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    ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    assalam alekum dosto,

    musrofyaat kay baais khasay dino say kuch naya nahi likh paya tha, aaj subha yeah ghazal huii hay, aapki nazar kernay challa aya.
    aapni aara say zarror aagah kijyeah ga.
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

    آنکھوں پہ دھوپ باندھ کے صحرا تھما گیا
    یادوں کو کوئی اپنا ہی چہرہ تھما گیا

    نیزہ پہ اپنے سر کو سجا کر اک اجنبی
    مٹی کو اپنے خون کا تمغہ تھما گیا

    غربت میں تیرگی کی روایت قدیم ہے
    مانگا چراغ میں نے ، وہ سایہ تھما گیا

    برفاب ہوگیا تھا میں جذبوں کی دھوپ میں
    پھر کون دل کو تازہ ارادہ تھما گیا ؟

    لیکر وہ مجھ سے میرے تصور کی حدتیں
    میری خلش کو خام سا صدمہ تھما گیا

    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص
    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا
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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    my dear Farrukhji!! Aslam o alaikum!!!! kuch takeehr se hazir huyee mazrat .....!!!!!apni iss ghazal main app ne waqt aur halat ki sitamzareefi ka bayan bohat ahsan tareeqe se byan kiya hai jo kay apni jaga waqyee aik maharat hai ....lafzon ki husnaki main aankhon ki nami ka basaira tou shayad har jaga ho magar uss ko yun khubsurati se paish karna kisi Aala zarf ka hunar hi kehlaya jasakta hai......magar Farrukh saien yahi waqt aur halat insaan ki jhooliyan achanak khushiyon se bhi tou bhar dete hain bilkul gair mutwaqa tour par ......kahyieh yeh sach hai ke naheen ?

    bohat kamal ki koshish rahi aap ki yeh bhi ....umeed karti hoon shairy ka yeh safar yunhi kamiyabi ke sath rawan dawan rahega hamesha!!ameen
    bohat sara pyar aur duien aap ke liyeh aur aap ke piyaron ke liyeh!!!!! mola aap ko sari khushiyan aur kamibiyan naseeb kare aameen!!!!

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    wah subhanAllah bohet lajwaab ghazal share krnay ka shukria khush rehain

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص

    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا

    Very Nice

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    Shukria Bilal,
    duaon ka hamesha talib rahoon ga..
    aabad raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by ~ IShQ ~ View Post
    Wahh Wahh Kya Kehnay hiaN Janab
    Tamaam Ashaar Hi bOht Umda hiaN
    DhairoN Dhair Daad Is Zabardast Ghazal Ki Takhleeq Pey
    MOLA Aur dieN :rose


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    bohut nawazish Faseeh bhai,
    aapki rehnumaii aur tareefi kalmaat meray liyeah baais sud iftikhaar hay..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

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    وعلیکم السلام
    اچھی رہی آپ کی یہ غزل حسب سابق۔
    داد و تحسین کا نذرانہ پیش ہے، قبول کیجیے۔
    اچھی لگی ردیف بھی لیکن "ہدیہ" کا قافیہ اسکے ساتھ کچھ ایسا اچھا نہیں لگا کہ ہدیہ تو پیش کیا جاتا ہے بہت عزت بہت محبت کے ساتھ۔
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    "ہد - یہ" نہیں بلکہ "ہدی - یہ" ہے یعنی حرف "ی" مشدد ہے۔


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    thanks bhai,
    khush raho..abbad raho..ameen

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    WAH BoHat UmmmDA Kalam KHoooB

    Likhte Aur sHare kArte RaHA Karein ........ !


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    Bohut shukria Mamin,
    ab itni tareef bhi mut kijyeah, banda shermindagi mehsoos kerta hay
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Mamin Mirza View Post
    bohat haseen kalam farrukh
    bohat bohat bohat haseen................!!!


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    bohut mumnoon hoon aapka..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by mehar.n View Post
    bohat umda ghazal ,thanks for sharing.


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    bohut shukria behna..
    aabad o sukhi raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by pari girl View Post
    bht khoob bhai
    bht achi ghazal likhi hy ap ny

    thank 4 shring ........................

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    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post



    Bohut shukria Mamin,
    ab itni tareef bhi mut kijyeah, banda shermindagi mehsoos kerta hay
    aabad rahyea..ameen






    goyam mushkil wagarna goyam mushkil,

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    wah kia bat hy janab ki bohot khoobsurat jazbon ki dheemi dheemi anch dilon ko pighlaey dey rahi hy
    or phir umeed ka pur kashish sahil bhi iskey husn main izafa ker raha hy sath hi rooey zameen ki aazeem qurbani ka zikr
    uff..............
    tareef kiey bina rehna na mumkin tha
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    Bahot khoob................!



    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص
    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    bht khoob farrukh ji,

    aik khobsorat ghazal per dhairooN daad qabool kijiye...

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    Re: ~~!![ aankhoon peh dhoop baandh kay sehra thama gaya ]!!~~

    Quote Originally Posted by Adiva Afafa View Post
    ​buhat hi zabardast ghazal rahi,,, thanx for sharing with us...
    Bohut shukria Hosla berhanay kay liyeah..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

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    bohut nawazish..
    kamraan rahyeah..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by seerat123 View Post
    walaikum assalam
    very nice


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    bohut shukria behn,
    khush rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by sweet_lily View Post
    Bohat khoob.............


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    bohut mumnoon hoon janab, aapki nigah nawazi ka,
    aapkay comments ka intizaar sa rehta hay, kallam share kernay kay baad.
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by kheyal View Post
    bohot khoob janab....achay ashaar hain....
    lutf aaya perh ker.....daad qabool fermaen...
    shad baad rahain....


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    Aray bhai kyoon shermindah kiyeah deto ho, tum khud ik bohut talanted likhari ho mashallah.
    aabad raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahsan Mirza View Post
    Wahhh. Khubsurat Ashaar, Buland Khayalat. Daad Hazir Hai. Khush Rahiye.


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    Bohut Shukria Kashif,
    Aur janab ab aapki shayry ka intizaar hay be-cheni say..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by kashif amir View Post
    Assalam O Alaikum !

    Bahot Khoob Farrukh Bhayee

    Daad hazir hy. sab hi ashar behad khoobsarat hain.

    Dua ka talib.

    Kashif Amir


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    Aray Naved, kyoon itna cherha rahay ho bhai,
    bus kuch likh gaya, bs ab theek hi hay..
    khush raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Nabbas View Post
    Asalam-o-Alikum;

    Soch raha tha key tareef main kia likhoon ; kuch smhaj nahin aya tu app hi key yeh teen shair app hi ko hudya kerta hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    نیزہ پہ اپنے سر کو سجا کر اک اجنبی

    مٹی کو اپنے خون کا تمغہ تھما گیا

    غربت میں تیرگی کی روایت قدیم ہے

    مانگا چراغ میں نے ، وہ سایہ تھما گیا

    برفاب ہوگیا تھا میں جذبوں کی دھوپ میں

    پھر کون دل کو تازہ ارادہ تھما گیا ؟

    Nihayut hi umdah ghazal kahi hai app ney!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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    Thanks Behna,
    tumhary hosla afzayaan hain bus...
    aabad raho..ameen

    [quote=Durre Nayab;3403072]bohot khubsurat or umda gazal Bhaiya ji. .
    Thanxs for sharing.[/QUOzTE]

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    Uff larki sudher jao,
    itni tareef mut kiya karo kay main khushi say gool gappa hojaon, bari mushkil say fit rukht hoon khud ko bhii..
    aabad o kamran raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by GOHAR-E-NAYAAB View Post
    آنکھوں پہ دھوپ باندھ کے صحرا تھما گیا
    یادوں کو کوئی اپنا ہی چہرہ تھما گیا

    waaaaaah ...kiya he kehnay janaab-e-farrukh ....
    wesy main nay har shair do do baar parha hay haha
    magar waqai aik haseeen ghazal janaab .. awesome , mind blowing ....wah dil khush kar diya aisa likha hay ..
    mere janib sy dhair o dhiar mubarakbaad qubool kejeye is haseen takhleeq par janaab
    or jaldi jaldi likha kejeye..masroofiyat to hamesha he rehte hay
    khush rahye hamesha ameen
    kiya he likha kay ....




    آنکھوں پہ دھوپ باندھ کے صحرا تھما گیا
    یادوں کو کوئی اپنا ہی چہرہ تھما گیا

    نیزہ پہ اپنے سر کو سجا کر اک اجنبی
    مٹی کو اپنے خون کا تمغہ تھما گیا

    غربت میں تیرگی کی روایت قدیم ہے
    مانگا چراغ میں نے ، وہ سایہ تھما گیا

    برفاب ہوگیا تھا میں جذبوں کی دھوپ میں
    پھر کون دل کو تازہ ارادہ تھما گیا ؟

    لیکر وہ مجھ سے میرے تصور کی حدتیں
    میری خلش کو خام سا صدمہ تھما گیا

    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص
    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا






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    Bohut Mamnoon hoon Mano, keh aap nay ghazal perhi aur sarahi..Umdah..keh ker hi sahi

    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by minal malik View Post


    آنکھوں پہ دھوپ باندھ کے صحرا تھما گیا
    یادوں کو کوئی اپنا ہی چہرہ تھما گیا

    لیکر وہ مجھ سے میرے تصور کی حدتیں

    میری خلش کو خام سا صدمہ تھما گیا

    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص

    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا

    ........................umdah.............


    ---------- Post added at 12:28 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:28 PM ----------

    Bohut nawazish janab..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Saba View Post
    Bohat umda ghazal ha farrukhji
    dhairoon daad
    khush raheye..


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    Bohut shukria ghazal passand kernay ka..
    hamesha aabad o kamran raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Shab-e-Firaaq View Post
    Buhat Umdaah Likha Farrukh

    Khush rahiye


    ---------- Post added at 12:30 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:29 PM ----------

    Mohterma aap bhi bus, insaan ko per de dety hain, itni tareef kerty hain..
    mumnoon hoon keh aapnay waqt nikala aur ghazal perhi aur itnay khoobsurat comments say aarasta kiyea yeah thread..
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
    Quote Originally Posted by Savi Abbas View Post
    my dear Farrukhji!! Aslam o alaikum!!!! kuch takeehr se hazir huyee mazrat .....!!!!!apni iss ghazal main app ne waqt aur halat ki sitamzareefi ka bayan bohat ahsan tareeqe se byan kiya hai jo kay apni jaga waqyee aik maharat hai ....lafzon ki husnaki main aankhon ki nami ka basaira tou shayad har jaga ho magar uss ko yun khubsurati se paish karna kisi Aala zarf ka hunar hi kehlaya jasakta hai......magar Farrukh saien yahi waqt aur halat insaan ki jhooliyan achanak khushiyon se bhi tou bhar dete hain bilkul gair mutwaqa tour par ......kahyieh yeh sach hai ke naheen ?

    bohat kamal ki koshish rahi aap ki yeh bhi ....umeed karti hoon shairy ka yeh safar yunhi kamiyabi ke sath rawan dawan rahega hamesha!!ameen
    bohat sara pyar aur duien aap ke liyeh aur aap ke piyaron ke liyeh!!!!! mola aap ko sari khushiyan aur kamibiyan naseeb kare aameen!!!!


    ---------- Post added at 12:31 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:30 PM ----------

    Bohut shukria, Saima
    Khush raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by saima ramzan View Post
    wah subhanAllah bohet lajwaab ghazal share krnay ka shukria khush rehain


    ---------- Post added at 12:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:31 PM ----------

    Bohut shukria janab,
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Watcher View Post
    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص

    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا

    Very Nice


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    Nahi kahin koii mushkil nahi na goyam na wagarna goyam..
    khush raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Mamin Mirza View Post


    goyam mushkil wagarna goyam mushkil,


    ---------- Post added at 12:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:32 PM ----------

    Bohut shukria Rabia, Itnay khobsurat comments kay liyeah..
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by sohny02 View Post
    wah kia bat hy janab ki bohot khoobsurat jazbon ki dheemi dheemi anch dilon ko pighlaey dey rahi hy
    or phir umeed ka pur kashish sahil bhi iskey husn main izafa ker raha hy sath hi rooey zameen ki aazeem qurbani ka zikr
    uff..............
    tareef kiey bina rehna na mumkin tha
    (waissey log bina tag k bhi comments kerty hain
    )


    ---------- Post added at 12:34 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:33 PM ----------

    Bohut mumnoon hoon janab..
    aabad rahyea..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by BENAM View Post
    Bahot khoob................!



    فرخ چراغ آنکھوں میں رکھ کر مری وہ شخص
    کیوں گرد و پیش کو مرے کوہرا تھما گیا


    ---------- Post added at 12:35 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:34 PM ----------

    Farrukhjiiiii, Asad tum tu farrukh bhai kehtay ho, yeah farrukhjii kub say hogaya bhai
    shukria yaar, ghazal perhnay aur passand kernay ka..
    aabad o kamran raho..ameen

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifl e Maktab View Post
    bht khoob farrukh ji,

    aik khobsorat ghazal per dhairooN daad qabool kijiye...

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