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    Dear DB!!!aik baar phir aap ka aik aur sachiyon aur haqeeqaton bhara khubsurat kalam parhne ko mila,aap ki shairy ki yahi khubsurati hamesha rahi hai ke apne ird gird hoti nainsafi par aap ka qalam beqarar hojata hai aur aise kalam janam lete hain...... ,,,wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep coming and keep sharingggggggggg your lovely poetryyyy!!!!!!
    May God bless youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    bohat shukriaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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    بہت عمدہ غزل ہے ۔۔

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    Brother ap bahut acha likhte hain.Meri taraf se daad qabool farmaain. Yahan aik aadh shair per kuch apni raay ka izhar karta chalon...Doosra shair theek sahi laikun mazid dilkashi chahta hai. Pehle misra daar se bachne ki tamana ker raha hai aur doosre misray mein sajati hai ka istamaal paradox paida ker raha hai. yahan ager nachati hai ya issi tarah ka koi aur lafz lag jata to ziyada acha lagta. Aik aur baat kehta chalon....Apne bachon ko khud jo khati hai...is misray mein lafz"khud" redundant (izaafi)maloom hota hai. Ager khud ko nikal diya jaay to phir bhi mafhoom wazeh hai keh bala jo upne bachon ko khati hai. khud ki jagah koi aur maani khaiz lafz laga ker shair mein mazid nikhar paida kiya ja sakta hai jis tarah apka matlah kamaal ka hai. bahut dil khush howa apki ghazal parh ker. Issi tarah likhte rahain. Ap ke liey duaain.
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    Re: ~''~&amp;gt;||&amp;lt; PhooL SeHRaoN MeiN KhiLaaTi Hai &amp;gt;||&amp;lt;~''~

    Quote Originally Posted by Savi Abbas View Post
    Dear DB!!!aik baar phir aap ka aik aur sachiyon aur haqeeqaton bhara khubsurat kalam parhne ko mila,aap ki shairy ki yahi khubsurati hamesha rahi hai ke apne ird gird hoti nainsafi par aap ka qalam beqarar hojata hai aur aise kalam janam lete hain...... ,,,wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep coming and keep sharingggggggggg your lovely poetryyyy!!!!!!
    May God bless youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    bohat shukriaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    Dear Savi. Aap ki itni pazeerai k liye aap ka buhat mamnoon hoon

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    Salamati ho aap per janab

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    Quote Originally Posted by faypal View Post
    Brother ap bahut acha likhte hain.Meri taraf se daad qabool farmaain. Yahan aik aadh shair per kuch apni raay ka izhar karta chalon...Doosra shair theek sahi laikun mazid dilkashi chahta hai. Pehle misra daar se bachne ki tamana ker raha hai aur doosre misray mein sajati hai ka istamaal paradox paida ker raha hai. yahan ager nachati hai ya issi tarah ka koi aur lafz lag jata to ziyada acha lagta. Aik aur baat kehta chalon....Apne bachon ko khud jo khati hai...is misray mein lafz"khud" redundant (izaafi)maloom hota hai. Ager khud ko nikal diya jaay to phir bhi mafhoom wazeh hai keh bala jo upne bachon ko khati hai. khud ki jagah koi aur maani khaiz lafz laga ker shair mein mazid nikhar paida kiya ja sakta hai jis tarah apka matlah kamaal ka hai. bahut dil khush howa apki ghazal parh ker. Issi tarah likhte rahain. Ap ke liey duaain.
    Janab meri adna si kawish ko is darja pazeerai bakhshne k liye buhat mamnoon hoon. Aap ne jis janib ishara kiya hai wo waqai is ghazal ki khoobsurati barhane ki simth aik acha iqdam hoga. Khush rahiye janab.

    ZaY

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