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    Woh jo bujh gaye sh'be-yaad men.....

    Aziz sathyun k naam......ek Ghazal.............KHEYAL

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    very nice thanks for sharing.

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    خیال صاحب
    ماشاءاللہ بہت عمدہ ۔۔۔۔۔۔
    ڈھیروں داد قبول فرمائیں ۔۔۔۔

    ستاروں والا کلام ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔


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    Esteemed brother! Aik kboobsoorat aur her laihaaz se complete ghazal per meri taraf se dhairon daad qabool farmaain.Yaqeenan yeh ghazal Urdu adab ka qabl-e-tareef hissah banne gi. Aankhon ne koshish ki keh kahin se koi sorakh nazer aae laikun aik lafz bhi upni jagah se nahin sirka....Aap ki hausalah afzaai kaisse karon...bas yehi kahon ga....great....great and really great. God bless you.
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    Awesome sharing...........
    keep it up .......

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    Wah kia baat hai

    Buhat khoobsurat

    Khush Rahiye




    Kuch Khwaab Jo Na Dekhein Tu GuZra Nahin Hota .. !!




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    Bht Khuuub !!

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    very nice thanks for sharing.
    bohot shukriya....mehar ji.....slamet rahain....

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    Aah ...kiya sitam,...yadoon Kay azaab,...masoom sa dil,....kisi ko chahy zaroorat NA ho phir bhi wafa Kay raasty py gaamzan hooslay..

    wah ma sha Allah ....kaafi arsy baad guzar hua or aik haseen takhleeq dil ko khush kar gai ..daad hazir hay is haseen takhleeq par ..
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    Quote Originally Posted by loneliness4ever View Post
    خیال صاحب
    ماشاءاللہ بہت عمدہ ۔۔۔۔۔۔
    ڈھیروں داد قبول فرمائیں ۔۔۔۔

    ستاروں والا کلام ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔
    bohot shukriya janab......etni mahabbaton k liye......slamet rahain.....

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    Esteemed brother! Aik kboobsoorat aur her laihaaz se complete ghazal per meri taraf se dhairon daad qabool farmaain.Yaqeenan yeh ghazal Urdu adab ka qabl-e-tareef hissah banne gi. Aankhon ne koshish ki keh kahin se koi sorakh nazer aae laikun aik lafz bhi upni jagah se nahin sirka....Aap ki hausalah afzaai kaisse karon...bas yehi kahon ga....great....great and really great. God bless you.
    bohot shukriya.....Afzal saheb...! Aap ki qeemti ara aur izhar ki dilk'shee k liye......yeh kalam hi hai.....koi hurf-e-aakhir nahin......gunjaesh tu hmesha rehti hai.....aap ki raye ko bohot ehtram sey dekha.....aur sumjha.......khushi howi......slamet rahain....

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    Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh chuuuuuuuuu mashallah!!! Dear Khayl aap tou ghazal ke maidaan ke bhi pakkay khilari nikle mashallah!!! ...greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt creative thoughts!!! truely dil ko choo lene wala kalam!!!! i loved ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttthank youuuuuuuuuuuuu so much for sharing ...heartly blessingsssssssssssssssssssssssssssskeep it upppppppppppppppppppp

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    Awesome sharing...........
    keep it up .......
    bohot shukriya.....resham ji....slamet rahain...

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    یہی چشم بھر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر
    یہی چشم بھر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر
    یہی چشم بھر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر

    واہ واہ واہ واہ خیال صاحب۔۔۔۔۔۔کیا کمال غزل کہی ہے۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔ایک تو مضامین آپ کے جو ہمیں ہمیشہ ہی پسند آتے ہیں اس پر بحر بھی ہماری سب سے پسندیدہ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔کیا خوب اشعار نکالے ہیں آپ نے بہت سی داد۔۔۔۔میرے خیال سے آج دوسری غزل پڑھی ہے آپ کی ورنہ صرف نظمات کا ہی شرف حاصل رہا ہے ہمیں
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    Wah kia baat hai

    Buhat khoobsurat

    Khush Rahiye
    bohot shukriya.....Shbe-Firaq.....aap ki haazri aur....jwab k liye.....slamet rahain....

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    bohot shukriya...........

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    wahhh..MASHALLAH bohat umda ghazal hy khyal
    dhairoon daad qabool ijeye
    likhtay raheye
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    Aah ...kiya sitam,...yadoon Kay azaab,...masoom sa dil,....kisi ko chahy zaroorat NA ho phir bhi wafa Kay raasty py gaamzan hooslay..

    wah ma sha Allah ....kaafi arsy baad guzar hua or aik haseen takhleeq dil ko khush kar gai ..daad hazir hay is haseen takhleeq par ..
    dua ki taalib (GOHAR)

    bohot shukriya.....Gohar ji....kafi dinon per haazri howi hai.....PC per....kai acha likhnay walay.....ab kum kum nzer aatay hain.....apni apni musroofyet.....mausamon k taqazay......ji haan.....kbhi lehjay men bhi zird mauausm uter aatay hain......aur Ghazal......tu ek wasee kainat hai.....izhar k saray rung.....aur munzer.....aati raha krain......aur bohot sara khush rahain.....hmesha.

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    wa wa wa gee, very nice work

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    Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh chuuuuuuuuu mashallah!!! Dear Khayl aap tou ghazal ke maidaan ke bhi pakkay khilari nikle mashallah!!! ...greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt creative thoughts!!! truely dil ko choo lene wala kalam!!!! i loved ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttthank youuuuuuuuuuuuu so much for sharing ...heartly blessingsssssssssssssssssssssssssssskeep it upppppppppppppppppppp
    Savi ji.....aap tu rwish rwish.....phool sa khila deti hain.....nahin janab.....! koi bhi aisi baat nahin.....bus koshish rehti hai.....aur aap sub ki doaen hain.....ksi taur koi munzer samnay aa jata hai......sdaa.....shad rahain......aabad rahain....

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    چشمِ تر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر
    چشمِ تر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر
    چشمِ تر میری حسرتیں۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔یہی رتجگے ہیں عزیز تر

    واہ واہ واہ واہ خیال صاحب۔۔۔۔۔۔کیا کمال غزل کہی ہے۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔ایک تو مضامین آپ کے جو ہمیں ہمیشہ ہی پسند آتے ہیں اس پر بحر بھی ہماری سب سے پسندیدہ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔کیا خوب اشعار نکالے ہیں آپ نے بہت سی داد۔۔۔۔میرے خیال سے آج دوسری غزل پڑھی ہے آپ کی ورنہ صرف نظمات کا ہی شرف حاصل رہا ہے ہمیں
    bohot nwazish.....Asad saheb..!...aap ki haazri k liye......aap ney 'chushm-ter'......per kafi zor diya hai.....aap ko yaqeen hai k typing ki ghulti hai.....aisa bilkul bhi nahain......yeh...'chushm bher' hi hai......note ker len......who tu bohot purani terkeeb hai......slamet rahain...

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    Bohut khoob
    Bohut acha likha hay
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