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    Koi apna,koi paraya, ho jata hai

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    behtreen takleeq ................


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    Buhat Achay

    Khush Rahiye ..




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    behtreen takleeq ................

    bohot shukriya janab.......slamet rahain...

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    Gaye dinon ki baharain ...tooti hui yadoon ki kirchiyaan ...be sab'r dil ki khushfehmiyaan ...aik chehra jo kabhi dhundlaaya na ja saky...wo dard ki shiddat jisy sambhala na ja saky ....wo muhabbat ho jhutlaai na ja saky...ajeeb manazir jo apnay aap main kai fasaanay samaity huy hain ...

    umDa takhleeq pr daad qubool karen ..
    Baaz takhaleeq hote sada hain ...magar kahen dil kay kisi goshy ko chu jate hayn ...wo hi takhleqaat ki jeet hua karte hay...khush rahen ameen.
    mujh sy ab shairy nahen hote
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    khoooob ji v khoooooooooob.......................


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    Buhat Achay

    Khush Rahiye ..

    mumnoon hoon......S.F. ji.....
    shadab rahain.....

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    kiya baat hai khyal!!! jane khahn se chun chun kar lafzon ki, tashbeehat ki khubsurat maalaien le kar aate hain aap!!! ghazal aap kafi arsay main likhte hain magar jab bhi likhte hain rooh main uss ki madhurta jane kitne arsay tak mehsoos hoti hai!!!! shayad Dukh bhi kaheen apne anjaam tak pohchne ke baad musawiron ki khubsurat tasweeron ki tarahn shahkaaron main dhal jate hain!!!!! similarly like this ghazal!!!!! bohat hi khubsurat ghazal very rhythmic !!! thanks a lot for sharing
    May God bless you my dear!!! keep sharing!!!

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    کترنیں روح کی آؤ کے ,سمیٹیں فرخ
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gohar-e-Nayaab View Post
    Gaye dinon ki baharain ...tooti hui yadoon ki kirchiyaan ...be sab'r dil ki khushfehmiyaan ...aik chehra jo kabhi dhundlaaya na ja saky...wo dard ki shiddat jisy sambhala na ja saky ....wo muhabbat ho jhutlaai na ja saky...ajeeb manazir jo apnay aap main kai fasaanay samaity huy hain ...

    umDa takhleeq pr daad qubool karen ..
    Baaz takhaleeq hote sada hain ...magar kahen dil kay kisi goshy ko chu jate hayn ...wo hi takhleqaat ki jeet hua karte hay...khush rahen ameen.
    khubsuret tubsara........reshum,phool,chandni aur saye ka munzer'nama........
    kiya hi khoob.........log.....ab bhi phoolon ki trf dekhtay hain........aur doobtay suruj ki trf bhi......khaab.......jo hmen......kinaray ki trf bolatay hain......aur yaqeen ka e'aada bhi .....
    ager sayel,khush'gumanai na krain.......tu gulyan weeran na ho jaen.......phir tu ksi derwazay per dustuk na ho....


    bohot shukriya.....Gohar ji....salamet rahain...

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    khoooob ji v khoooooooooob.......................
    bohot shukriya........zeest.....!
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    kiya baat hai khyal!!! jane khahn se chun chun kar lafzon ki, tashbeehat ki khubsurat maalaien le kar aate hain aap!!! ghazal aap kafi arsay main likhte hain magar jab bhi likhte hain rooh main uss ki madhurta jane kitne arsay tak mehsoos hoti hai!!!! shayad Dukh bhi kaheen apne anjaam tak pohchne ke baad musawiron ki khubsurat tasweeron ki tarahn shahkaaron main dhal jate hain!!!!! similarly like this ghazal!!!!! bohat hi khubsurat ghazal very rhythmic !!! thanks a lot for sharing
    May God bless you my dear!!! keep sharing!!!
    kbhi hurf bhi kum per jaya kertay hain......ya kaheen kho jatay hain.....
    ekhteyar kisay hasil hai.......aur aankhon ki zuban....munzer ka saray zae'qoon sey aashna ho.......yeh mojza bhi .....kum kum hi howa kerta hai.....
    kafi takheer sey jawab dey raha hoon.......maazret k saath.......yeh bhi koi saneha hi hai.......chehron k sath......nuzren bhi bdulnay lugti hain.....

    mumnoon hoon......Savi ji.....!
    sada abad rahain.....

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    Re: Koi apna,koi paraya, ho jata hai

    kya kehnay hain huzoor..
    khubsurat aur baseerat afrooz sochoon ki lehr der lehr kari main piroii huii ghazal bohut achi lagi.
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen
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    bohat khoobsurat kalam
    dhairoon daad qabool kijeye.
    duain.





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    Re: Koi apna,koi paraya, ho jata hai

    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    kya kehnay hain huzoor..
    khubsurat aur baseerat afrooz sochoon ki lehr der lehr kari main piroii huii ghazal bohut achi lagi.
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

    bohot shukriya.....janabe-aali.....!
    aap ki mahabbaton aur pazeerai k liye.....
    sda shad baad rahain......


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    Quote Originally Posted by farrukhjii View Post
    kya kehnay hain huzoor..
    khubsurat aur baseerat afrooz sochoon ki lehr der lehr kari main piroii huii ghazal bohut achi lagi.
    aabad o kamran rahyea..ameen

    bohot shukriya.....janabe-aali.....!
    aap ki mahabbaton aur pazeerai k liye.....
    sda shad baad rahain......

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