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    Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai

    Assalam o alaikum.. hazraat taqreeban 9 mahinay baad hazir huwa hun idhar.. kab se kuch nahi likha thaa.. abhi kal hi yeh nazm likhi hai.. khayal tou bht umdah tha.. nazm pata nai kesi hai.. aap log btayiega.. shukrya

    Dil agar tor dein tmhra,
    Kabhi hum talkh hojayen,
    Agar tmse ulajh jayen,
    Tou humse rooth jana tm,
    Bht ziada khafa hona,
    Bht ansu baha lena
    Bht bechein ho lena,
    Bht tm toot jana phir,
    Aur phir,
    Khud ko khud hi mana lena,
    Apne sab ansu chupa lena,
    Gilay shikwe nahi karna,
    Apne dukh parday mein dhak lena,
    Agar esa kabhi karlo,
    Tou tm yeh jaan jaoge,
    Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai,
    Ke apne ghum dil mein chupana kitna mushkil hai,
    Ke is haal mein bhi muskurana kitna mushkil hai,
    Agar tm esa kabhi karlo,
    Tou hum yeh maan jayenge,
    Ke tm bhi hum se hi kuch ho!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Voices View Post
    jii.. hum be-naam musafir hain.. lekin khair benam agar honge tou kyaa naam na hoga
    wo shayees bad'naam pay tha




    Kuch Khwaab Jo Na Dekhein Tu GuZra Nahin Hota .. !!




    Hum Na'Janey Kis Pa'l Main Saniha ho Jaein Gay ..


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    Quote Originally Posted by Shab-e-Firaaq View Post
    wo shayees bad'naam pay tha
    ji mjhy ilm hai .. mene apni requirements ke hisaab se badal liyaa

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    Re: Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Voices View Post
    garbar tou hai hi khayal pasnd aya iski mjy khushi hai kuz asal me i wanted to convey the khayal ..
    ab mjhy smjh nai arha tha tou distinction create krne ke liye aur phir lgadya
    hahahhaha ye "phir" ko kon keh raha hai ye to line k sath jaa raha hai ye





    'aur"perhne mei kuch theek maloom nahi hota to maine keh diya
    werna mujhe nazm wagaira ka ilm hi kahan hai bus parh leti




    When you pray for others, GOD listens to you
    and blesses them, and sometimes,
    when you are safe and happy ,
    remember that someone has prayed for you ....!!!!!


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    Re: Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai

    very nice poetry..............

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    Re: Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai

    Quote Originally Posted by Voices View Post
    ji sis you are absolutely ryt.. darasal kum waqt mein ek khayal ko shairi mein badalna thora mushkil hota hai.. sochein 15 min mein isse acha kia likhta mein khayal pasnd aya ke nahi?
    khayal top bht he zbrdst ha
    or mje ye nhi k nzm achi nhi lgi
    nzm ka shuru k jo tasalsul ha wo bht bhaya pr beech me aa k ridham k bigr jane se koh jane se wo tasalsul ghyab sa o gya to bara ajeeb lga............

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    Quote Originally Posted by little girl View Post
    khayal top bht he zbrdst ha
    or mje ye nhi k nzm achi nhi lgi
    nzm ka shuru k jo tasalsul ha wo bht bhaya pr beech me aa k ridham k bigr jane se koh jane se wo tasalsul ghyab sa o gya to bara ajeeb lga............
    ji mjhy khud bhi ilm hai ke tasalsul toota hai.. agla kalaam inshaAllah behtar karne ki koshish karunga..

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*~Raina~*~ View Post
    hahahhaha ye "phir" ko kon keh raha hai ye to line k sath jaa raha hai ye





    'aur"perhne mei kuch theek maloom nahi hota to maine keh diya
    werna mujhe nazm wagaira ka ilm hi kahan hai bus parh leti
    tanqeed krne ke liye ilm hona zaruri nai hai nazar achi honi chayeh bas..
    apki baat bilkul durust hai.. yeh aur mene 2 baar likhg kar mitaya tha aur phr wapas likh dia kynke smjh nai aya differentiate kese karun

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    Re: Ke khud ko khud se manana kitna mushkil hai

    Nazam kaisi hay wo baad main batati hoon sabsy pehly apkay concept ki baat karti hoon
    actually insaan tab tak khud kisi ka dukh nahi samjh pata jab tak khud us kaifyat sy na guzray khud ko manana or yeh sab cheezain k kaisy dusray ko hum sy taqleef hoti hay uski realization tab hogi jab same process sy guzraingay...

    concept is very nice and i think apni feelings mean it's ur personal feelings jo kay nazam main nazar ain...
    ab sachaee k saath jo khud apni feelings likhay wo nazam achi hoti hay

    very nice nazam,,keep it up,
    stay blessed!!!!...


    and thanx...








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    Quote Originally Posted by Adiva Afafa View Post
    Nazam kaisi hay wo baad main batati hoon sabsy pehly apkay concept ki baat karti hoon
    actually insaan tab tak khud kisi ka dukh nahi samjh pata jab tak khud us kaifyat sy na guzray khud ko manana or yeh sab cheezain k kaisy dusray ko hum sy taqleef hoti hay uski realization tab hogi jab same process sy guzraingay...

    concept is very nice and i think apni feelings mean it's ur personal feelings jo kay nazam main nazar ain...
    ab sachaee k saath jo khud apni feelings likhay wo nazam achi hoti hay

    very nice nazam,,keep it up,
    stay blessed!!!!...


    and thanx...
    u're right.. koi baat bi galat nahi kahi aapne

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    ws
    well written ... writer nahi hu iss liyay mistakes ka kuch kah nahi sakti
    but achi khoshish hai


    sadkay jawaan paar hath na awaa






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    wah buhat ache ................

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    wow very nice keep sharing

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    میں تو آوں گی گھر دیر سے
    ہانڈی تم خود ہی پکا لینا
    پیاز کاٹو گے تو یاد آوں گی
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    میں تو آوں گی گھر دیر سے
    ہانڈی تم خود ہی پکا لینا
    پیاز کاٹو گے تو یاد آوں گی
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    بھوک زیادہ لگ جائے اگر
    پکتی ہانڈی سے نوالہ اک دو کھا لینا
    چیک ہوجائے گا نمک مرچ بھی
    یہ پکانے کا گُر بھی پا لینا
    میں آوں گی بہت دیر سے
    انتظار نہ کرنا خود ہی کھا لینا


    مسافر کی شاعری سے متاثر ہو کر 9 سکینڈ بعد ہم نے بھی کچھ لکھ ڈالا
    Kisi Ghar gar'hastan ki Shairi lagi

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    bohut khhoob.......very nice
    thanks for shearing


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    salam...
    bhooot acha khayal tha aap ka ....
    acha laga parh kar ....

    keeep sharing us


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    very nice ............

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    Bohat umda........................

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