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    tu asl hai , khayal hai

    اسلام و علیکم اُمید ہے آپ سب خریت سے ہونگے پھر سے چھوٹی بحر پر طبع آزماءی کی ہے



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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Raz e dil, Najjeh, Naz Jabalpori aur..................

    bhi bht umdah! ghazal hai...... daad qabool kijiye...

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by aziz-qais View Post
    wah najeeh kia baat hai khub kamal likha hai subhanallah daad qabool ho........
    bht bht shukriya sahab

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    Quote Originally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy View Post
    bOHOT KHOOB..UMDAAH...wazan ke hisaab se bhi la jawab.....
    بہت بہت شکریہ ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    ahaan buhut he khoob najeeh sahab ..
    daad qubool kejey ..
    likhty rahey
    khush rahye ameeen
    mujh sy ab shairy nahen hote
    mujhy lafzoo'n nay maar dala hay







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    Quote Originally Posted by Savi Abbas View Post
    Dear Raaz!!! jaise ke main hamesha kehti hoon ke kuch qualities God gifted hoti hain...mashallah umr ke hisaab se aap waqyee bohat mature likhte hain... log kafi salon ke baad jakar jo grip karte hain apne thoghts par aur likhne ke andaz par aap ne taraqi ke woh manzil bohat jaldi tay karli hain...mashallah!!!! yeh ghazal bhi bohat hi khubsurati liyeh huye hai...sach kehte hain ghazal mehboob se baat karne ka sab se khubsurat aur asar anagaiz way of communication hai!!!!!! thank u so much aap ne ghazal ko hum sab ke sath share kiya bohat acha laga...umeed hai app ki khubsuart nazmien bhi parhne ko miliengi!!!!! God bless you!!!!
    Apky coments hamesha meray liye hosla afza rahay hain aap k is qemti wqt jo apnay nikala or apkay qemti alfazo ka behad shukar guzar ALlah ap ko hamesha khush rakhey

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Tere Khayaal'e Husn Se
    Sukhan Bhi Pur'jamal Hai

    ishq e haqeeqi ka terjumaaN yeah sher yaqeenan tumharooy shayrana pukhtagi ka moo boolta suboot hay.
    choty behr main kahi gaii ghazal apna taa'sur choor gaii..
    mujhay hamesha aisi kaavish passand aaty hay ju kuch hut ker ho, nay'e khayalat liyeah hue, aur tum jaisay kum-umr shayr ki janib say aisi shayry yaqeenan khush aaynd amar hay..
    Urdu adab kay ik baray Mohaqiq janab Dr. Taqi Abidi sahab say mulaqat huii pichlay dinoN, aur unki baat share kernay ki jasarat ker raha hooN keh " shayry ander ki awaz aur buland khayalaaat ki tajseem ka naam hay, lafzooN ki munshi-geeri ka nahi".

    Aabad o kamran raho..ameen

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahsan Mirza View Post
    Rahay Pas'e Hijaab Ju
    Vo Husn Be'misaal Hai

    Tere Khayaal'e Husn Se
    Sukhan Bhi Pur'jamal Hai

    Bhaii..... YuN Tu Pori Ghazal Hi Shandar Hai..... Magar In Do Ashaar Ki Tu Kya Hi Baat Hai..... Baar Baar Saath Rakh Kar Parh Raha HooN DonoN Ko..... Ajeeb Lutf Hai..... Buhat Khoob!!! Aise Hi Likhte Raho..... Khush Raho.....
    Ahsan tumhara behad shukriya .. umeed hai himat afzai ka silsila jari rahega ............... hamesha khsh raho

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Pakistan~Meri~Jaan View Post
    muktasir bayhr may umda kavish.
    Likhtay raheya
    bht bht shukirya huzoor

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifl e Maktab View Post
    Raz e dil, Najjeh, Naz Jabalpori aur..................

    bhi bht umdah! ghazal hai...... daad qabool kijiye...
    huzzooor yeh andaz bht acha laga ghazal passand krnay ka shukriya

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    bht khoob raaz e dil.. achi ghazal kahi ha
    dhairoon daad qabool karo
    khush raho

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    Tere Khayaal'e Husn Se
    Sukhan Bhi Pur'jamal Hai

    ishq e haqeeqi ka terjumaaN yeah sher yaqeenan tumharooy shayrana pukhtagi ka moo boolta suboot hay.
    choty behr main kahi gaii ghazal apna taa'sur choor gaii..
    mujhay hamesha aisi kaavish passand aaty hay ju kuch hut ker ho, nay'e khayalat liyeah hue, aur tum jaisay kum-umr shayr ki janib say aisi shayry yaqeenan khush aaynd amar hay..
    Urdu adab kay ik baray Mohaqiq janab Dr. Taqi Abidi sahab say mulaqat huii pichlay dinoN, aur unki baat share kernay ki jasarat ker raha hooN keh " shayry ander ki awaz aur buland khayalaaat ki tajseem ka naam hay, lafzooN ki munshi-geeri ka nahi".

    Aabad o kamran raho..ameen
    aap ki himat afzai ka behad shukirya farukh bahi aapki hosla afzai nay hamesha kuch naya likhnay per majboor kia hia
    Dr taqi sahab nay behad sachi bat kahi or aap ka shukriya aap nay qemti alfaz hum tk puhanchaye
    khush rahye
    abad rahye

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by GOHAR-E-NAYAAB View Post
    ahaan buhut he khoob najeeh sahab ..
    daad qubool kejey ..
    likhty rahey
    khush rahye ameeen
    bht shukriya ..............................

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    واہ جناب واہ
    چھوٹی بحر صحیح معنوں میں خونِ جگر مانگتی ہے اور آپ نے تو بہت ہی خوب لکھا ہے۔
    داد قبول کریں۔

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    Re: tu asl hai , khayal hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Bilal Azam View Post
    واہ جناب واہ
    چھوٹی بحر صحیح معنوں میں خونِ جگر مانگتی ہے اور آپ نے تو بہت ہی خوب لکھا ہے۔
    داد قبول کریں۔
    bht shukriya aap ka bilal bahi

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