aisa likhsakte hain ya nahi..
    aur ik shair me lafz ashya (material) istimaal ki huN..wahan kuch ravaani toot'ti mehsoos hoti hai ya phir talafuz ka masla hai?
    ehl.e.ilm se umeed rakhti huN k rehnumayee farmayeNge..inshallah.


    ik aarzoo hai dil me, dil me hai muddatoN se
    wo shakhs mujhko chahay,chahay b shiddatoN se

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se

    uske mizaaj me ho narmi gulaab ki si
    bolay toh dil karay khush,dekhe sharartoN se

    naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte
    mutlaq mohabbatiN hoN,khali adatavatoN se

    quddaar GUL ki fitrat ka paas ho hamesha
    toola karay na jazbe ashya ki qeematoN se

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    har baat kaghazoN per likhna nahi zarori
    kuch waqaye paray haiN apni zahanatoN se

    vehshat kahaN ghatay gi kaise sukoN milega
    bhago ge jo agar tum USKI ibadatoN se

    dekhay tumhe joh koi ALLAH yaad aye
    kirdaar ko sawaaro aisi nafasatoN se


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    Re: ~naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte~

    Shandaar takhleeq, Bht Hi zyadaa umdaa, pasnd ayi kawish


    ik aarzoo hai dil me, dil me hai muddatoN se
    wo shakhs mujhko chahay,chahay b shiddatoN se

    waah waah, Bhht zyadaa umdaaa

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se

    wah Kiyaa Kheny janab

    uske mizaaj me ho narmi gulaab ki si
    bolay toh dil karay khush,dekhe sharartoN se

    Khoob , Bht Khoob
    vehshat kahaN ghatay gi kaise sukoN milega
    bhago ge jo agar tum USKI ibadatoN se

    dekhay tumhe joh koi ALLAH yaad aye
    kirdaar ko sawaaro aisi nafasatoN se

    Bohut Khoob, akhri 2 ashaar to apni misal ap hen, bht shandaar

    keep sharing


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    ایک ہی شخص تھا ایسا بخدا ایک ہی شخص
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    wah janabb...ap to chaa gai...bss aarzu ne jo taareef kar di mere pas to alfaaz bhi nahi hain k tareef kar sakun...bohot khoob nazm hai....bohot hi zabardast.....kahin bhi koi rawani toot'ti nazar nai aai muje to....khush raiye or hamain apni khoobsoorat shaairi se nawaazti rahiye....

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    khoob janab, bohut khubsuraat kallam,
    ashyaah kay lafz say rawani mai mujhay tu koii diqat mehsoos nahi huii,
    nafasatoon ka istimaal bhi khoob hay,
    ab baqi tu ehl e ilm hi bata sakain gay
    sukhi rahyea..ameen
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    Bht khub

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    wahhh ji.. bari achi ghazal takhleeq ki .. MashaAllah.. bohat si daad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    bahot khoob....khush rahain

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    buhat khubsurat kalam hai subhanallah dhair sari daad qabool ho

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    BoHat ALLA KHoooBsurat

    LiKHte Aur sHare kArte RaHEin ...... !
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    MASHA ALLAH..........keep writing.......























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    bohut khoob
    likhti rahaye

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    Re: ~naraaz b agar ho toh berukhi na barte~

    Buhat Khoob, Ghazal bhi buhat khoob likhi hai aap ne. Khayalat khoob hain aur rawani bhi zabardast.

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se



    Darja bala shair main lafz mubra mere elm k mutabiq theek nahi hai, Asal lafz shayad Mub'barra hai aur yun is shair ka wazan theek nahi rehta. Aap dekh lijiye ga pls.

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    buhut khoobsoorat likha tum ny sahiba ...
    dhair sare daad tumhare is khobsoorat ghazal par , qubool karoo ...
    ese tarhaan likhte rahoo ...or share karte rahoo ...
    khush rahoo ....ameen
    mujh sy ab shairy nahen hote
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    very nice i like it................
    thanks 4 sharing

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    wah bohat khoob ....really very nice ,,bohat acha likha aap nai ...


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    Quote Originally Posted by (Arzu-e-Jana'n) View Post
    Shandaar takhleeq, Bht Hi zyadaa umdaa, pasnd ayi kawish


    ik aarzoo hai dil me, dil me hai muddatoN se
    wo shakhs mujhko chahay,chahay b shiddatoN se

    waah waah, Bhht zyadaa umdaaa

    ikhlaas ka ho paikar,mubra banawatoN se
    wo mera muntazir ho,mera ho muddatoN se

    wah Kiyaa Kheny janab

    uske mizaaj me ho narmi gulaab ki si
    bolay toh dil karay khush,dekhe sharartoN se

    Khoob , Bht Khoob
    vehshat kahaN ghatay gi kaise sukoN milega
    bhago ge jo agar tum USKI ibadatoN se

    dekhay tumhe joh koi ALLAH yaad aye
    kirdaar ko sawaaro aisi nafasatoN se

    Bohut Khoob, akhri 2 ashaar to apni misal ap hen, bht shandaar

    keep sharing
    janaN...ghazal k har sher ko alhida alhida sarhane ka behad shukriya...

    inshallah will do !

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    Quote Originally Posted by amnarani View Post
    wah janabb...ap to chaa gai...bss aarzu ne jo taareef kar di mere pas to alfaaz bhi nahi hain k tareef kar sakun...bohot khoob nazm hai....bohot hi zabardast.....kahin bhi koi rawani toot'ti nazar nai aai muje to....khush raiye or hamain apni khoobsoorat shaairi se nawaazti rahiye....
    oh raani..tum na sharminda zaror karna

    buhot shukriya sis...

    aur haaN ye ghazal hai...nazm nahi

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    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    khoob janab, bohut khubsuraat kallam,
    ashyaah kay lafz say rawani mai mujhay tu koii diqat mehsoos nahi huii,
    nafasatoon ka istimaal bhi khoob hay,
    ab baqi tu ehl e ilm hi bata sakain gay
    sukhi rahyea..ameen
    farrukji..behad mamnoon huN apki k aapne pasand kiya aur apni qeemti ara se navaza...

    shukran

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    Bht khub
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    wahhh ji.. bari achi ghazal takhleeq ki .. MashaAllah.. bohat si daad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    buhot shukira sir

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