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    Shairi My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    Asslam O Alikum,mein aap doston ke saath apnay pehlay forum se, apni pehli ghazal share ker rahi hoon,Is umeed k saath k aap ko pasand aaye gi.Aap se darkhwast hey, k apni raaye se nawaaziye or ager islaah ka pehloo mojood ho, to nishandahi farmayein,mujhe behad khushi hogi..regards,Gul Bahar Ghazal.ghazal.jpg

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    v nice.......................

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    very nice....................

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    سب سے پہلے تو آپ کو فورم پہ خوش آمدید۔ اُمید کرتا ہوں کہ آپ کا وقت بہت اچھا گزرے گا یہاں پر ۔۔

    اچھی کاوش ہے آپ کی ۔۔۔ ماشااللہ
    آپ کی پہلی غزل پر دلی داد ۔۔

    مرا محبت سے واسطہ کیا
    مرے لئے کون سوچتا ہے

    واہ ۔۔۔۔۔۔ یہ شعر بہت پسند آیا ۔۔۔

    یونہی لکھتی رہیں

    دعا گو
    شاہین خواجہ

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    Aap ko Poet Korner main Khush'Amdeed kehti hoon

    Umeed hai Poet main Acha Azafa Sabit hon gi

    aur aap ka kalaam BUhat khoob Likha

    Likhti rahiye aur Share karti rahiye @}:-




    Kuch Khwaab Jo Na Dekhein Tu GuZra Nahin Hota .. !!




    Hum Na'Janey Kis Pa'l Main Saniha ho Jaein Gay ..


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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    Quote Originally Posted by mehar.n View Post
    v nice.......................
    Thanks Alot ... !!!

    ---------- Post added at 05:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:30 PM ----------

    Quote Originally Posted by engr58 View Post
    very nice....................
    THanks.......

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    سب سے پہلے تو آپ کو فورم پہ خوش آمدید۔ اُمید کرتا ہوں کہ آپ کا وقت بہت اچھا گزرے گا یہاں پر ۔۔

    اچھی کاوش ہے آپ کی ۔۔۔ ماشااللہ
    آپ کی پہلی غزل پر دلی داد ۔۔

    مرا محبت سے واسطہ کیا
    مرے لئے کون سوچتا ہے

    واہ ۔۔۔۔۔۔ یہ شعر بہت پسند آیا ۔۔۔

    یونہی لکھتی رہیں

    دعا گو
    شاہین خواجہ
    thank you shaheen bhai..
    You are very nice to me ..
    aap ne is qader hosla afzaai ki... thanks alot..

    Quote Originally Posted by Shab-e-Firaaq View Post
    Aap ko Poet Korner main Khush'Amdeed kehti hoon

    Umeed hai Poet main Acha Azafa Sabit hon gi

    aur aap ka kalaam BUhat khoob Likha

    Likhti rahiye aur Share karti rahiye @}:-
    thank you ...
    aap ni itni tareef ki...
    I am so haappy..

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    Assalam

    Bhut Shaandaar
    App achi likhaari hain
    app k qalam mai zor hai

    share kartay rahiyyay..........................

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    WafaiN Apni Sambhaal Rakho
    Wafa Ka Mausam Guzar Gaya Hai

    Khubsurat Ghazal. Pasand Ayi Dhair Saari Daad.

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    Thanks to all Friends...
    Thanks for you support

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    محبتوں کا زوال جیسے
    غزل کے لہجے میں رچ گیا ہے
    واہ واہ۔۔۔کس خوبصورتی اور بے ساختگی سے آپ نے اپنا نام اس شعر میں سجایا ہے۔
    مزا آگیا ہے پڑھ کر۔
    مزید کلام کا انتظار رہے گا
    شکریہ

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    welcome to you here poetcorner's forum.............subhanallah pehli kaawish hi buhat khubsurat rehi ......yunhi likti rehien sada khush rehain daad hazir hai qabool kijiye ga

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    Waalikum Asslaam

    welcome here !

    bohat hi acha likha ap ne ...............

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    khoobsurat kallam ghazal kay rachaao say muzaaen..
    waah
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

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    Re: My First Ghazal: "Mere Liye Kon Sochta hey"

    wah...achi ghazal hai....reyazet ki khushboo k sath...
    yaqeen hai...mazeed umda klam perhnay ko milega.
    shad baad rahain.

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