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    Exclamation WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    assalamaualikum dostoon !!!!!
    is maah k results k saath hazir hoon ,
    is maah k results hian ..
    farrukh jii

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    raz e dil


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    to janaab is hesaab sy is maah ki jo winner hian wo hian ....


    ~~!!~~ mamin mirza ~~!!~~


    yeh rahi in ki is maah ki sharing ...



    عظمتوں کے خزینے۔۔۔۔اے شجرِ سایہ دار۔۔۔۔۔!!!

    زمانے کے سردو گرم سے واقف کیا مجھ کو
    دے کر فضل کا تحفہ،مجھےکندن بنایا ہے
    جہانِ علم و فیض میں مجھ کورے کاغذ کو
    سنہری حروف سے مزّین۔۔۔حسین عبارت میں ڈھالا ہے
    تھام کر انگلی اہل قلم کے درمیاں لاکر بٹھایا ہے
    حوادثِ زمانہ سے ٹکرانا سکھایا ہے
    قائم کیسے رکھتے ہیں
    مسلسل آزمائش میں،،،،پائے استقامت کو
    یہ سمجھایا۔۔۔۔۔۔بتایا ہے
    جہاں گویائی حماقت ہو
    وہاں ڈھال کر لفظوں کو خاموشی کی مالا میں
    گفتگو کا سلیقہ۔۔۔۔۔۔سکھایا ہے
    میں کر نہیں سکتی بیاں
    احساں جو آپ نے کئے
    ذہنوں میں ہمارے
    بہاروں کے رنگ بھر دئیے
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    ربّ کائنات سے
    عظمتوں کے خزینے۔۔۔۔اے شجرِ سایہ دار
    تو سدا روشن و پُر بہار رہے
    شجرِ سایہ دار رہے

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

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    ahaaa...mera khaab sach ho gaya.....


    lolzz haan esa hota hy , kabhi kabhi to dykhy huy khuab such ho jaaty hian , or kabhi jo dykho us ka ualat he hota hy ,,, tumhary saath kiya hua ....hahahaha

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mamin Mirza View Post





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    iss liye k main bhi apni amman k waja say aisay hi hawa k ghoron par sawar rehti hoon.....iklotay honay ka khamyaza tou bhugatna hi parta hai na.......

    ary q aik bachi ki amma ko elzaam dyte hoo , hum teen behnain hian , magar hamare amma jaan ka bhi yeh he haal hy .... lolzzz

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    ary q aik bachi ki amma ko elzaam dyte hoo , hum teen behnain hian , magar hamare amma jaan ka bhi yeh he haal hy .... lolzzz

    meri amman tou aik bachi ki amman hi hain na,,,,,,,,,,,
    aray wah teen behnain.........wah wah,,,,,,,,,.......

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    Mamin, congrats..mazeed likhyeah
    Amna, great effort janab, yahi kahoon ga, "muqabla tu dil e natawaan nay khoob kiya"
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
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    Mamin, congrats..mazeed likhyeah
    Amna, great effort janab, yahi kahoon ga, "muqabla tu dil e natawaan nay khoob kiya"
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
    girty hian shehsawaar hi maidaan e jung main .... k sy hian farrukhjii ???

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    meri amman tou aik bachi ki amman hi hain na,,,,,,,,,,,
    aray wah teen behnain.........wah wah,,,,,,,,,.......
    ji haan shukar hy malik ka ..... is ka matlab hy yeh ammaon ka prob hy .... jo masoom bachiyoon ko roab main rakhte hian ...lolzzzz

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    Mamin, congrats..mazeed likhyeah
    Amna, great effort janab, yahi kahoon ga, "muqabla tu dil e natawaan nay khoob kiya"
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
    mazeed likhnay k liye qalam main roshnai darkar hoti hai Farrukh,,,,,,,,,,,,
    bahar hal



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    girty hian shehsawaar hi maidaan e jung main .... k sy hian farrukhjii ???

    ​Durust,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,mutafiq...........

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    Quote Originally Posted by *HIJR*NASEEB* View Post
    ji haan shukar hy malik ka ..... is ka matlab hy yeh ammaon ka prob hy .... jo masoom bachiyoon ko roab main rakhte hian ...lolzzzz
    Haan jani,,,,,ye ammaon ka problem hai,,,,,,,,,,

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    Gohar, iska pehla misra batao zara, "girtay hain shah-sawar hi maidaan e jung main"

    Mamin, roshnaii khatam hogayee tu mazeed lay lijyeah, aur ager roshnaee ka qeht ho tu patoon peh likh lijyeah , lakin ander ki ghutan ko bahar tu nikalna hoga na..likhtay jana hoga, werna apnay ander bikharnay wali roshnaii, dill, dimaagh aur wajood ko siyah ker de gi..

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    Gohar, iska pehla misra batao zara, "girtay hain shah-sawar hi maidaan e jung main"

    Mamin, roshnaii khatam hogayee tu mazeed lay lijyeah, aur ager roshnaee ka qeht ho tu patoon peh likh lijyeah , lakin ander ki ghutan ko bahar tu nikalna hoga na..likhtay jana hoga, werna apnay ander bikharnay wali roshnaii, dill, dimaagh aur wajood ko siyah ker de gi..

    Girtay hain shehsawar hi maidaan e jang main
    Woh tifal kiya giray ga jo ghutnoon k bal chalay

    ye hai mukamal shair....
    na roshnai ka qehat hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,na hi likhna chota hai.....haan magar mamla kuch aur hai,,,,khair janay dain.......
    kabhi kabhi ghutan sochon k naye dar bhi waa karti hai...........!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    Gohar, iska pehla misra batao zara, "girtay hain shah-sawar hi maidaan e jung main"

    Mamin, roshnaii khatam hogayee tu mazeed lay lijyeah, aur ager roshnaee ka qeht ho tu patoon peh likh lijyeah , lakin ander ki ghutan ko bahar tu nikalna hoga na..likhtay jana hoga, werna apnay ander bikharnay wali roshnaii, dill, dimaagh aur wajood ko siyah ker de gi..
    lolzzzzzzzzz
    farrukh jii ab main k sy doo jawaab mamin ny dy diya .....

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    Congratulationsssssssssssss


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    Quote Originally Posted by *HIJR*NASEEB* View Post
    lolzz haan esa hota hy , kabhi kabhi to dykhy huy khuab such ho jaaty hian , or kabhi jo dykho us ka ualat he hota hy ,,, tumhary saath kiya hua ....hahahaha
    mene khab me e dekh liya tha k mamin winner hai...personally muje b uski poem pasand thi na.....

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    Congratulationsssssssssssss

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    mubrakan mamin.....
    where is my shairing main nay b to particepate kia tha....


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    mubrakan mamin.....
    where is my shairing main nay b to particepate kia tha....



    Mera khayal hai aap ne link drop nahi kiya tha comptetion and polls main ja kar compt thread main,,,isliye baqi mods behter batain ge,,,,,!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    Mamin, congrats..mazeed likhyeah
    Amna, great effort janab, yahi kahoon ga, "muqabla tu dil e natawaan nay khoob kiya"
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
    shukriya janab...mamin jeeti me jeeti ek e baat hai,muqabla kesa......

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    plz zeest.sun k maslay pe ghor karo...wo keh ri hai usne b participate kiya tha...to uski marking q ni hui.....kya masla hua?

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    shukriya janab...mamin jeeti me jeeti ek e baat hai,muqabla kesa......



    Yup,,,,,,,,,,,,muqabla kaisa......


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    congrats ...................

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    Quote Originally Posted by zeest.sun View Post
    mubrakan mamin.....
    where is my shairing main nay b to particepate kia tha....
    janaab e mun , aap ny rules sahii sy nahen parhy thy shayad , main ny rule likha taha k agar comp k thread main aap ka link na hua to wo muqably main dakhil nahen kiya jaayga ....
    umeed hy ab aap ka mind clear ho gaya hoga ..
    khush rahey ameen

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    Quote Originally Posted by Mamin Mirza View Post
    Nahi,,,,meri ayenak ne kaam karna chor diya hai....ap dekh kar mujhe bata dain.....


    apni madad aap krein apni aenak sahi krwalein.. hum dusron ke kaam nahi kiyaa krte
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