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    Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    Assalam...!

    Yeh meri pehli entry hai poetry images korner mein, so ager koi ghalti reh gai ho ya koi suggestion ho, jesa k color, background pic, fonts ya frames k baray main.... to pls mujhay VM/PM kerein, mujhay bahot khushi ho gi. aor Tag holders se meri ye request hai, q k main bilkul new hun yahan...
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    aor last mein Picture
    Wassalam...!



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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    very nice work bhai...acha laga

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    very nice umdaa kaam
    Best of luck








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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    Nice work!
    Best of luck for the competition.




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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    Looks very nice
    Can b a winning entry bt i think u should use some colors in the backgroud image which is B & W
    Keep up thee good work anyways

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    lovely::::superb::::::::::

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    Very nice Work ..!!

    Keep it up!..............

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    Quote Originally Posted by nazan View Post
    Looks very nice
    Can b a winning entry bt i think u should use some colors in the backgroud image which is B & W
    Keep up thee good work anyways
    Thanx for the comment and like... next time would try my best to do more better image!

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    Undoubtedly a nice presentation! Great!


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    bhai merey comments kya krein gy yahan....
    Jawaid bhai aur Sohail bhai jaisy designers hain jb yahan py to..........

    waisy BG mein aap kuch textures use krein ......... filters ka istamaal kr k creativity laa sakty hain apny designs mein.....
    frame agr aap ny khud bnaya hai to boht acha bna hai......
    baki kisi bhi kism ki koi help chahiye ho to zaroor poochein bhai.....
    aap ka kaam to start mein hi itna acha hai Masha ALLAH......
    mera start to boht hi kharaab tha ......

    Stay Blessed .......



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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Aadi~ View Post
    bhai merey comments kya krein gy yahan....
    Jawaid bhai aur Sohail bhai jaisy designers hain jb yahan py to..........

    waisy BG mein aap kuch textures use krein ......... filters ka istamaal kr k creativity laa sakty hain apny designs mein.....
    frame agr aap ny khud bnaya hai to boht acha bna hai......
    baki kisi bhi kism ki koi help chahiye ho to zaroor poochein bhai.....
    aap ka kaam to start mein hi itna acha hai Masha ALLAH......
    mera start to boht hi kharaab tha ......

    Stay Blessed .......
    hmmm,,, BG me texture use kerna chahiye tha, thora artistic look ho jati, aor thora pic ko bhi mess-up kerna chaiye tha kuch acha outcome hota... mger pic wesay ghazal k sath thematically bahot fit lag rahi thi... aor frame main ne khud nahi banaya, mger colors, gradients aor patterns waghaira khud frame pe design kiye...aor font ki blending bhi khud ki...

    overall khamiyaan zyada hain, next pic mein in details pe zyada dhehaan doun ga...!
    Aor thanxxx very much for ur kind and nice reply bro... i really appreciate it...

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    great job/ v good work..........................


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    nyc one..........

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    very nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,




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    ahmmmm beautiful.....................


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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    bht hi pyara design hai...........excellent work.....................

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    nice work....................


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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    bht umda kam kia hai aap ne but kuch cheezen hen jin per mazeed attention chahiey ...

    Framing go ke achi hai magar design k muqable men heavy lag rahi hai isi waja se text bhi kuch chota
    lag raha hai ... aap ke complete design men in cheezon ka balanced hona bht zaruri hai ...

    THE MOST IMPORTANT FACTOR .... aap ki poetry selection hoti hai jis se aap ke zoq ka pata chalta hai
    jo ke aap ne bht khoobsurat select ki hai ...

    ye hargiz zaruri nahin k aap har design men images use bhi karen ... Khasa to kalam hota hai ... jis ki presentation
    aap ne karni hoti hai apni imagination ko portray karna hota hai ...

    keep sharing ... bht shaad rahiey ...

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    Veryy nice work. keep sharing

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    Re: Ghazal by Saleem Kausar (For PIK Sep Competition)

    ?walaikum Assalam..

    its an awsome creation..but text mazeed acha hosakta tha..
    Janey kauN Nagar ki chirya
    Shaam Mundair pe aa baithi hai
    Chonch pe usi nazuk daali
    us per aik sunheri phool
    jaise ishQ safar ki Dhool....

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