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    Exclamation WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    assalamaualikum dostoon !!!!!
    is maah k results k saath hazir hoon ,
    is maah k results hian ..
    farrukh jii

    amna raani :8
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    to janaab is hesaab sy is maah ki jo winner hian wo hian ....


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    yeh rahi in ki is maah ki sharing ...



    عظمتوں کے خزینے۔۔۔۔اے شجرِ سایہ دار۔۔۔۔۔!!!

    زمانے کے سردو گرم سے واقف کیا مجھ کو
    دے کر فضل کا تحفہ،مجھےکندن بنایا ہے
    جہانِ علم و فیض میں مجھ کورے کاغذ کو
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    جہاں گویائی حماقت ہو
    وہاں ڈھال کر لفظوں کو خاموشی کی مالا میں
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    عظمتوں کے خزینے۔۔۔۔اے شجرِ سایہ دار
    تو سدا روشن و پُر بہار رہے
    شجرِ سایہ دار رہے

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    congrats ...................


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    dear Mamin heartly congrats!!!!!!!

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    dear Mamin heartly congrats!!!!!!!




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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    Asalam-u-alaikum

    Participants mubarakbaad qabool keren ke at least unhoN ne apni best efforts keeN.. aur Judge sahiban se mera adna sa sawal ye hai ke eik nazm jo nasri nazm honay ke naatay shayeri mein shumar nahi ki ja sakti .. kaisay na sirf shayeri ke muqablay mein shamil ki jati hai bulkay awwal bhi aati hai..? Urdu Shayeri ke taruf mein janab-e-farrukh ke lecutre#2 se eik para yahan darj ker raha hon..


    "Aazad naz’m maiN beh’r qayam rukhy jaaty hay, lakin misroon ka hum- waz’n hona zarory nahi, isliyea misroon ki sakht yuksaan nahi rehty, isliyea yeah sat’r bun jaty hai, her satar ki zakhamat mukhtalif hosakty hay. Naz’m nigary ki yeah sinf aaj kull sub say zada muqbool hay
    Nasri naz’m ko shayry tasleem nahi kiya jaskta kyoon keh yeah na waz’n peh hoty hay na behr peh, lihaza isko hum dayrah-e-shayry say nikal ker dayra-e-Nas’r nigary maiN shamil kerdaitay haiN..aur isko “Nas’r-e-lateef” kehtay haiN"

    ab nazm ki mundarja bala tareef se awwal anay wali nazm eik nasri nazm hai .. aur uska shayeri se kuch lena dena nahi .. to phir wo shayeri ke muqablay mein shamil kaisay ????

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    Main Sir Withlove ki baat se ittifaq karta hoon lekin aik buhat hi ehim baat jisse shayad aap sab nazar andaz kar rhay hain wo ye k hai mazkoora muqable main hissa lene walay 3 participants thay aur 3rd Participant theen Zeest Sahiba. Unki nazm main ne parhi thi aur uss per buhat supportive comments bhi diye thay but mujhe afsos hai k unki sharing ko results mein consider hi nahi kiya gaya.
    Zeest Sahiba ki share ki hoowi nazm ka link ye hai aur ubhon ne Nazm k title k samnay wazay taur pe COMPETITION bhi likha tha
    https://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...tition-249008/
    Meri naqis rae k mutabiq unki sharing aik behtreen nazm thi jo at least NASRI nazm nahi thi. Judges se guzarish hai k is result ko review karen. Jo acha likhte hain unki hausla shikni se bachne ka tareeqa yahi hai k hum PK k is Competitions ko shaery ki rooh k mutabiq arrange karen. Withlove ki baat k tasalsul mein ye zaroor kehna chahooN ga k shaery ki tareef per poore na utarne walay sharings ko competitions se exclude hona chahiye

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    Wa Alaikum Salam,
    Congratulations........

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    Wa Alaikum Salam,
    Congratulations........
    ​Thanks,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!!!

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    Main Sir Withlove ki baat se ittifaq karta hoon lekin aik buhat hi ehim baat jisse shayad aap sab nazar andaz kar rhay hain wo ye k hai mazkoora muqable main hissa lene walay 3 participants thay aur 3rd Participant theen Zeest Sahiba. Unki nazm main ne parhi thi aur uss per buhat supportive comments bhi diye thay but mujhe afsos hai k unki sharing ko results mein consider hi nahi kiya gaya.
    Zeest Sahiba ki share ki hoowi nazm ka link ye hai aur ubhon ne Nazm k title k samnay wazay taur pe COMPETITION bhi likha tha
    https://www.friendskorner.com/forum/f...tition-249008/
    Meri naqis rae k mutabiq unki sharing aik behtreen nazm thi jo at least NASRI nazm nahi thi. Judges se guzarish hai k is result ko review karen. Jo acha likhte hain unki hausla shikni se bachne ka tareeqa yahi hai k hum PK k is Competitions ko shaery ki rooh k mutabiq arrange karen. Withlove ki baat k tasalsul mein ye zaroor kehna chahooN ga k shaery ki tareef per poore na utarne walay sharings ko competitions se exclude hona chahiye

    ZaY
    D.B bahi kuch rules hotay hain competetion kay or rules k ander yeh bat mention hai is dafa bhi or last tyme bhi k jo shairing competetion thread mai ki jaigi wo hi qabil-e-qabool hogi to zeest sun nay us thread mai shairing nahi to wo nazar andaz hogai or iska humay afsoos nahi hai q kay rules mai yeh bat mention ki gai thi
    3rd point aapka or w.love bahi ka jo hai tto us per srf itna kehna chahoga aap log humaray senior hain mager jab competetion mai ap log jis qsm shairng hogi us kay ander behtr sharing ko muntakib kia jaiga kia aap smjhtya hain kay pehlay jab kuch or judges thay to ghazal likhi jati or aik bar mujhay winner bhi qarar dia gia mage raaj jab mai nay rules sekhay to mujhay pata chala usmai khali kyal acha tha or kuch nahi to is hisab say mujhay winner nahi tehrana chaye tha or meri entry ko nikal bahar kardena chaye tha mager asia nahi kia is wqt PK kay comp mai aisi sharing nahi horahi jo hum kahay k miyari hai to hum judges kia kre ? 2ono nazmo mai say jska khayal acha tha wo naz'm ko mai nay bazat-e-khud number ziada dia baqio k mujhay ilm nahi aap hazrat sharing bhi dekhlain ha ager koi mayari shairi hotay howay hum kisi ghair myari shairi ko select kare to ghalti tasleem kartay hain

    aap sab hazrat meray seniors hain or ager meri bato mai kuch bura laga ho to teh dil say mafi mangta ba hasyat mod mai nay apna point clear kia hai or mod members ka khadim hota hai


    meri roman kharab hai ager koi lafz idher sya udher hogia hoo to uskay liye teh dil say paishgi mafi mangta hoo

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    mohtaram Farrukh bhai (Withlove) aur Zay (DB),
    Najeh ( Raz) nay ghalibun khasi hud tuk aapkay aiteraz ka jawab de diya hay,
    us hi tasalsul main apni guzarishaat bhi kerta challoon.
    1-sub say pehlay tu muqablay kay announcement main yeah kahin derj nahi tha keh Shayry Comp main hisa lainy wali tamam entries, nasri Nazm aur nasri ghazal na hooN, lihaza unka indiraaj muqablay ki roo say qabil e qubol tha.
    2-Farrukh bhai( WL) aap ka mumnoon hoon keh aapnay meray tehreer kerda lecture ko nasirf perha bulkeh usay qoute bhi kiya. yahi nahi bulkeh 2004 main shayah "sukhanwar 5th edition" jisko ik bari adabi shaqsyat janab Mohtarma Sultana Mehr sahiba nay compile kiya tha aur usmain Mohterma nay Raqim ul huroof say yahi sawal kiya tha tu na sirf mainay Nasri Nazm aur ghazal ko berkhwast e sukhan kaha tha bulkeh inmain taba aazmaii kernay waloon say istadah bhi ki thi keh aap nasar nigari shuro kerdijyeah sukhan wari choor ker, aur us waqt meray iss interview kay jawab main North America aur Europe kay adabi hulqoon nay khassa wawela kiya tha, aur us baat per main aaj tuk qayam hoon.
    Lakin masla yeah hay kay muqablay main chunkeh Nasri Nazm qabil e qubool thi lihaza mainay naik neety say marks deiyeh, aur Mod sahiba sami (Hijr Naseeb) ko mainay keh bhi diya tha keh chunkeh yeah nasri nazm hay lihaza main 1 1 mark dono participant say hazf ker raha hoon.
    3- Zay(DB) aap ki baat say itifaaq kerta hoon janab, keh tamam participant ko masavi huq hona chahyeah lakin meray khayal main Zeest Sun kay saath tough luck kay wo apna kallam competition folder main shamil na kersakin aur mujhay MODS nay ju link diya usmain Zeest ka kallam shamil nahi tha, Zeest aap say main maufi ka khwastgaar hoon, umeed hay aap apni baraii ka muzahira kertay hue der-guzar fermain gi apnay baray bhai ko..

    ik baat main aur kehta chalooN, keh hum sub Urdu adab kay payadeh hain, is karvaan e urdu adab ko lay ker agli manziloon ki taraf rawan dawan, hum sheer o shakar hoker kiya iss karwaan ko aagay nahi berha saktay.

    Hijr Naseeb aur Raaz, yaar main ik guzarish kerna chahoon ga chaltay chaltay kay khudara Mujhay ab judging ki zimme daryoon say subukdoosh kerdo aur main FK ki intizamya say bhi istadah kerta hoon kay mujh say kum ilm ko ab aayndah kisi bhi muqablay ki judging ki zimmedary mut dijyeah ga.
    ain nawazish hogi.

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    Quote Originally Posted by raz-e-dil View Post
    D.B bahi kuch rules hotay hain competetion kay or rules k ander yeh bat mention hai is dafa bhi or last tyme bhi k jo shairing competetion thread mai ki jaigi wo hi qabil-e-qabool hogi to zeest sun nay us thread mai shairing nahi to wo nazar andaz hogai or iska humay afsoos nahi hai q kay rules mai yeh bat mention ki gai thi
    3rd point aapka or w.love bahi ka jo hai tto us per srf itna kehna chahoga aap log humaray senior hain mager jab competetion mai ap log jis qsm shairng hogi us kay ander behtr sharing ko muntakib kia jaiga kia aap smjhtya hain kay pehlay jab kuch or judges thay to ghazal likhi jati or aik bar mujhay winner bhi qarar dia gia mage raaj jab mai nay rules sekhay to mujhay pata chala usmai khali kyal acha tha or kuch nahi to is hisab say mujhay winner nahi tehrana chaye tha or meri entry ko nikal bahar kardena chaye tha mager asia nahi kia is wqt PK kay comp mai aisi sharing nahi horahi jo hum kahay k miyari hai to hum judges kia kre ? 2ono nazmo mai say jska khayal acha tha wo naz'm ko mai nay bazat-e-khud number ziada dia baqio k mujhay ilm nahi aap hazrat sharing bhi dekhlain ha ager koi mayari shairi hotay howay hum kisi ghair myari shairi ko select kare to ghalti tasleem kartay hain

    aap sab hazrat meray seniors hain or ager meri bato mai kuch bura laga ho to teh dil say mafi mangta ba hasyat mod mai nay apna point clear kia hai or mod members ka khadim hota hai


    meri roman kharab hai ager koi lafz idher sya udher hogia hoo to uskay liye teh dil say paishgi mafi mangta hoo
    Raaz Bhai, aap ka shukriya k aap ne apne muffasil jawab se nawaza. Mere Bhai, Janab Withlove billashuba Senior aur kuhna Mashq poet hain aur aik ustad bhi but main apne aap ko seniors k paaon ki dhool bhi nahi samajhta. Yahan hum kissi ki achai ya burai k liye behis nahi kar rhay hain, sirf PK ki behtari ki janib aik positive approach develop karne ki koshish hai.
    Anyway, agar comp mein mayari shaeri ke mafqood honay ki wajah se sirf achi soch hi ko faateh qarar dene ka jawaz mil jata hai to buhat achi baat hai. Allah bless U dear

    ZaY

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    mohtaram Farrukh bhai (Withlove) aur Zay (DB),
    Najeh ( Raz) nay ghalibun khasi hud tuk aapkay aiteraz ka jawab de diya hay,
    us hi tasalsul main apni guzarishaat bhi kerta challoon.
    1-sub say pehlay tu muqablay kay announcement main yeah kahin derj nahi tha keh Shayry Comp main hisa lainy wali tamam entries, nasri Nazm aur nasri ghazal na hooN, lihaza unka indiraaj muqablay ki roo say qabil e qubol tha.
    2-Farrukh bhai( WL) aap ka mumnoon hoon keh aapnay meray tehreer kerda lecture ko nasirf perha bulkeh usay qoute bhi kiya. yahi nahi bulkeh 2004 main shayah "sukhanwar 5th edition" jisko ik bari adabi shaqsyat janab Mohtarma Sultana Mehr sahiba nay compile kiya tha aur usmain Mohterma nay Raqim ul huroof say yahi sawal kiya tha tu na sirf mainay Nasri Nazm aur ghazal ko berkhwast e sukhan kaha tha bulkeh inmain taba aazmaii kernay waloon say istadah bhi ki thi keh aap nasar nigari shuro kerdijyeah sukhan wari choor ker, aur us waqt meray iss interview kay jawab main North America aur Europe kay adabi hulqoon nay khassa wawela kiya tha, aur us baat per main aaj tuk qayam hoon.
    Lakin masla yeah hay kay muqablay main chunkeh Nasri Nazm qabil e qubool thi lihaza mainay naik neety say marks deiyeh, aur Mod sahiba sami (Hijr Naseeb) ko mainay keh bhi diya tha keh chunkeh yeah nasri nazm hay lihaza main 1 1 mark dono participant say hazf ker raha hoon.
    3- Zay(DB) aap ki baat say itifaaq kerta hoon janab, keh tamam participant ko masavi huq hona chahyeah lakin meray khayal main Zeest Sun kay saath tough luck kay wo apna kallam competition folder main shamil na kersakin aur mujhay MODS nay ju link diya usmain Zeest ka kallam shamil nahi tha, Zeest aap say main maufi ka khwastgaar hoon, umeed hay aap apni baraii ka muzahira kertay hue der-guzar fermain gi apnay baray bhai ko..

    ik baat main aur kehta chalooN, keh hum sub Urdu adab kay payadeh hain, is karvaan e urdu adab ko lay ker agli manziloon ki taraf rawan dawan, hum sheer o shakar hoker kiya iss karwaan ko aagay nahi berha saktay.

    Hijr Naseeb aur Raaz, yaar main ik guzarish kerna chahoon ga chaltay chaltay kay khudara Mujhay ab judging ki zimme daryoon say subukdoosh kerdo aur main FK ki intizamya say bhi istadah kerta hoon kay mujh say kum ilm ko ab aayndah kisi bhi muqablay ki judging ki zimmedary mut dijyeah ga.
    ain nawazish hogi.

    bohut khush rahyea..abbad rahyea..kamraan rahyea..ameen
    Farrukh Bhai, Aap ki tamam baatoN se ittifaq rakhta hoon, Mera point sirf ye hai k Zeest agar link drop karna bhool gai theen to kya hamare moderators ka ye farz nahi banta k unhen proper procedure ko follow karne k liye aik PM hi kar dete. Ye to ham sab hi jante hain k Zeest ne jo sharing ki thi wo khas taur per Competition hi k liye ki thi, ab agar wo kissi bhi wajah se link drop na kar sakeen to unhen bataya to ja sakta tha, Main ne is baat ko point out bhi kiya tha but shayad zeest ko meri baat samajh hi nahi ai aur unhoN ne link wahan share nahi kiya. Meri zaati rae yahi hai k nae likhne waloN ki har tarah ki rehnumai moderators hi ko karni chahiye kyun ye section manage karna unhi ka kaam hai.
    Nawazish

    ZaY

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    Quote Originally Posted by Disturbing behaviour View Post
    Raaz Bhai, aap ka shukriya k aap ne apne muffasil jawab se nawaza. Mere Bhai, Janab Withlove billashuba Senior aur kuhna Mashq poet hain aur aik ustad bhi but main apne aap ko seniors k paaon ki dhool bhi nahi samajhta. Yahan hum kissi ki achai ya burai k liye behis nahi kar rhay hain, sirf PK ki behtari ki janib aik positive approach develop karne ki koshish hai.
    Anyway, agar comp mein mayari shaeri ke mafqood honay ki wajah se sirf achi soch hi ko faateh qarar dene ka jawaz mil jata hai to buhat achi baat hai. Allah bless U dear

    ZaY

    main ny aap sub ki baten parheen hian abhi , laiken main bas yeh poochna chahte hoon k jub kuch mention hi nahen kiya gaya k nazm likhne hy ya ghazal likhne hy ya nasri nazm likhne hy ya azaad nazm likhne hy to yeh behes q ho rahe hy , aap sub achy sy janty hian k comp main sirf yeh likha thaa k kuch bhi likho apny asatazaa ko dedicate karny k liye , to baat to waheen khatam ho gai ab behes kis baat ki , or itna isuu q baya jaaraha hy is baat ka ,agar main ny koi pabandi lagaai hote k ji nasri nazm nahen likhe jaay ge tab aap yeh baat kar sakty thy , or mayaari kalaam ki baat jo raaz ny ki hy main us sy itefaaq nahen karte , jo naya likhny waly hian or hum yeh bhe dykh rahy hain k woh mehente hian to hum yeh k sy keh sakty hian k mayaari shairy nahen hy un ki , aamna raani ho ya mamin mirza ho ya zeast sun ho hamain pata hy sub mehente hian , koi byhoda ya fazool sharings nahen hoten in logoon ki , or bilkul dono ki sharings mayaari theen esa kuch nahen hy k do ghair mayari sharings main sy aik ko jetaya gaya hy yeh baat bilkul ghalat hy , or yeh k achy khayaal ko jetaya gaya hy esa kuch nahen hy ,,, or jahaan tak rahe baat zeast sun sahiba ki to muqably main hissa lyny sy pehly hamesha rules parhy jaty hian jo k shayad unhoon ny nahen parhy , to is main mods ki koi ghalte nahen hy , yeh ghalti sarasar link share na karny waly ki hy ...or hamain afsoos hy k un ko marks na mil saky , ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Disturbing behaviour View Post
    Raaz Bhai, aap ka shukriya k aap ne apne muffasil jawab se nawaza. Mere Bhai, Janab Withlove billashuba Senior aur kuhna Mashq poet hain aur aik ustad bhi but main apne aap ko seniors k paaon ki dhool bhi nahi samajhta. Yahan hum kissi ki achai ya burai k liye behis nahi kar rhay hain, sirf PK ki behtari ki janib aik positive approach develop karne ki koshish hai.
    Anyway, agar comp mein mayari shaeri ke mafqood honay ki wajah se sirf achi soch hi ko faateh qarar dene ka jawaz mil jata hai to buhat achi baat hai. Allah bless U dear

    ZaY

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    Farrukh Bhai, Aap ki tamam baatoN se ittifaq rakhta hoon, Mera point sirf ye hai k Zeest agar link drop karna bhool gai theen to kya hamare moderators ka ye farz nahi banta k unhen proper procedure ko follow karne k liye aik PM hi kar dete. Ye to ham sab hi jante hain k Zeest ne jo sharing ki thi wo khas taur per Competition hi k liye ki thi, ab agar wo kissi bhi wajah se link drop na kar sakeen to unhen bataya to ja sakta tha, Main ne is baat ko point out bhi kiya tha but shayad zeest ko meri baat samajh hi nahi ai aur unhoN ne link wahan share nahi kiya. Meri zaati rae yahi hai k nae likhne waloN ki har tarah ki rehnumai moderators hi ko karni chahiye kyun ye section manage karna unhi ka kaam hai.
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    huzooor mera qata'n yeh maqsad nahi k mai w.love bahi ya apki bat say mutafiq nahi ho zaror hum say ghaltia hoi hai mager jab sharing aisi hogi to hum kia kare .... baqi w.love bahi waqai hamesha jo boltay hain PK k waqar or behtrei k liye boltay hain w.love bahi jab sy yaha per hai jab mai yaha aker safhay kalay karta tha mujsay bhi phelay k hain or unka ilm bhi hum sab logo say kai ziada hai to yeh bat to ho nahi skti k mai unky coments per aetraz karo ha apna point zaror de skta hoo takay jo bhi bat hai wo clear hojaye mager aetraz karna mai is jez k liye khud ko qabil nahi smjhta mayari sharing k liye huzor meray pas ideas hain jo mai next year say inshallah start karonga abhi mai filhal apni studies k waja say bht bussy hoo islye us idea per implement nahi kar paraha

    aap ki bat say zara mazrat chahoga k unho nay link post nahi ki to mods ka kam tha huzoor mods sa kam tha us surat mai ager hum waha'n rules mai yeh bat mention nahi kartay or huzoor competetion k ander rehnumai nahi hoti waha sab jez wazeh hoti hai thread mai koi sawal pochay to hum zaror bataty hain meri zati raye yeh hian zarori nahi degar hazrat bhi is bat per itefaq kare

    mai chaoga k is mamly ko meri na smjhi smjh kar maf kardia jaye or ma'mly to tool na dia jaye inshallah aisi ghalti dobara nahi hogi
    meri kisi bhi harkat say kisi member ya mery seniors ki dil azari hoi ho to teh dil say mafi ka talbgar ho meri seniors s guzarish hai meri koi bat buri lagi ho us per dant kar apna dil saf karle

    aap sab ki duao ka talib

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

    Quote Originally Posted by Disturbing behaviour View Post
    Raaz Bhai, aap ka shukriya k aap ne apne muffasil jawab se nawaza. Mere Bhai, Janab Withlove billashuba Senior aur kuhna Mashq poet hain aur aik ustad bhi but main apne aap ko seniors k paaon ki dhool bhi nahi samajhta. Yahan hum kissi ki achai ya burai k liye behis nahi kar rhay hain, sirf PK ki behtari ki janib aik positive approach develop karne ki koshish hai.
    Anyway, agar comp mein mayari shaeri ke mafqood honay ki wajah se sirf achi soch hi ko faateh qarar dene ka jawaz mil jata hai to buhat achi baat hai. Allah bless U dear

    ZaY

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    Farrukh Bhai, Aap ki tamam baatoN se ittifaq rakhta hoon, Mera point sirf ye hai k Zeest agar link drop karna bhool gai theen to kya hamare moderators ka ye farz nahi banta k unhen proper procedure ko follow karne k liye aik PM hi kar dete. Ye to ham sab hi jante hain k Zeest ne jo sharing ki thi wo khas taur per Competition hi k liye ki thi, ab agar wo kissi bhi wajah se link drop na kar sakeen to unhen bataya to ja sakta tha, Main ne is baat ko point out bhi kiya tha but shayad zeest ko meri baat samajh hi nahi ai aur unhoN ne link wahan share nahi kiya. Meri zaati rae yahi hai k nae likhne waloN ki har tarah ki rehnumai moderators hi ko karni chahiye kyun ye section manage karna unhi ka kaam hai.
    Nawazish

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    janaab zay main aap ki buhut ezzat karte hoon , isy behes na samjhey ga aap mery senior hain or mujhy bilkul bhi acha nahen lag raha aap sy behes karna , magar main itna kehna chahte hoon k zeast sun bachi nahen hian k jin ko baar baar kuch remind karaya jaay , jub sub ko yaad thaa to un ko bhi yaad rakhna chahey , ya to un ko yaad nahen raha ya unhoon ny rules hi nahen parhy jis ka afsoos hy beherhaal hum dono ko farrukh jii or mujhy ,or yeh rule banaya he is liye gaya hy ta k memberz zemedaari ka saboot dyty huy sec k rules ko yad rakhen,, esy buhut sy compitions guzry hian jin main main or raaz dhoond dhoond kar thak jaaty thy hissa lyny waloon ki sharings , is hi liye yeh rule banaya gaya hy k jub aap ko aik poora thread diya jaa raha hy to aap ko chahey k pehly aap apna kalaam us comp k thread main share karyn us k baad sec main ..

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    Re: WiNnER oF MntH OctOBEr 2011 ((poet korner)

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    huzooor mera qata'n yeh maqsad nahi k mai w.love bahi ya apki bat say mutafiq nahi ho zaror hum say ghaltia hoi hai mager jab sharing aisi hogi to hum kia kare .... baqi w.love bahi waqai hamesha jo boltay hain PK k waqar or behtrei k liye boltay hain w.love bahi jab sy yaha per hai jab mai yaha aker safhay kalay karta tha mujsay bhi phelay k hain or unka ilm bhi hum sab logo say kai ziada hai to yeh bat to ho nahi skti k mai unky coments per aetraz karo ha apna point zaror de skta hoo takay jo bhi bat hai wo clear hojaye mager aetraz karna mai is jez k liye khud ko qabil nahi smjhta mayari sharing k liye huzor meray pas ideas hain jo mai next year say inshallah start karonga abhi mai filhal apni studies k waja say bht bussy hoo islye us idea per implement nahi kar paraha

    aap ki bat say zara mazrat chahoga k unho nay link post nahi ki to mods ka kam tha huzoor mods sa kam tha us surat mai ager hum waha'n rules mai yeh bat mention nahi kartay or huzoor competetion k ander rehnumai nahi hoti waha sab jez wazeh hoti hai thread mai koi sawal pochay to hum zaror bataty hain meri zati raye yeh hian zarori nahi degar hazrat bhi is bat per itefaq kare

    mai chaoga k is mamly ko meri na smjhi smjh kar maf kardia jaye or ma'mly to tool na dia jaye inshallah aisi ghalti dobara nahi hogi
    meri kisi bhi harkat say kisi member ya mery seniors ki dil azari hoi ho to teh dil say mafi ka talbgar ho meri seniors s guzarish hai meri koi bat buri lagi ho us per dant kar apna dil saf karle

    aap sab ki duao ka talib
    Okay mere dost. It is not something personal. Aap k upcoming ideas ka intezar rahay ga

    ZaY

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    Quote Originally Posted by *HIJR*NASEEB* View Post
    janaab zay main aap ki buhut ezzat karte hoon , isy behes na samjhey ga aap mery senior hain or mujhy bilkul bhi acha nahen lag raha aap sy behes karna , magar main itna kehna chahte hoon k zeast sun bachi nahen hian k jin ko baar baar kuch remind karaya jaay , jub sub ko yaad thaa to un ko bhi yaad rakhna chahey , ya to un ko yaad nahen raha ya unhoon ny rules hi nahen parhy jis ka afsoos hy beherhaal hum dono ko farrukh jii or mujhy ,or yeh rule banaya he is liye gaya hy ta k memberz zemedaari ka saboot dyty huy sec k rules ko yad rakhen,, esy buhut sy compitions guzry hian jin main main or raaz dhoond dhoond kar thak jaaty thy hissa lyny waloon ki sharings , is hi liye yeh rule banaya gaya hy k jub aap ko aik poora thread diya jaa raha hy to aap ko chahey k pehly aap apna kalaam us comp k thread main share karyn us k baad sec main ..
    Okay Hijr, Concluded

    ZaY

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    اسلام و علیکم،




    میں نے تمام بحث پڑھی ہے، سب سے پہلی بات تو میں یہ کہنا چاہوں گا کہ جو لوگ مقابلے میں شرکت کرنے سے اجتناب کرتے ہیں انھیں معیار کا رونا رونے کا کوئی حق نہیں، کیوں کہ جب آپ کو معیار قایم کرنے کے لئے دعوت دی جاتی ہے تو آپ عذر پیش کر دیتے ہیں، جب آپ کو معیار کو پرکھنے کے لئے منصف کا مقام دیا جاتا ہے تو آپ اپنی کم علمی اور نا اہلی جیسے الفاظ استمعال کر کے کنارہ کشی اختیار کر لیتے ہیں، لیکن کہیں کسی پر اعتراض کرنا ہو تو آستینیں چڑھا کر میدان میں کود پڑتے ہیں....بھائی اگر شاعری معیاری نہیں ہے تو آئیے آگے بڑھئیے کمپٹیشن میں حصّہ لیجئے، معیاری شئیرنگ کیجئے، فورم کا وقار بڑھائیے، معیار بڑھائیے، چلیں آپ اس مقابلے کو اپنے شایان_شان نہیں سمجھتے تو پھر آیئے منصف کی کرسی سمبھالیں ، معیار قایم کیجئے، لوگوں کی اصلاح کیجئے، انھیں اپنی بیش بہا علم کی روشنی سے مستفیض کیجئے، نہیں..... وہاں تو آپ اسلام و علیکم کہہ کر رخصت ہو جاتے ہیں پھر کس منہ سے اعتراض کرنے کے لئے آتے ہیں ؟؟؟


    مقابلے کے قوانین میں ہمیشہ یہ بات واضح طور پر لکھی جاتی ہے کہ اپنی شئیرنگ کمپتشن تھریڈ میں شیر کریں، اس لئے کمپتشن میں حصّہ لینے والے کا فرض ہے کہ وہ رولز پر عمل کرے، کسی وجہہ سے اگر وہ بھول جاتا ہے تو یہ موڈز کی اخلاقی ذمداری ہے کہ وہ کمپتشن شئیرنگس کو یکجہ کریں، پھر بھی اگر کوئی رہ جائے تو موڈز مورد_الزام نہیں ٹھہرائے جا سکتے کہ اولین ذمداری خود حصّہ لینے والے کی ہے...


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    Mohtaram sahiban muafi chahta hon .. ke kuch niji masroofiyat ki bina per online na aa saka.. aaj aa ker yahan guftagoo dekhi.. to sab se pehlay to main Tifl-e-maktib sahib ka shukerGuzar hon ke jinhoN ne intehaii shaista zuban istemal ki.. mujhe unn se aisi hi umeed thi .. aur tanqeed kernay ka haq koi bhi shaks rakhta hai .. uske liye zaroori nahi ke tanqeed ya koi bhi sawal poochny se pehlay wo competition mein ya to hisa ley ya phir judge banay.. kamal hai .. kher yahan baat mayari aur gher'mayari shayeri ki ho hi nahi rahi thi .. yahan to baat ho rahi thi ke konsi shay shayeri hai aur konsi shay shayeri nahi .. mere khayal mein shayeri ke section mein ye darj kernay ki zaroorat nahi honi chahiye ke aap sirf shayeri hi share ker sakty hein.. ye baat understood hai .. alag alag sections isi liye banaye gaye hein.. nasr ke liye alag section hai .. iska matlab ye hua ke agar kal ko aap ye mention nahi kerty .. ke nazm ya ghazal likhni hai .. to main competition mein afsana bhi share ker sakta hon ?? afsanay aur nsri nazm mein eik baat common hai ke dono shayeri nahi .. to Gohar-e-nayab sahiba .. kya mera afsana competition ke liye select ker liya jaye ga ?? kya shayeri ke section mein ye baat likhna zaroori hai ke nasr share nahi ki ja sakti.. ye baat to understood hai ..

    rahi baat zeest sahiba ki .. to bilkul unheN rules follow kerny chahiye.. magar agar unheN remind kerwa diya jata.. to us mein bhi koi muzaiqa nahi tha.. magar agar unheN yaad nahi kerwaya gaya.. tab bhi theek hi hai .. is muamly mein .. main moderators ko qasoor war nahi thehrata.. magar agar moderators ya koi bhi member unheN yaad kerwa deta to achi baat thi .. jaisa ke bohat se log jab kisi aur ka kalaam poet korner mein share kerty hein.. to unheN bataya jata hai.. ke yahan sirf zati kalam share kia ja sakta hai.. kher..

    Raaz bhai.. humeN doosroN ko apnay mayar per laana hai na ke apna maayar gira ker doosray ke maayar per jana hai... khudara is baat ko samjhiye.. sharings mein wazn aur behr ka masla hai .. to aap wo reyat de rahay hein to kisi had tak theek.. magar agar eik cheez shayeri hi nahi .. to aap ussay kis baat ki reyaat de rahay hein.. meri samajh se bahir hai .. jo cheez shayeri nahi hoti nasr kehlati hai .. ye baat aap ko bhi maloom hai ..

    farrukhjii .. nasri ghazal ?? mere liye naii baat thi .. maazrat kha hon ke meri wajah se ka dil dukha .. aap ka kya sabhi ka dukha.. magar hamara junoo humeN sach baat bolnay per uksa deta hai.. aap se moadbana guzarish hai .. ke aap judge ke faraiz jari rakhiye.. main koshish keron ga ke ayenda .. mayar ki baat na keron..

    Tifl-e-maktib sahib.. inshaAllah aap bohat kuch seekh chukay hein.. aur baqiya kuch hi arsay mein seekh lein gy.. phir to shayad aap humeN jeenay bhi na dein..

    sabhi ka Shukria..

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    کوئی تعلق جو نہ ھوتا تو خفا کیوں ھوتے

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    Buhat buhat mubarak ho Mamin ji .....................

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