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    Arrow Nazm


    سال نو کی چمک
    پھراندھیرو ں میں گم ہوچکی
    سب درختو ں نے بھی
    اوڑھ لی ہے کفن سی ردا
    لو اداسی کی رت آگئی
    تری یادوں کی بارش برستی ہے پھر
    سبزے پر چار سو منجمند
    آنسوؤں کی سجی
    کہکشاں
    موت سی خامشی دیکھ کر چھاگئی
    پھر خزاں
    اور تری یاد کے نقش پا
    راستوں سے ہیں شکوہ کناں
    اور میں جان و دل کے سکوں کے لئے
    اپنے جذبوں کوخودآگہی
    کے سمندر تلے ڈھونڈ تی
    پھر رہی ہو ں, تجھےوحشی دل
    یوں بلاتا ہے جوں
    کونج بچھڑی ہو جیسے کوئی ڈار سے
    آسمانی تخیل ہے سالم مگر
    بجھ چکے میری آنکھوں میں روشن ستارے سبھی
    کیسے لکھوں قلم سے یہ میں
    سال نو
    پھرمبارک ہو تم کو صنم




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    KHooBsurat Nazm BoHat KHooooB

    sHare kArte RaHa kArein ...... !
    کہتے ہیں عشق نام کےگذرے ہیں اک بزرگ
    ہم لوگ بھی مرید اُسی سلسلے کے ہیں



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    Re: Nazm

    ​saba ji mashallah khubsurat nazam kasheed farmai hai daad qabool kijiiye

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    Buhat khoobsurat NaZm ...




    Kuch Khwaab Jo Na Dekhein Tu GuZra Nahin Hota .. !!




    Hum Na'Janey Kis Pa'l Main Saniha ho Jaein Gay ..


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    Quote Originally Posted by R oC k iN View Post
    KHooBsurat Nazm BoHat KHooooB

    sHare kArte RaHa kArein ...... !
    bohat shukriya...
    khush raheye

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    Masha ALLAH Buhat Khubsurat Nazm Likhi Hai Appne. Daad Hazir Hai.

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    array wah...kia kehnay....kia rawani hai aur kia mushkil andaaz mein aap nay nazm likhi hai..bahot pasand aaya ye andaaz
    daad qubool keejyay
    bus "koonj" waali line samajh nahin aa rahi...koonj say door ho kay parinda koi.....koonj say muraad parinda lia gya hai..ya ye koi aur lafz hai?wazahat farma deejyay

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meesam Haider View Post
    array wah...kia kehnay....kia rawani hai aur kia mushkil andaaz mein aap nay nazm likhi hai..bahot pasand aaya ye andaaz
    daad qubool keejyay
    bus "koonj" waali line samajh nahin aa rahi...koonj say door ho kay parinda koi.....koonj say muraad parinda lia gya hai..ya ye koi aur lafz hai?wazahat farma deejyay

    aap ko nazm pasand ai tah-e-dil se mamnoon hon isi tara hosla afzai kartay raheye ga.
    nazm bilkul asan si ha or aap ko agar samhj nahi ai to yaqeenan meri kotahi rahi hogi.konj say murad parinda hi ha.
    is main misal di ha ke dil us tara wehshat zada ho kar pukarta ha jaise koi parinda kisi konj se bichar jaeye or tanha rehjaeye.shyed meri is baat se aap ko ye line samhj agi hogi.
    bohat shukriya
    khush raheye
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    bhutt sari daad kabool kijiyyay..................................... baat hai boss.

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    Re: Nazm

    bohut achi nazm saba,
    aap alfaaz ka bohut khubsurat istimaal kerty hain, aur aisay alfaaz istimaal kerty hain ju ab kum kum hi istimaal hotay hain..bravo
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
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    aap ko ghazal pasand ai tah-e-dil se mamnoon hon isi tara hosla afzai kartay raheye ga.
    nazm bilkul asan si ha or aap ko agar samhj nahi ai to yaqeenan meri kotahi rahi hogi.konj say murad parinda hi ha.
    is main misal di ha ke dil us tara wehshat zada ho kar pukarta ha jaise koi parinda kisi konj se bichar jaeye or tanha rehjaeye.shyed meri is baat se aap ko ye line samhj agi hogi.
    bohat shukriya
    khush raheye
    mafhoom to aap theek akhaz kar rahi hain...laikin us mafhoom kay lyay jo aap misaal day rahi hain wo ghalat tareekay say istamaal ho rahi hai....
    koonj aik parinda hai....jo door daraaz ilaakoon ka safar karti rehti hai....baaz aokaat aisa bhi hota hai ke koi koonj apnay kabeelay say...ya kaaflay say juda ho jaati hai....aur wo tanha urti aur kurlaati rehti hai....to yahan par kisi koonj ka apnay kaaflay say allehda ho jaana istmaal karna chahiyay...na ke kisi parinday ka koonj say alehda ho jaana.....
    umeed hai jo mein baat kehnay ki koshish kar raha hoon wo aap ko samajh aa gayi hogi...baaki aap ki takhleek hai to aap ko poora ikhtyaar hai ke aap takhayyul ko jaisay likhain...laikin meri naakis rayay kay mutabik aisa ho to zyada khoobsoorat aur waazeh lagay ga....
    koi baat buri lagi ho to paishgi mazrat...aur meri rayay kay saath aap ka mutaffik hona lazmi bhi nahin hai...shukrya

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    Quote Originally Posted by aziz-qais View Post
    ​saba ji mashallah khubsurat nazam kasheed farmai hai daad qabool kijiiye
    bohat shukriya yoonhi hosla brhatay raheye ga
    khush raheye

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shab-e-Firaaq View Post
    Buhat khoobsurat NaZm ...
    bohat shukriya shab khush raho

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meesam Haider View Post
    mafhoom to aap theek akhaz kar rahi hain...laikin us mafhoom kay lyay jo aap misaal day rahi hain wo ghalat tareekay say istamaal ho rahi hai....
    koonj aik parinda hai....jo door daraaz ilaakoon ka safar karti rehti hai....baaz aokaat aisa bhi hota hai ke koi koonj apnay kabeelay say...ya kaaflay say juda ho jaati hai....aur wo tanha urti aur kurlaati rehti hai....to yahan par kisi koonj ka apnay kaaflay say allehda ho jaana istmaal karna chahiyay...na ke kisi parinday ka koonj say alehda ho jaana.....
    umeed hai jo mein baat kehnay ki koshish kar raha hoon wo aap ko samajh aa gayi hogi...baaki aap ki takhleek hai to aap ko poora ikhtyaar hai ke aap takhayyul ko jaisay likhain...laikin meri naakis rayay kay mutabik aisa ho to zyada khoobsoorat aur waazeh lagay ga....
    koi baat buri lagi ho to paishgi mazrat...aur meri rayay kay saath aap ka mutaffik hona lazmi bhi nahin hai...shukrya

    sab se pehle to main aap ki mamnoon hoon ke itni tawja or waqt aap ne meri nazm ko dia or umeed karti hoon aiynda bhi isi tara ye silsila jari rahay ga

    aap ki baat bilkul theek ha.shyed main apni baat ki wzahat theek se nahi karsaki.

    konj or qafilay wali baat samhj gai hon or us baat ka yahan main ne zikar bhi nahi kiya.

    تجھےوحشی دل
    یوں بلاتا ہے جوں
    کونج سے دور ہو کے پرندہ کوئی
    سب بھلا کر نشاں
    کھو گیا ہو کہیں
    yahan faqat judai main dil ki kafiat ko bayan karna maqsad ha
    or zarori nhi ha ke aap bhi meri baat se itifaq karain kuin ke har insan ke sochnay or samhjnay ka tareeka juda hi hota ha.magar izhar e khyal sab ka haq ha or is se ilm main izafa hi hota ha.mujhe aap ki koi baat buri nhi lagi .
    yahan mojood ustaad shura ki khidmat main faqat apni kosish paish karti rehti hon.
    or isi tara kuch na kuch seekhnay ki justjoo karti rehti hon.

    agar mera likha koi lafz aap ke dil ko takleef derha ho to maafi chahti hoon khush raheye.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ahsan Mirza View Post
    Masha ALLAH Buhat Khubsurat Nazm Likhi Hai Appne. Daad Hazir Hai.

    bohat shukriyaa nazm aap ko pasand ai...

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    bohat shukriyaa Hidden Tigger khush raheye...

    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    bohut achi nazm saba,
    aap alfaaz ka bohut khubsurat istimaal kerty hain, aur aisay alfaaz istimaal kerty hain ju ab kum kum hi istimaal hotay hain..bravo
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
    aap ki zarra nawazi ha farrukhji yonhi hosla barahtay raheyega
    khush raheye..

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    FK per ahbab ki khidmat mein musafir ka salam,
    Zehmat-e-justaju-e-rizq-e-halaal ne kuch aisa nidhaal kar rakha hay k bohat arsy tak hazri mumkin na ho pai, ayaa hu to bohat se paighamat, bohat se naik jazbat aur bohat se reza-e-haaey tafakurat ne nigahon ko ashkon se ghusal deny ki sa'aadat se mutaasif kiya, jumla ahbab ki muhabaton aur inayaat ka shukria. Mohtarma Saba ki nazam k link aaya hua tha, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, parha aur bar-e-deegar parha, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ik taazgi ka ehsas hua, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, agarchy unwan-e-kalam aur mozu-e-kalam udasi ki tarjumani kar rahy hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, phir nazam k nechy jo doston ne alfaaz ki soorat mein khuloos naamy hadiya kiye huey thy un pe bhi nazar pari, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Mohtarma Saba aur Mohtram Maisam Haider k maabain jo khubsurat guftagu jari hui us ko bhi parhny ka moqa mila, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, donon apni jaga par darust samjhy ja sakty hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, haan "koonj daar se bicharti hay" ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, "Daar" dar asal koonjon k garoh ya jamghaty ko kehty hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aur koonjein daar ki surat mein safar karti hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Mohtarma Saba ne koonj k esta'aary ko istemaal kiya aur us se juda hony wali koonj ko parindy ki soorat mein threer kiya, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, jo darust mana ja sakta hay, ,,,,,,,,,,, Qibla Maisam Haider ne jo nishandehi farmaai, ,,,,,,,,, wo bhi apni jaga wazan rakhti hay ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, k qaari ko diqqat-e-tafakur se guzarna parta hay, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mein sher-e-adab mein koi haisaiyat to nahi rakhta magar dono ahbaab ki justaju-e-sukhan fehmi ko salam paish karta hu.

    Mujh jesy kam maaya aur adab gurez bandy ki jasarat ko agar ap dost kuch baar ataa karein aur misr'ay ko kuch youn badal lein " Koonj bichri ho jesy koi daar se" to khubsurti barqrar rahy gi magar wus'at-e-mafhoon kahin aur bhi daman-e-idrak ka sawali ban paaey ga.

    Is jasarat par donon ahbaab se maafi ka khawastgaar hu.

    faqat Khaaksaar,

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    Quote Originally Posted by T@[URL="https://www.friendskorner.com/forum/member.php?u=93132"
    nha[/URL] mu$@F!r;3231479]FK per ahbab ki khidmat mein musafir ka salam,
    Zehmat-e-justaju-e-rizq-e-halaal ne kuch aisa nidhaal kar rakha hay k bohat arsy tak hazri mumkin na ho pai, ayaa hu to bohat se paighamat, bohat se naik jazbat aur bohat se reza-e-haaey tafakurat ne nigahon ko ashkon se ghusal deny ki sa'aadat se mutaasif kiya, jumla ahbab ki muhabaton aur inayaat ka shukria. Mohtarma Saba ki nazam k link aaya hua tha, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, parha aur bar-e-deegar parha, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ik taazgi ka ehsas hua, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, agarchy unwan-e-kalam aur mozu-e-kalam udasi ki tarjumani kar rahy hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, phir nazam k nechy jo doston ne alfaaz ki soorat mein khuloos naamy hadiya kiye huey thy un pe bhi nazar pari, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Mohtarma Saba aur Mohtram Maisam Haider k maabain jo khubsurat guftagu jari hui us ko bhi parhny ka moqa mila, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, donon apni jaga par darust samjhy ja sakty hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, haan "koonj daar se bicharti hay" ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, "Daar" dar asal koonjon k garoh ya jamghaty ko kehty hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aur koonjein daar ki surat mein safar karti hein, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Mohtarma Saba ne koonj k esta'aary ko istemaal kiya aur us se juda hony wali koonj ko parindy ki soorat mein threer kiya, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, jo darust mana ja sakta hay, ,,,,,,,,,,, Qibla Maisam Haider ne jo nishandehi farmaai, ,,,,,,,,, wo bhi apni jaga wazan rakhti hay ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, k qaari ko diqqat-e-tafakur se guzarna parta hay, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mein sher-e-adab mein koi haisaiyat to nahi rakhta magar dono ahbaab ki justaju-e-sukhan fehmi ko salam paish karta hu.

    Mujh jesy kam maaya aur adab gurez bandy ki jasarat ko agar ap dost kuch baar ataa karein aur misr'ay ko kuch youn badal lein " Koonj bichri ho jesy koi daar se" to khubsurti barqrar rahy gi magar wus'at-e-mafhoon kahin aur bhi daman-e-idrak ka sawali ban paaey ga.

    Is jasarat par donon ahbaab se maafi ka khawastgaar hu.

    faqat Khaaksaar,

    Tanha Musafir
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    Taweel arsay ke baad aap ki amad fk ke leye khizaan main bahar ka aik khushgawar jhonka ha.
    khushamdeed...
    bohat khushi hoi ke aap tashreef laeye or meri kawish par nigah ki or itni tafseel se tabsra bhi anyat farmaya.
    nazm ki pasanddidgi ke leye mamnon hon or aap ki paish karda tajweez bhi bohat pasand ai .. filhaal to lafz konj ki jaga Dar likh dia ha.baqi baad main ghor karti hon.
    bohat shukriya khush raheye or ab jaldi jaldi atay jatay raheye ga.
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    w salam
    Taweel arsay ke baad aap ki amad fk ke leye khizaan main bahar ka aik khushgawar jhonka ha.
    khushamdeed...
    bohat khushi hoi ke aap tashreef laeye or meri kawish par nigah ki or itni tafseel se tabsra bhi anyat farmaya.
    nazm ki pasanddidgi ke leye mamnon hon or aap ki paish karda tajweez bhi bohat pasand ai .. filhaal to lafz konj ki jaga Dar likh dia ha.baqi baad main ghor karti hon.
    bohat shukriya khush raheye or ab jaldi jaldi atay jatay raheye ga.
    Ji Saba ji.... Salam-e-aqeedat.........

    Bohat bohat shukriya, nawazish, meharbani, is na'cheese burda-e-khaak deeda-e-nam'naak say banday ko is qadar yaad rakhnay ka... Is haqeer ki janib say yeh mukhtasir sa jawab hazir-e-khidmat hay, Tafseelan kabhi phir baat ho gi, "Gar Qabool uftad Zahey izh-o-sharaf" , Jawab ka bechaini say intezaar rahay ga.............


    Shukar guzaari main darja-e-kaamil haasil karnay ki aarzoo main ye haqeer-o-naadan ap kay un qeemti haroof-e-istafsaar par apnay tamaam tar bay hangam khiyaalat ki lehron kay mafroozaat lutaana chaahtaa hai, main is ko apni intehaaeyey khush qismati samajhtaa hoon kay ap jaisi zeerak , daana, adab shanaas, adab dost, adab parwar, shukan feham, urdu shairy kay Arooz par dastgaah-e-kaamil rakhnay wali hasti mujh naacheez kay naa tarasheeda, bay rabt, bay ma'ani, bay saakhta, bay nawa, bay riya, bay rida or qadr-o-qeemat main intehaai danee haroof ki mauj-e-rawaan ko is darja tawaja say na sirf zeenat-e-kunj-e-idraak, paaband-e-basaarat, or wajh-e-mawaslat-e-haroof-0-ma'aani karnay ki fayaazana rasm jaari karti hay.....

    Saba ji lagta ha main nay koi bohat hi maa foq-al-fitrat kaam kar diya hai, ji hargiz aisa nahi hai, bas yeh to ap jaisi zeerak , daana, adab shanaas, adab dost, adab parwar, shukan feham, urdu shairy kay Arooz par dastgaah-e-kaamil rakhnay wali hasti ki hosla afzai or mukhlisana duaaein hain jihon nay farsh-e-khaak say utha kar takhiyulaat kay arsh par bitha diya, bohat khush rahiye ... sada hansti muskurati rahiye...

    DuaaoN ka talib...
    Tnha Mu$@F!r..

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    nha mu$@F!r;3232520]Ji Saba ji.... Salam-e-aqeedat.........

    Bohat bohat shukriya, nawazish, meharbani, is na'cheese burda-e-khaak deeda-e-nam'naak say banday ko is qadar yaad rakhnay ka... Is haqeer ki janib say yeh mukhtasir sa jawab hazir-e-khidmat hay, Tafseelan kabhi phir baat ho gi, "Gar Qabool uftad Zahey izh-o-sharaf" , Jawab ka bechaini say intezaar rahay ga.............


    Shukar guzaari main darja-e-kaamil haasil karnay ki aarzoo main ye haqeer-o-naadan ap kay un qeemti haroof-e-istafsaar par apnay tamaam tar bay hangam khiyaalat ki lehron kay mafroozaat lutaana chaahtaa hai, main is ko apni intehaaeyey khush qismati samajhtaa hoon kay ap jaisi zeerak , daana, adab shanaas, adab dost, adab parwar, shukan feham, urdu shairy kay Arooz par dastgaah-e-kaamil rakhnay wali hasti mujh naacheez kay naa tarasheeda, bay rabt, bay ma'ani, bay saakhta, bay nawa, bay riya, bay rida or qadr-o-qeemat main intehaai danee haroof ki mauj-e-rawaan ko is darja tawaja say na sirf zeenat-e-kunj-e-idraak, paaband-e-basaarat, or wajh-e-mawaslat-e-haroof-0-ma'aani karnay ki fayaazana rasm jaari karti hay.....

    Saba ji lagta ha main nay koi bohat hi maa foq-al-fitrat kaam kar diya hai, ji hargiz aisa nahi hai, bas yeh to ap jaisi zeerak , daana, adab shanaas, adab dost, adab parwar, shukan feham, urdu shairy kay Arooz par dastgaah-e-kaamil rakhnay wali hasti ki hosla afzai or mukhlisana duaaein hain jihon nay farsh-e-khaak say utha kar takhiyulaat kay arsh par bitha diya, bohat khush rahiye ... sada hansti muskurati rahiye...

    DuaaoN ka talib...
    [email]T@nha Mu$@F!r..
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    duaoon ke leye manoon hon or isdarja tareef o toseef ke qabil nahi hon.adna si kosish hoti ha jo sab ke sath share karleti hon.
    aap or aap se pehle Mesaum jaise mukhlis member ne meri takhleeq ki janib itni tawja di
    us ke leye aap dono ki behud mamnoon hon.or umeed rakhti hon aiynda bhi ye silsila aise hi jari rahayga.
    khush raheye or isi tara atay jatay raheye.
    aap ke taza kalam ki darkhwast ha.hum sab ke sath share kijeye.intizar rahay ga.
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    achi nuzm hai saba ji....aur is nzm k hawalay se....ahbab ki khubsuret guftgu bhi..jo yaqeenun qabile tarif hai...
    justju,izhar aur tukhleeq.....koi jurret hi hai....aur is dreechay ki roshnee mn....talib tu j'ma ho hi jatay hain....

    shad baar rahay yeh anjuman.....aur is k dmuktay sitaray.....

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    bohat bakamal aur khubsurat kalam saba!!!!weldone!!!!plz keep writing and keep sharing!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kheyal View Post
    achi nuzm hai saba ji....aur is nzm k hawalay se....ahbab ki khubsuret guftgu bhi..jo yaqeenun qabile tarif hai...
    justju,izhar aur tukhleeq.....koi jurret hi hai....aur is dreechay ki roshnee mn....talib tu j'ma ho hi jatay hain....

    shad baar rahay yeh anjuman.....aur is k dmuktay sitaray.....
    aap ko nazm pasand ai
    bohat shukriya kheyal
    ji bilkul aap ki baat se mutafiq hoon
    khush raheye

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