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    Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga

    Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga
    Jo mit na paay aisa aser chor jaay ga

    Ay chand tujh se payar to kr lon ye theek hai
    Tu din ki roshni mein mager chor jaay ga

    Koi khuda ke wastay sooraj ko rok le
    Ye chaudwin ka chand nager chor jaay ga

    Unka tha yeh khayal keh shohda ka qaflah
    Do char gaam chal ke safar chor jaay ga

    Khanjer ko thaam ker mire maula ka naam le
    Kafer hai wo ager to badder chor jaay ga

    Lehron ne meri nao dabo di to kaya howa
    Sahil peh mujh ko koi bhanwar chor jaay ga

    De de ke bhaijhta hai usse kon mashwaray
    Phir aa ke koi tazah khaber chor jaay ga

    Karta hai jaan boojh ke katab sharartain
    Jo bhi likhe ga zer-o-zaber chor jaay ga

    Afzal tirre hi dum se hai aabad wo galli
    Tu jub nahin rahe ga wo gher chor jaay ga.

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    Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga
    buhat umda ghazal hai janab..........
    Lehron ne meri nao dabo di to kaya howa
    Sahil peh mujh ko koi bhanwar chor jaay ga

    Karta hai jaan boojh ke katab sharartain
    Jo bhi likhe ga zer-o-zaber chor jaay ga

    akhri shair to kamal hai...................

    Afzal tirre hi dum se hai aabad wo galli

    Tu jub nahin rahe ga wo gher chor jaay ga.

    aek guzarish thi agr aap urdu mein likh kr share karein to ghazal parne ka maza dobala ho jaye ga..................aage aap ki marzi
    sada khush rahein..........

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    Thanks for this favour.........God bless you.

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    Thanks for this reinforcement....In fact I was facing a problem while saving Urdu inpage gif file. Today it has been solved...now Urdu script is also available for your benign perusal. God bless you.

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    Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga
    Jo mit na paay aisa aser chor jaay ga


    bohot hi umda.....ghazal......achay ashaar hain....saadgi aur shaguftgi k sath.....zra si wazahet tlub h....matla k pehlay misray men....'kr ke who sarsari si nazar chor jay ga'.....isay ager nusr men turteeb den...'who sarsari si nzer ker ke,chor jaega'........'nzer kerna...'ya 'nzer dalna'.....mustamil kiya hai'.?....apni kum-maegi ka ehsas hai mujhay.....agr roshni dal den is per.....isi treh chothay sher kay doosray misray men....'safer chor jaega'......yani safar ka chor dena....yaqeen hai.....meri kum-ilmi ko nzer andaz krengay.....slamet rahain....apnay kalam sey.... maani aafrini k is sfer men hum sub ko shamil rkhengay....

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    Re: Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga

    Quote Originally Posted by faypal View Post
    Thanks for this favour.........God bless you.

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    Thanks for this reinforcement....In fact I was facing a problem while saving Urdu inpage gif file. Today it has been solved...now Urdu script is also available for your benign perusal. God bless you.
    ye hoi na baat ...................
    main tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon ke aap ne meri guzarish ko bila takheer is qadr ahmiyat di.................
    sada khush rahein............khush rakhein

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    Esteemed brother! Aap ka mamnoon hon...aap ne matlah ki baat ki aur jo pinpoint kiya main us ki kaya wazahat karon...quite simple aur self-evident misrah hai. Nazar dalne ka matlab daikha hota hai jubkeh mera is misre mein sirf daikhna mafhoom nahin hai balkeh alluring and ephemeral response of the person on the other side which may perpetuate my woes hai. Takhleeq ka matlab hi new words, new thoughts, new phrases and new contextual meanings ko wajood daina hai. Jis language mein elasticity na ho wo ya to dead hoti hai ya dead ho jati hai. Mustamil kiya hai ki wazahat upne hi ik sher se karna chahon ga....

    Ussi din kaat le gi hai mere gher mein chuppi demuk
    Tujhe main ne jo aangun mein lagaya bhi kaya ho ga.
    Is sher per aik dost ne aap ki tarah wazahat talub kr li. Wajah ye thi keh aaj tak demak ke sath lazf katna nahin laga balkeh chatna istamaal kiya jata hai. Wo mehrbaan upni jagah per sahi farma rahe the aur mein bhi janta tha keh demuk chati hai kaat'ti nahin....laikun mein kuch azafi meanings laina chahta tha. Is misre mein lafz kaat lagane ka maqsad ye zahir karna tha keh deemuk inti taizi se chate gi jaise us ne isko kaat diya hai. Issi ka naam poetry hota hai. Ub ye parhne wale per munhasir hai keh wo lafz kaat ka contextual meaning samjhe. Jahan tak phrase safer ka taalaq hai us ki bhi kai contextual associations hain.Tafseel mein jaoun to baat lambi ho jaay gi.God bless you.

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    Re: Kr ke wo sarsari si nazar chor jaay ga

    really beautiful poetic Creation!!!!! bohat sari daad qabool farmayeh itni achi aur umda takhleeq par!!!! keep sharing keep writing
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    Buhaat Umdaah Afzal

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    khush rahiye ..




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    buhut hi khoob janaab ...khush rahye ..dua ki taalib(GOHAR).
    mujh sy ab shairy nahen hote
    mujhy lafzoo'n nay maar dala hay







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